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visinE, you replied to my open battle challenge and told me to post up in 30 minutes. I did, and you never showed. Now the thread's a couple pages back. I'll set up a new thread for us, but go check in ASAP.

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I'll penetrate ya armor so you heard the chink/
You subject of hate far more than Murda Inc./
Fingers tremblin', this bitch just to scurred to think/
This singer's Embelum, Explicit bust a blur of ink/
My spit attack ya eyes, that's visinE's pride/
So I Lift back ya lies, and then i seen cries/
Dis-stress calls for help, ya chest's hardly in health/
The rest is largely yaself, ya punches is far from felt/
2nd guessin' your shit you slatin' recollectin' your spit/
Weapons Dressin you bitch you shakin' like epeleptic kids/
i rep the fifth, from the barrel of a gun to address ya spit/
who you messin' wit? chi-town bitch!, look your best is ripped/
shook cuz your vest is chipped, took cuz i got a Western Hip/
Magnum equipped, rock the bells bitch? I Rang'um quick/
Now i'll bang his chick, think u thourough well my fangs is thick/
Listin' to dat Clangin' shit, the chrome bangin' while i hang this bitch/
5-7? no hate, thas prolly your hieght but wiat, how old are you eight?/
Battlin' me we'll get ya age and losses the same, i'm not one for crossin' a name/
searchin' for the cross in this plain, might as well toss the flame, you lost in this game/
I've cautioned the fame, i'm off'in ya maime, you'll need a seperate coffin for brains/

sorry for the free post

jus think of it as an upin for Ex verse

vote this battle while you wait

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9225#post959225

peace

through my keystyled wisdom,i can defeat you easily,
by my wordplay and diction,this battles labeled unevenly*
Flawless im the Immortal God of Olympus

Explict will shorten every sentence,you construct
cause i give limits to speak like a murder trial defendent
you couldnt be praised with repentence,ya soul replinished and baptised
my words terrorize ya ass,before you were chastized
you couldnt capitalize if i went first and presented my illest verse,
even if i gave you my own words and a month to practice and rehearse.

I keep my lyricals casual when testin non competitors
before this battle ya health was normal,now ya hearbeat's irregular
your so femine, you couldnt strike fear in senior citizens
ya content is on the level of a retarded militant simpleton
vise's blood dripped carnage after hung by a helicopter harness
usually within my keystyle recitals,i take heart conditions vital til suicidal,
and rip real audio vinyls on emcees who like to be named after disastrous titles

from my originality,i dissect emcees cranial cavities,hold you over a balcany
with lotioned hands,so i claim an accident when they trial me*
with the capacity,i spit metaphors that will lift ya body with out the force of gravity
and u couldnt BEAT me,if i stood bondaged,and u received 7 counts of assault and a battery
i spill out rhymes that combine within nano seconds,
that hit ya mid section wit Tekken combo connections before u have a chance to draw ya weapon
only when i battle you,it's seems like i show perfection,
but it's not ya fault,that ya genetic traits placed you with a birth defection
im pretty sure your young,so there's probably room for correction,
cause after this battle,it will be obvious that you chose the wrong profession.

sorry for the long verse i was in a bad mood and vise just happen to land on my lap............................................... ..................................

opener-XP
closer-XP
multis-Visine
metas-XP
wordplay-XP
flow-Visine
punches-XP
personals-Visine

nice spit by both its Xp, Really nice spit for your first time on RB there Visine...keep up the good personals

thanks for you time and your vote dawg...appriciate it................................................ .................................................. .............

Ex took this one~

Structure-Ex
Flow-Ex
Multis-visine
Punches-Ex
Creativty-Ex
Overall-EX

NICE BATTLE ~

EX got this, he had harder punches, and visine's structure was all fucked up. But visine did have an aight flow, and ok punches. Just EX's complexity outshined him fav line nice flow to it good diss. Word, take a peek at my battles and vote please. outzzz

Xp had it hard
V your verse was aight elevate more but overall as your first battle it was not to bad

open XP
flow XP
personals V
structre XP
close XP

overall poll vote goes to XP

peace and keep up the good work both of you

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