pieces i dropped feedback on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97441

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3808#post973808

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3816#post973816


Believe what you want to, but his is a small look into my life.............


early, as far as i can remember
my house was poor, but my youthfull mind was rich,
each day, my mother being teared, apart bit by bit,
by the man who she loved, my so called 'step father'
he abused her most days, each time took 1 'step farther'
3 brothers and a sister, by this man, no relation of me,
but after everything, i look out for them, no hate i see,
hoping that every, day my dad, would arrive back,
to see me, and stop all the verbal assalts an attacks,
but i've never set my eyes on this coward knowingly,
or since, my mum moved out, seen any of them willingly,

care
high school, 1st year, another blow, as i moved nto care,
told it was for the best, i would be treated good and fair,
confused in a home substituted by some woman my mother,
moved very far away from, my sister and three brothers,
a placement breakdown, was what i achieved at fourteen,
into a childrens home i was moved, so fast my views wernt seen,

now
present day, still in care my lodgings are barely supported,
at times felt, treated like a puppet, my views never quoted,
truth comes out now, all my life, are what lies i've recieved,
by the social services, and my family i've been decieved,
reasons changed, things have been brought into new light,
feels like i've wasted, the most precious time of my life,
i still have love the woman that brought me to this world,
who suffered and endeered to have 3 boys an a little girl,
but i wish, there was times when i could of openen my emotions,
and raps the only true way, inside i can justify my motions.

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