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Old 12-14-03, 02:50 AM   #1
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song title "embarassed".......ft. wyla......



leave feedback...............

appreciate it..........


pz...........................

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Old 12-14-03, 04:49 AM   #2
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pretty nice shit... flow was on point... nice beat... beat is a lil low though.. u should have turned ur voice down a lil....
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Old 12-15-03, 12:41 AM   #3
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uppin for more feedback............................
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Old 12-15-03, 08:56 PM   #4
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uppin.................uppin
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Old 12-15-03, 09:28 PM   #5
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shyt is nice,lyrics are ight,beat is coo,wordplay is there,pressence was good,overall 8.5/10 drop up tha quality a lil cuzin holla back return tha favor
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Old 12-18-03, 12:34 PM   #6
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uppin.............

please

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Old 12-18-03, 12:50 PM   #7
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ill critique as soon as you hit me up with feedback.
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Old 12-18-03, 12:59 PM   #8
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stop sleepin

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Old 12-18-03, 03:42 PM   #9
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quality of instrumental is bad... your vocals are mixed kind of high. flow is coo. i think ya style is coo.......... ya lyrics is nice.
overall nice track.
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Old 12-18-03, 04:24 PM   #10
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First off...turn the beat up alot...you sound like this underground rapper SLUG...peep some songs by Atmosphere..ya lyrics are real nice...i cant really critique ya flow cause i can really hear the beat....delivary is nice i guess..
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Old 12-19-03, 12:15 AM   #11
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I really do own, St. Pete

But I`ll Critique in a minute . .
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Old 12-19-03, 02:14 PM   #12
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Old 12-21-03, 05:38 PM   #13
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no you dont own st.pete



uppin this
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Old 12-23-03, 04:38 AM   #14
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uppin this.............


peep the song embarassed...........


"a girl i knew" is a rough draft................

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Old 12-23-03, 08:37 AM   #15
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yo this is straight, beat is low, but everybody told you already, ima tell you that this shit is coo.i fucks w/ it.....peep mines aight?
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