10 LINES MAX
NO FEEDING ETC
30 MINS TO SPIT AFTA CHECK IN
BLIND SPIT
GOOD LUCK

EXPLAINED VOTES WILL ONLY COUNT PZ

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B.I.Detained, get ya brains left all over the hood on my Range/
Your life is framed, and now your gurl I'll be takin' in exchange/
Ya whole world raped and dis-engauged, no ecscape'n the chains/
Like a masked caper insane, rob you and go straight to da train/
No time to be statin' ya name, your first L?...I'm stakin' my claim/
I Don't mistake you for lame, thas just the nature of your game/
Hatred and shame, I'm breakin' your fame, you take me for tame/
You da man? that blatant insane, make you shake from my name/
Earth-Quake ya terrain, step to me now my gat werk statin' you slain/
Change ya name, Re-Arrange the same, and show you NEVER will I. B. Detained/

Keyed Blah!!!!
Wordplay--those who know vote--those who dont,dont

got no material on you...maybe this type of nylon is easily sonned
...only time ya feel good w/ happy days is wen ya filling the Fonz
can't you see I'm Ad-visin you...which is quit while ya still Down...
Town on ya bitch...see Hairy situations are wot you end in Clown
left dazed in certain circles(ava)...even b4 I put fingers to Keys...
..E said I'd be a BlowOver...made this hoe get down on 2 Knees
..I Propose a toast a chump that didn't make it to 100 posts...
...but like Most he got Embaressed N Hid in a Mode called Ghost
no doubt i can predict when i can come w/Heat or spit Lame...
...but the difference between us is that you think its the Same

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Opener-Vis
Punches-BI
Flow-BI
Wordplay-B.I
Vocab-Tie
Structure-...probably Vis
Closer-Vis( I liked the I.B Detained Part)
Overall-Vis 4-3... Feedback in My Sig Please

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good battle here

punches - tie
wordplay - tie
personals - V
structure - B
creativity - tie
enjoyability - tie
vocab/complexity - V

overall - close battle.........but V merked.........

-pace-
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i dont know full seems like a tie im going wit visine on this one very close batttle though just dont know how to put my finger on it