I have a hard time keeping my structure consistent and it is really frustrating becuz i feel i have a hot flow and the only thing that i get back in critique is that my structure was off. plz help because i really want to elavate thank you all alot, pz and luv.

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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17
16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish