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i’m gifted verbally spittin, herbally lifted, lyrically merlin the magician
serial renditions of murederous henchmen presented in each sentence
was listed as a derpraved lunatic i use to spit tied down to a crucifix
and the pain was only barable, and thats because i became use to it
removed a day before easter i still remember the smell of stored ether
As the preacher began to deliver his speach in that trance which
is similar to the way we recieved the mistified ten commandments
i was there with moses that day and it seems you’ve got it all wrong
i lit that fuckin bush ablaze when i seen moses come scurring along
As i was holding three rock scripts i was afraid my words wouldn’t live on
in a potent rage i broke the most celestal and important one third of the psalm
sitting on the throne of egypt i command an army of horrific parapalegics
barely a secret anymore i now bury legions of creatons and whores
And below all those holy churches where they are set free to explore
in all it’s worth the arc was mine i built it in a week when i was bored
at the same time i gave Eve my double edged sword and two fruits
All this time, after nine months of bitching Eve gave birth to our son zeus
So now i not only conrol the clouded vision of your religious canopy
i’m am also shrouded in the secret world of make believe and fantasy
where teridactyls fly by and gliding high in the snowy top mountains
and petite little angels sing and dance, frolic naked in great fountains
so face it, i’m counting on seeing the amazing brave men who doubt him

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lol...sneeky fucka.(links).......i though this was slightly better than the last of yours a read....i would still work on the structure though..and complexity.......jus keep at it......pZ.....

yo ur first 3 lines were some of the hottest i ever heard keep up the great work

nice drop man. honestly, it was difficult to understand. but it was
still nice. keep up the good work. nice flow and great vocab.
prolly had great meaning to it. i just couldn't sense it. but
overall, props, its tight. keep it real.
peACE