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12-06-03, 03:19 AM | #1 | |||||||
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To Be
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I am
which means I'll be but that's a question can't you see? to be or not to be for me it's to be if I choose to live but then here no others will be because the can't live with me and if alone ill be does it mean i'm made of steel and if i'm made of steel why i still want to be to be found and to be seen don't le them see what it means to be me and if they would me then I couldn't be because they'll be instead of me so am I selfish to choose to be or to let others be but still not with me the circle is closed I see
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12-06-03, 01:41 PM | #2 | |||||||
Str8 From CopKilla Queens
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this waws a sweet little poem, i felt that constantly using be and me got repetitive but at the same time still gave u the full effect of the poem, and the ending is charming, 1luv.
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