you no the rules lets make it happen
you spit first

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ok one minute please.....................


let me clear my mind and focus............. and dont go any where cuz

july 28 1985 a bitch was born/ur pops should of jacked off too his favorite porn/ instead he decided to let one lose/ he didnt know the result would be so obtuse/ maybe thats why yo momz decided to hang from that nuse/ there she hung swinging neck like a goose/ hot rod just look at yo name?/ the only votes you'll get is from gay ass men/ so run tell yo crew that you just lost/ i gave you advice for free but next time its gonna cost/so dont spit about how you kill verses/ n da hardest state we caught you wearin pink purses

check me out


You Want a Refund For Your Style? Well, Here's a Penny-Back../
This Kid THinks He's a Magician Bcuz He Can Suck Sperm Outta Jimmy-Hats/

Try To Give me Dap.. And I'll Laugh.. Bcuz Fags Can't Touch-Me../
Ur Just a Musky Krusty Clown That Gets Hunted Down In Kentucky/

Take a Hundred Rounds From the Pound If You're Lucky...Bitch/
But Right Now.. Ur Child's Play Like R. Kelly's Girl Suckin On Chucky's Dick/

Get Bucked-Wit-Six Bcuz You Only Fuck Wit The Ugly-Chicks/
I'll Have Your Mom Complainin About a Torn ass and a Bloody-Clit/

How U Like That Muddy-Ditch? Don't Even Talk Like U Know-Hot Rod
The only way you gone win is also with the mercy of god/

This ISn't a Fuckin' Battle.. This is A Verse That Has Work To Do/
If I Was Your Father, I woulda Put a Gun To Your Head While Your Mom Was Givin' Birth To You/

since I'm about to leave I'm About To Hit This BOZO So hard He'll Walk Off Wit a Busted-Jaw/
Look At His Nickname.. Hahah, I Bet Insane CLOWN Posse Fucked Him RAW/


Bitch

let the votes begin
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Rule 5 - no unexplained votes
-Axe

yur cliches are funny but yull need more than that/ im just scatchin the surface so laugh about Matt/ did i hurt hot rods feelings and have him pull gats/ but yo words dont mean shit and gunz you own none/ fool yo dumb ass aint old enough to even purchase one/ kentucky was lucky what a good guess/ but you was short on one fact I had my balls on yo moms chest/ dick down her throat and i held her head steady/ i yelled GET BACK MAN I DONT THINK U READY!/ your punches are slow remedial in fact/ hot rod wan beef so i'll give him a slab/ he just mad cause he found out that it was his girl i stabbed/ asshole ripped needs stiched quick/ ran threw the bitch wit me 8in dick/ got my jaw fixed while you was out/ ICP never fucked me raw that was yo mom/ so get yo facts right before battlein me/ but i forgot you just a young ass mc

Rule 5 - no unexplained votes
-Axe

uppin fa votes
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opener: Tie
closer: Rod
punches; Rod
structure: Rod
wordplay: Tie
vocab: Tie
overall: Rod


aiight nice battle,
rod hit harder with his punches,
dillon, you need to switch up your structure!!

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hotrod took this with ease...
reasons:
nice opener....harder punches....better flow.....good use of multis
favourite line...
If I Was Your Father, I woulda Put a Gun To Your Head While Your Mom Was Givin' Birth To You/

dope line.....

stay up playa.......................peace

thanks man i like the comments
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aight matt when you type your shit up like that it pisses poeple off and they dont want to read it. Hott rod came better pritty simple on bolth GET BETTER NOW!!!

Vote Hott Rod

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