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Old 12-15-03, 09:19 PM   #1
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i gota short story i want responce on and i didnt want to post on any other site so where would i put it to get opinions an such on it...its just a short story...and i thought it should be read..sumone tell me where to put it on rb...
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Old 12-15-03, 09:20 PM   #2
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just put it in this thread
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Old 12-15-03, 10:24 PM   #3
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yeah man just post it here

or make a new topic and say "short story"

or somethin
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Old 12-15-03, 10:41 PM   #4
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My story.
I was born.
On Rb.
I live here.
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Old 12-15-03, 10:44 PM   #5
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at least specify what kind of story your going to tell..
rhyme story- open mic.
life story-tell someone who cares.
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Old 12-15-03, 10:50 PM   #6
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ahhh key largo from HHB is bribe one?
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Old 12-15-03, 10:53 PM   #7
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[color=blood red]This Kid Posted This Thread In The Wrong Forum.......


Somebody BAN HIS ASS!!!
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Old 12-15-03, 11:10 PM   #8
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Oh sure....once MuhThugga posts up short stories in the Open Mics.....everyone all of a sudden has to do it.......

Even if you put short story in the title.....and make a disclaimer that it is a short story in read in your post.....

Some idiot still stumbles in there and remarks on a poor rhyme structure and flow.
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Old 12-16-03, 01:04 AM   #9
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lol ^ very true, ,
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Old 12-16-03, 03:34 AM   #10
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whos that broad in ya avy C?
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Old 12-16-03, 05:57 AM   #11
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Either Post it in Open Mic or Poetry. Depends What Genre it is.
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