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Old 12-10-03, 11:45 AM   #1
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[Fair Trade.]

IP: F353 17E4

Some Work for Little, While others do Little for Work
Bones Become Brittle, Then their backs Cripple Worse
Unwanted Torture, Yet Mumbles haven't Tore-Chores
Debated actions outcomes to Not help, with More For
For More, Scoured Laws Don't give them Enough Help
The rich has the Decision, Visions to Buff their Wealth
Has Derision to Stuff the Health of Innocent Children
Govermenst Have & Now been saying we ' Will Then '
You Kill Men, Starve Kids, Then act like they Par | Dial
False connection, Conception Like Eminem Laid | Rap
I Say That, Becuase your minipulated and Not Aware
If you see the Efforts Cheap you would Stop n' Stare
Hairs Shocked, Scares Proped like Jodie Marsh Boob
Big Harsh News, Its Real that many people are Killed
Through the Lack of Appeal so they can Scarp a Meal
They're From where Food From thats on Your Tongue
That One Swallow, The crumb that follows in the Gum
Would Stop them Dying in heat thats Got them Frying
Like your Chips Cooking, Let Alone, The Trips Booking
They have to arrange, To get little money, Fo' the Kids
To be poorly educated, Surely dedicated in Mo' to Live

So help them, Seriously.
They want to be helped, You must Help.
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Old 12-10-03, 11:48 AM   #2
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it was a ok piece vocab was good multi's ok flow ok punch ight wordplay ok over all 6/10
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Old 12-10-03, 12:22 PM   #3
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yeah good piece i thought.......good flow going....some nice internals n metas...good to see more complexity, the last couple i read lacked....flow was on point yeah good drop....pZ......
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Old 12-10-03, 06:50 PM   #4
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links, homie, links
I will reply to this when you drop them
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