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goodluck!

good luck to you

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it's a horror son, it's the creases in ya verse i feel sorrow for//
said he'll strike while the irons hot, then he aksed to borrow one//
im running this bitch. ur horrible, wack and u suck @ this shit//
there isnt just a shadow of doubt, it's a fucking eclipse//
wreck ya verses.... verbal's split in 2.. it's ya spleen imma sever//
so start 'pulling your weight', after you've pull ur self together//
fallin fag... imma fuck your gurl but it isnt all that ba//d
then eat out of yer Pam, but i'm not talking hands//
your thoughtless, blank, ill take every vote even ya rosters//
its over ya numbers up n im talkin bout your losses//

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3-0 TKO


first to 4 wins

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your freestyling is fearless despite the open efforts
cover your ears cuz this cats flow's like a broken record
my flow run ova ur rhymes like a drunk runnin a red light your ass got hit now your eyes blead-bright
If Winning was Dirty, your records is Clean Glass,
and ya punchlines more Outdated"than Dreamcast
you love to bother folks, ya call-out is a straight provoke,
Beat me? Kid you Talk More Shit than when my Anus Spoke
Bust gats? Bitch you only "BUST CAPS" like ya "Keyboard Broken"!
you couldn't be high as me even if you had the KroniK that i was smokin

opener:tie
closer:red eyes
punches:red eyes
structure:tie
vocab:tie
wordplay:verbal
overall:red eyes

aiight, not a very strong battle, some nice potential thought.

aiight

plz hit the battle in my sig up.

peace

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Opener - Verbal Sikkness
Wordplay - Verbal Sikkness
Structure - red Eyes
Metaphors - Verbal Sikkness
Vocabulary - Verbal Sikkness
Closer - Red Eyes
Creativity - Verbal Sikkness

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