commented on rockwilda potent and methodz

Hook:
Whats hip hop? Now days just whack-
While the underground cats-
spit the shit the mainstream spits crap-
Whats rap? What we need to bring back-
So lets attack-revive the old boom bap-
taken control of the map-
show the world we will adapt from adaps.

Verse 1:
I was born shortly after the game-
When jive was live and gave birth to slang.
In the time of pumas and adida fits-freestyles and sugar hill spits.
I would equip my brain with clips-so I could defend this shit.
Turn the hands when my brain was set to this plan-
Was right before wu tang when krs served mc shan.
Now when im rocken it-I bring fakes apocolypse-
Ripping so many heads……..
I could turn the cities of the dead to a metropolis.
See Im married to my rhymes this shit aint entertainment-
It’s a life…so when I propose battle I fallow the rules of engage~ment.
I breath life to rap by yours being extract-
My music is rated “breath taking” on every track.
I SNAP CRACK these weaks- over BREAK beats-
and leave you deceased-when my spit released.
You get served in 5 words… kill, murder, and rest in peace.
There’s 360 ways to leave your body to decay mines verbally-
With wordplay displayed as a criminal charge …mines 1st degree.
Now a days these guys is small fries they only appetize-
The fans…. I satify but stay hungry..
oddly they get fed then I that’s what I advertise.
Nobody want to dick ride im supersized-at least the legth is-
Im a dick head that puts condomn companies out of buissness.
My shit been blazing at this point im now scorchen-
While your styles broke…and couldn’t buy a vowel on the wheel of fortune.
From RUN DMC to B.D.P, RAKIM AND ERIC B-
to every true m.c.-fakes wanna b’s get …dismantles by the rap vandel-
beating me wont happen like pagans cyphering freestyles for the Christian channel.
Im like this –when I get pist-turn any mic lord atheist-
When I rip him even his fans will think god don’t exsist.
When I battle rappers forfeit to submission-
I cant be stopped…if your herd I lost chances are I was lip sinken my compition.
Man listen….im deranged a pyro when I spit flames-
Match your dimes with mines you get loose changed.
Yeah he like me but the difference is I aint no biter-
Im me…the kid rap for block my freestyles are street ciphers.



Hook:
Whats hip hop? Now days just whack-
While the underground cats-
spit the shit the mainstream spits crap-
Whats rap? What we need to bring back-
So lets attack-revive the old boom bap-
taken control of the map-
show the world we will adapt from adaps.

good drop.....some nice word play n multis n shit.....liked the idea....and executed with power.....pZ twin

thanks twin uppin this

good drop mayn, you had some incredible wordplay and very tight ryhme scheme, i liekd the way you over came this topic you hit hard well done

if you could hit my battle up thats in my sig that'd be appreciated or my open mic thanks

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Good Job On This Piece...Definitley Had The Flow Of A Blackstar (Mos Def/Talib Kweli) Piece...Hook Was Nice and Very True...I Enjoyed Reading This ...You Came Hard And Was On Topic

Peace

THANKS TWIN I APRECIATE IT

Hmmm.... jus a couple a thingz bro.... 1 why such a long verse U should've spilt it ta make 2 even though I like ur flow, metaz n' shytz...2. I disagree that all rap artist today are wack and fake...ya gotta learn how ta let go of tha past ma nigg...dat aside overall I thought it was str8 fyre.....peace!!

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This was pretty dope.. you had pretty good wordplay and your flow was on point.. I enjoyed this read... Keep droppin.

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yea...no prob jus pm me when U get on-line and we'll "take it" from there....peace!!

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