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Old 12-16-03, 08:47 AM   #1
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Koalatee VS AMEND - Round 2

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Verses Due: Friday 12-19-03
Voting Ends: Sunday 12-21-03

Act Like You Are Suppose To Be Here... Fuckers!!
 
Old 12-16-03, 01:48 PM   #2
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Old 12-16-03, 07:08 PM   #3
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Kevin - Patrick - Alex - John - Ian
. . the artists formerly known as Word Perfect . .
Still > you.

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Old 12-19-03, 07:47 PM   #4
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This Geeks Soft, Out Of Focus - & Mend'll Strew Any Perfectionist
Sad - But Whos Social Life Only Develops Threw Instant Messages
Accept Ya Record Kid, Chill With The Aliases - Im Bad With Change
Peep My Sig Ralph, I've Already Beatin All Of Ya Established Names

Ok, For Real Now. . .

Dumb Luck, Cuz...I Know This Coward, & He Dreads This Match
Fuckin Muslim, Mend'll Throw In The Towel. . .w/Head Attached
I Bet Infact, You Wrote That Verse For Days, Ya Fame To Pieces
But U Serve NO Purpose. .
. .No Wonder Koalas're An Endanger'd Speices
Change Ya Pre's Please, I'll Use My Own - & I Doubt U'll Catch It
But U Could Hold Amends Title. . .Only If It Was Without The S's
I Shroud Ya Steps, So Drop The Box-Cutter - Your Cheap & Plane
. . .& Your NOT Quo, Cam, or Evolve - So Just Fuckin Keep A Name
Beat By Change, Should Of Amend'd Martyr. .
. . .But YOUR NOT A LEAGUE LOSS
. . .More Like A Practice Range, Cause Mend Drops 10 & Tee's Off





Match It^
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Old 12-19-03, 10:17 PM   #5
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It's not Halloween! You can't disguise the whack or hide the bitch
How can 'mend be more pitiful? He tried to mask a style switch
Quote:
Originally posted by AMEND
Ok, For Real Now. . .

A newbie poster boy, who has his talent stored aside in sectors
Doesn't matter; 'cos this human invalid still glorifies a Wreckord
'mend's a twenty-something towny who's unable to work patrols
Dude steals pills from Mom's bottle that's labeled as "Birth Control"
My endeavor's incomplete, Amend knows that he'll never be elite
Dude's a 'net bum - I'll have him spend December in the streets
I figured, "He must respect me. . This gay's remaining my bitch"
& I was content to be "Worthy" - 'til I saw the last name on his list
I'm a first-rate intellect. . Understand, my knowledge fathers kids.
The third's round out of your reach, just like college scholarships
This attention whore pretends to score lies sickly dead in hell, see:
You are over-rated - & that's without a Stickied thread to tell me
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Old 12-19-03, 11:55 PM   #6
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Very Dope Battle Men ... Both came hard as fucc in this one ... Amend came sick wit punches ... Quality came sick wit some dope personals ... Quality's finisher was dope ... And had some other quotable lines in his verse ... But Amend had some sick lines too ... This battle was kinda hard for me to judge ... Cuz I felt both came out swingin' correctly ... So Imma have to leave this battle at a tie ... Sorry

Vote : Tie
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Old 12-20-03, 03:57 AM   #7
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That shits not cool^















...in a cool sorta way.!

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Old 12-20-03, 11:50 AM   #8
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Im breaking this down to highlights, everything else was good also, but too hard to vote on this one. .


Ohh & Ahhs from amend:

Accept Ya Record Kid, Chill With The Aliases - Im Bad With Change
Peep My Sig Ralph, I've Already Beatin All Of Ya Established Names

I Bet Infact, You Wrote That Verse For Days, Ya Fame To Pieces
But U Serve NO Purpose. .
. .No Wonder Koalas're An Endanger'd Speices

I Shroud Ya Steps, So Drop The Box-Cutter - Your Cheap & Plane
. . .& Your NOT Quo, Cam, or Evolve - So Just Fuckin Keep A Name

Koalatee's nice lines:

I figured, "He must respect me. . This gay's remaining my bitch"
& I was content to be "Worthy" - 'til I saw the last name on his list

I'm a first-rate intellect. . Understand, my knowledge fathers kids.
The third's round out of your reach, just like college scholarships


This attention whore pretends to score lies sickly dead in hell, see:
You are over-rated - & that's without a Stickied thread to tell me

shit shit shit. . lmao this is still hard to vote on. . hmm.
i had just got done voting koalatee then changed my mind. . vote - amend. you both had great punches, koalatee had better vocab as usual. . but, amend gets this by a very thin margin. either of you may win this, g' luck.

vote - amend
 
Old 12-20-03, 12:28 PM   #9
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not bad battle expected better to be honest

the throw in the towel was a dope flip...funniest punch of the battle
some fairly average punches in this as well...filler from both sides
both hit with good personals
but i think amend won it
beter punches that had more impact
koala u had some nice shit....just wasnt topping amends imo
props
 
Old 12-20-03, 02:10 PM   #10
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Best Battle I've seen in this tourney, but too tire to vote now.. Imma come back.. Much respect n props.. uno.
 
Old 12-20-03, 05:34 PM   #11
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Shucks. 0-2
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Old 12-21-03, 09:47 AM   #12
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AMEND's Better Punches:

Accept Ya Record Kid, Chill With The Aliases - Im Bad With Change
Peep My Sig Ralph, I've Already Beatin All Of Ya Established Names

^Lmao.

Dumb Luck, Cuz...I Know This Coward, & He Dreads This Match
Fuckin Muslim, Mend'll Throw In The Towel. . .w/Head Attached

^Damn.

I Bet Infact, You Wrote That Verse For Days, Ya Fame To Pieces
But U Serve NO Purpose. .
. .No Wonder Koalas're An Endanger'd Speices

^Ouch.

I Shroud Ya Steps, So Drop The Box-Cutter - Your Cheap & Plane
. . .& Your NOT Quo, Cam, or Evolve - So Just Fuckin Keep A Name

^O.. Shit

Beat By Change, Should Of Amend'd Martyr. .
. . .But YOUR NOT A LEAGUE LOSS
. . .More Like A Practice Range, Cause Mend Drops 10 & Tee's Off

^LMAOLMAO!!

The best battle verse i've seen in a while..Nuff said.....



Tee's Better Punches:

'mend's a twenty-something towny who's unable to work patrols
Dude steals pills from Mom's bottle that's labeled as "Birth Control"

^Lmao.

My endeavor's incomplete, Amend knows that he'll never be elite
Dude's a 'net bum - I'll have him spend December in the streets

^I liked that. lol

I figured, "He must respect me. . This gay's remaining my bitch"
& I was content to be "Worthy" - 'til I saw the last name on his list

^Whats wrong with 13th, fuck it, funny

I'm a first-rate intellect. . Understand, my knowledge fathers kids.
The third's round out of your reach, just like college scholarships

This attention whore pretends to score lies sickly dead in hell, see:
You are over-rated - & that's without a Stickied thread to tell me

^Both tight, nice finisher..


Tee had better vocab, and better flow in my opinion, unless amend was better and just forgot. But my vote goes to AMEND for better and harder punches...Very close battle and vote could of gone either way...Much respect. 1ne.
 
Old 12-22-03, 08:26 AM   #13
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Based On The Votes Recieved ... Amend Wins
Koalatee Loses & Is Out... but Got My Vote
 
 


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