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12-13-03, 05:49 PM
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{.Nc.} False Hope ft/Edicius
IP: CEA5 B505
west - Fears ft. Edicius
Bash - [ - Bash Is Back - ] Masta C - Corrupted Visions: Club Rollin (Feat: Gene Pool) ----------------------------------------------------------- [Rhytmic] The Rage n’ Emotion Ready To Blow... My Confidence Has Hit A All Time Low... So? Who The Fuck Am I To Complain... Hidden Pain, Deep Underground Goin’ Insane... All My Efforts Are Goin’ Down The Drain... Erroneous Memories I Continue To Retain... But Again I’m Left To Cry Alone... I Can hear My Broken Heart Gravely Moan... Just Wish We Could Have Known Each Other-... Better, I Wanted You A Friend, A Lover... Now I Feel Like Taking My Suicidal Thoughts Further... A Rope, No Fuck It A Destructive ‘Mac... The Fact Of The Matter Is That I’m Trapped... Inside A Loser Who has To Turn To Rap-... To Display Emotions Fuck This Shits Wacked... But Folk Don’t Know My Emotional Provoke... I’m Living A Lie, Living For False Hope... [Rhytmic - Hook] The Story Of False Hope... Girl How Do You Expect Me To Cope... How Can I Continue...? When All I Do Is Think About You... [Edicius] The fear of rejection, promoted ur affection on my hope.. by a selection of a few moments, striked me a bloke.. I was stunned by ur words feld like i was gunned, why?? is failure writtin all over this situation, its making me cry! The fact is allready stated while im stating this painfull fact! misinterpretation resulted into a deflation of my self respect. Hope was an option, as we spoke on the phone.. we we're discussing, about why u wont come home Back with me, and me back into your heart.. lets drop all what happend..and start with a fresh start.. [Rhytmic - Hook] The Story Of False Hope... Girl How Do You Expect Me To Cope... How Can I Continue...? When All I Do Is Think About You... |
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12-13-03, 06:16 PM
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IP: 224F DCB8
althought the subject matter was one not often touched on, the lack of multis or vocab with either emcee really stood out here, the hook was pretty horrible and there was no imagery to speak of.
in short: elavate. go and listen to some of the vets or report to the emergency centre or something. |
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12-13-03, 06:32 PM
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Eddy.
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IP: FF40 570D
^Go fuck urself, ..
Up^
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12-13-03, 07:16 PM
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IP: 0363 C8E2
the flow was alcking in this the concept was cool the way it was flipped coulda been better the overall content was decent rhyme schemes were nice-1
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12-13-03, 07:21 PM
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IP: F6A7 C8B2
that was nice
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12-14-03, 08:21 AM
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IP: CEA5 B505
i'm tryin' different styles n' shit...aww well, failed..l0l
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12-14-03, 08:39 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 64C2 D7B2
this was an ok drop...the flow was just alright but it was a good topic, ok rhyme scheme....overll ok drop...
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12-14-03, 01:32 PM
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Banned
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IP: BD18 BFF7
it was ok not to interesting
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12-14-03, 01:52 PM
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IP: CEA5 B505
^love these critical n' detailed comments^
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12-14-03, 05:23 PM
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Eddy.
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IP: FF40 570D
^Werd..im in W.block tho , but this aint bad..
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