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Verses Are Due: Friday 12/12/03

Put Up Or Shut The Fuck Up & Get The Fuck Out!!!!!

Hi.



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dez might get dickriders, wont win w/ heat though...
cuz skill-wise his whole careers gone incognito
ur overrated, say you're dope, the rumor was he lied
cuz you get no laughs.. but you could humorous and die
any crew im in is iller than yours, your text is boring still..
cuz said truthfully, word perfect wise my origins ill
& ever since he entered battle we smelled shit
simply stated. .
Wackness: dezyir's way of being rebellious. .
gets him into fits of rage, his alias's stay yelling shit
& his dezyir to have my baxter d. wall is irrelivence. .
^ kill you with one line. . the merkings no surprise
he pushes away from dopeness so much they're polarized
they love my text. . ur left in tantrums, extend ur hatred
you lost so much self-worth u need to be renovated. .

Get out the tourney. .

wouldve posted earlier but i was out partying..

and am thus forced to rush to make the deadline..

as a result, the end product is not what it should be.

Evolve, please dont have these be due on Friday or Saturday..




call me Mike, Iron...cuz im about to KO FM in round one
great Minds think alike..that makes Feeble similar to...
...well.....no one.
FM's so dumb, I set the bar higher and he started to limbo
minscule..unimportant..its good that Feebles Back..
no 1 noticed u left though
it just goes to show..i stomp homos in flocks or herds
makin this faggot Beg For Mercy..like the new G-Unit record
Mind goes unheard..while voters scream 'DEZ IS THE VICTOR'
my mission is to eliminate the Feeble..just call me Hitler
yeah, i know its filler..heh, im just doin this for kicks..
I keep my eyes straight on the prize..while Feeble are..
like this...:wacky:
why so personal Kid? I thought it was me you admired..
i get it..jealous homo..mad cuz it wasnt YOU who i cybered

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97920

the Wacky line should look like this..

Feeble's Verse

dez might get dickriders, wont win w/ heat though...
cuz skill-wise his whole careers gone incognito

Good

ur overrated, say you're dope, the rumor was he lied
cuz you get no laughs.. but you could humorous and die

LoL, nice

any crew im in is iller than yours, your text is boring still..
cuz said truthfully, word perfect wise my origins ill

Eh...not feelin it

& ever since he entered battle we smelled shit
simply stated. .
Wackness: dezyir's way of being rebellious. .

Okay

gets him into fits of rage, his alias's stay yelling shit
& his dezyir to have my baxter d. wall is irrelivence. .

Nice name flip...Not A Real Hard Hitting Punch Though

^ kill you with one line. . the merkings no surprise
he pushes away from dopeness so much they're polarized

lmao

they love my text. . ur left in tantrums, extend ur hatred
you lost so much self-worth u need to be renovated. .

Decent

Dez's Verse

call me Mike, Iron...cuz im about to KO FM in round one
great Minds think alike..that makes Feeble similar to...
...well.....no one.

Okay

FM's so dumb, I set the bar higher and he started to limbo
minscule..unimportant..its good that Feebles Back..
no 1 noticed u left though

Nice

it just goes to show..i stomp homos in flocks or herds
makin this faggot Beg For Mercy..like the new G-Unit record

Could use better wording, but not bad..didn't like the build up too much either.

Mind goes unheard..while voters scream 'DEZ IS THE VICTOR'
my mission is to eliminate the Feeble..just call me Hitler

Fuck you, I'm Jewish........not really though, lol. nice punch.

yeah, i know its filler..heh, im just doin this for kicks..
I keep my eyes straight on the prize..while Feeble are..
like this...:wacky:

lol

why so personal Kid? I thought it was me you admired..
i get it..jealous homo..mad cuz it wasnt YOU who i cybered

Funny thread, not a great closer though

Gah...really close battle. Both of you are even in pretty much ever category. Feeble has a little bit better structure/flow to his though. Seems he might have just edged it in punches too. Extremely close battle, good reads.

Vote ~ Feeble, by a poppy seed.

dez might get dickriders, wont win w/ heat though...
cuz skill-wise his whole careers gone incognito

^Nice opener

ur overrated, say you're dope, the rumor was he lied
cuz you get no laughs.. but you could humorous and die

^Tight punch

any crew im in is iller than yours, your text is boring still..
cuz said truthfully, word perfect wise my origins ill

^Whatever clever

& ever since he entered battle we smelled shit
simply stated. .
Wackness: dezyir's way of being rebellious. .

^HAHAHA I liked that line, funny.

gets him into fits of rage, his alias's stay yelling shit
& his dezyir to have my baxter d. wall is irrelivence. .

^Its Ight.

^ kill you with one line. . the merkings no surprise
he pushes away from dopeness so much they're polarized

^Lol

they love my text. . ur left in tantrums, extend ur hatred
you lost so much self-worth u need to be renovated. .

^Nice closer....

Your vocab. is alot more extended than Dez, yet perfectly understandable. Ya flow ran smooth, nothing run-on or chopped. Your punches were nothing I seen really played. All-round nice verse... .. .






call me Mike, Iron...cuz im about to KO FM in round one
great Minds think alike..that makes Feeble similar to...
...well.....no one.

^Lol Made me tickle, Nice opener...

FM's so dumb, I set the bar higher and he started to limbo
minscule..unimportant..its good that Feebles Back..
no 1 noticed u left though

^LMAO!!!!.....

it just goes to show..i stomp homos in flocks or herds
makin this faggot Beg For Mercy..like the new G-Unit record

^Blah, its ight...Youll hear that in Frontlines soon.

Mind goes unheard..while voters scream 'DEZ IS THE VICTOR'
my mission is to eliminate the Feeble..just call me Hitler

^Dam, thats harsh, yet we all know u aint got that much balls to say that in a crowd...Tight though

yeah, i know its filler..heh, im just doin this for kicks..
I keep my eyes straight on the prize..while Feeble are..
like this...:wacky:

^Lol it was Ight..

why so personal Kid? I thought it was me you admired..
i get it..jealous homo..mad cuz it wasnt YOU who i cybered

^LOL, Nice Closered...

Well, It was a very close battle, and a good one. If I had to choose it would be Dez, for being more enjoyable. Yet respect for both, cause I know yall both got skills, waiting for a rematch soon and one of yall going against Me...

Dez wins from the hairs of my chin-n-chin...

vote: Dez....
i just felt that his punches just connected...
and hit harder...and since i dont know much....
about any of you..i can't decide on personals....
but i can say that ya'll both stayed consistent through out...
both of ya'lls verses...and feeble ur verse was...
decent dont get me wrong...i just felt that Dez pulled it off...
in one of the closest battles in the tourney so far...
good battle peeps...WeRd Up..but my vote goes to Dez...
for a overall better verse...

Gh05t!

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Feebs wins by the hairs on my scrotum....

This was close damn.......I'm cool with both of you but I liked FM's punches better, clever and hard hitting he gets the win in my eyes werd to big berd

dez might get dickriders, wont win w/ heat though...
cuz skill-wise his whole careers gone incognito
6/10....decent
ur overrated, say you're dope, the rumor was he lied
cuz you get no laughs.. but you could humorous and die
8/10....dope
any crew im in is iller than yours, your text is boring still..
cuz said truthfully, word perfect wise my origins ill
6/10...decent wordplay
& ever since he entered battle we smelled shit
simply stated. .
Wackness: dezyir's way of being rebellious. .
5/10...too basic
gets him into fits of rage, his alias's stay yelling shit
& his dezyir to have my baxter d. wall is irrelivence. .
6/10....nice wordplay
^ kill you with one line. . the merkings no surprise
he pushes away from dopeness so much they're polarized
7/10....nice punch
they love my text. . ur left in tantrums, extend ur hatred
you lost so much self-worth u need to be renovated. .
5/10....weak closer

43/70=61.4%

call me Mike, Iron...cuz im about to KO FM in round one
great Minds think alike..that makes Feeble similar to...
...well.....no one.
5/10....meh
FM's so dumb, I set the bar higher and he started to limbo
minscule..unimportant..its good that Feebles Back..
no 1 noticed u left though
7/10....good personal
it just goes to show..i stomp homos in flocks or herds
makin this faggot Beg For Mercy..like the new G-Unit record
4/10....could of been bitten from a newbie
Mind goes unheard..while voters scream 'DEZ IS THE VICTOR'
my mission is to eliminate the Feeble..just call me Hitler
7/10....good
yeah, i know its filler..heh, im just doin this for kicks..
I keep my eyes straight on the prize..while Feeble are..
like this...:wacky:
5/10....meh
why so personal Kid? I thought it was me you admired..
i get it..jealous homo..mad cuz it wasnt YOU who i cybered
8/10....funny, nice closer

36/60=60%

This was close as fuck, but feeble takes it by a pube with an overall better verse

Vote - Feeble

wow.. i appreciate the votes guys, but the rules said that everyone is supposed to vote on every battle.. i went and voted on all of them that showed, and most of these kids havent. Im just mad because we only have five votes, when we should have 20 plus. something needs to be done about this.

werd. . thats gay. . me and dez voted fair on yalls battles do the same here. nice battle dez.