Sorry, set it up wrong in the other one....
10-25 lines
No Crew
No Hate
No DR
You Spit first
Verse is due by Thursday or earlier

10 lines only....
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Aight Im checkin in... Im at school though so it might be a bit weak and shit... not enough time to do this...

Aight check it....

MC 8-0-8... u aint nothin great....
U and ur rhyme reapers do nothin but hate
U probably feed off ur opponents lines....
Elite Group? Shit, ur flows have prewritten rhymes
U dont use ~ <that as much when its all original
U send tha message that u suck.. all meta-phorical.. (ly...)
Ur a youngin tryina act all tough.... Over tha net...
If u knew me in real life-U'll-be-sorry-we-met...
7 and 5.... thats really fuckin pitiful....
Skillz, why u pit me against sumthin ridicule...

Gotta run... peace.

Sorry fo such a long delay.....My fault....Well here it is:

*Marchin: "Left, Left, Left Right Left", "Soldiers...Left Face!*
*Puiny bitches...Listen Up, yo master has somethin to say:"*

My flesh flows at it's best wit my bones potent to battle till my death/
Compressed wit my sneakers, hood gear, and mic cuz Rhyme Reapers I represent/
DS will never come close to my presence he's still a fem hiding in his nest/
His rate's middle weight but gives a newbie spit thinkin he's a threat/
I never thought that when gay cocks die, they gotta place to rest/
But when I found out bout 666 Hell drive, DS proven his point leavin me "convinced"/
Attention Lyrical Soldiers...yall must obey my orders/
Yo white flag's in tha air, face it, this match is over/
808 that's right, remember it, write it down, take a picture/
Never forget it jus like how I didn't forget yo momma's number/

*"I Smell Pussy, Mus be tha soldiers. Get rid of it. It smell's horrible." "Left, Left, Left-Right-Left*

pretty good battle but heres the break down

Flow:Tie
Punches:Tie
Creativity, Vocab:MC 808
Multies Metasd Mc 808
Open Close:Tie
Overall: Mc 808

Both good verses but i think mc 808 just hit harder...could you both drop an honest vote on my battle against Lm...it is being slept on hardcore thanks and props to both of you

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

it wont lemme poll vote...i'll try again tomorrow.....sorry guys.............................................. .......................................

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

808 took this, other guy? that was fuckin whack...got dam!

Ur a youngin tryina act all tough.... Over tha net...
If u knew me in real life-U'll-be-sorry-we-met...

.....sheesh

V/808

K-Wait, lemme transfer this to a new thread so yall can poll vote to it. Sorry. .................................................. .................................................. .....................

Happ E thoughts... I aint see u battle anyone... and plus I had to type that shit fast like i stated bfore... learn to read man. peace.

half of 808's shit didnt even rhyme, toguth but but cuz of the non rhyme shit i have to give it to deadlyspita otherwise it'd have been 808's but i didnt feel it, not eneoguh flow

vote on this shit VVVV
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...15&pagenumber=1 and this shit

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=98386

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I have like a ton of votes on this but the fag I'm against doesn't want to loose so he keeps reporting them as d/r's or something so I'm down to 2. So just give me back my rightful votes.

Blend Vs. Kasper

Flow:Tie
Punches:Tie
Creativity, Vocab:MC 808
Multies Metasd Mc 808
Open Close:Tie
Overall: Mc 808
next time take more time no matter if u have 2 go home and post dead was wack mc wins vote 4 my battle