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Old 12-16-03, 08:48 AM   #1
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Walter Wall VS Taktik - Round 2

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Verses Due: Friday 12-19-03
Voting Ends: Sunday 12-21-03

Act Like You Are Suppose To Be Here... Fuckers!!
 
Old 12-16-03, 09:09 AM   #2
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Old 12-16-03, 01:04 PM   #3
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Old 12-19-03, 10:10 PM   #4
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A rematch against Walt? I'm kinda bored, so I might as well....
Volve said 'Act like you belong'...n' Walt came dressed like an L....
Felt bad...started talking bout NBA, to make tha load lighter...
But I said Boston Sell-Tiks...he tried to buy me as ghostwriter!....
Your in Wits End...well...all you've done is bicker n' make noise....
Brings up the question...how'd you get my permission to join?...
Was I drunk...whatever...now back to see which one is better...
Pulled a win out ya ass...Then put it back in for extra pleasure!...
You must see how he's wack...please somebody tell him this...
He said he had the Total Package...then sent it to his relatives!....
His shit's irrevelent, look at his sig, a newbie astonishment...
Sad...finalists n' pety votes are his only accomplisments...
Elevated FL? I can see why, but what's up with Aisle 5?...
Says you're the Most Underrated...and this is an example why!...
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Old 12-19-03, 10:12 PM   #5
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Lost the HW title and dis battle, things don't go as planned
cuz...........
This is a christopher Reeve horse back ride..…ure last stand
No wonder you’re a seasoned vet, you win sum and then fall
Wit’s End led? I’m sever’n ure head…….
……………………………………..so you can take roll call!
Lost your title shot to vovle….ure still stuck with the shards
Cuz Tak only pushes the envelope………………
………………….………When he’s mailing christmas cards!
Tak’s rhymes get like ure merk squad application…Rejected
More than an emcee…..tak’s a walking ad for contraceptives!
You kneed me! u got down on 2 begging me to join ure crew
It’s true!………
You can’t beat me! everything I post starts with double you!
Remember Warlords? Yeahp…crumbled like a roman pillar
U should be banned for spam.....cuz your verses are all filler!
Kicked out Regime now he’s mouth’n off look’n for a plaque
Face the facts! 13th broke your front and Walter got ure back!
 
Old 12-20-03, 03:37 AM   #6
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Taktik

A rematch against Walt? I'm kinda bored, so I might as well....
Volve said 'Act like you belong'...n' Walt came dressed like an L....
kinda funny, descent

Felt bad...started talking bout NBA, to make tha load lighter...
But I said Boston Sell-Tiks...he tried to buy me as ghostwriter!....
Uh, yea

Your in Wits End...well...all you've done is bicker n' make noise....
Brings up the question...how'd you get my permission to join?...
kinda nice

Was I drunk...whatever...now back to see which one is better...
Pulled a win out ya ass...Then put it back in for extra pleasure!...
it didnt sound right bub

You must see how he's wack...please somebody tell him this...
He said he had the Total Package...then sent it to his relatives!....
what did the 2nd one mean.?

His shit's irrevelent, look at his sig, a newbie astonishment...
Sad...finalists n' pety votes are his only accomplisments...
har har

Elevated FL? I can see why, but what's up with Aisle 5?...
Says you're the Most Underrated...and this is an example why!...
not great, far from it actually



Walter Wall

Lost the HW title and dis battle, things don't go as planned
cuz...........
This is a christopher Reeve horse back ride..…ure last stand
Reeves = Played

No wonder you’re a seasoned vet, you win sum and then fall
Wit’s End led? I’m sever’n ure head…….
……………………………………..so you can take roll call!
weird, but ok

Lost your title shot to vovle….ure still stuck with the shards
Cuz Tak only pushes the envelope………………
………………….………When he’s mailing christmas cards!
funny & sesonal. YAY

Tak’s rhymes get like ure merk squad application…Rejected
More than an emcee…..tak’s a walking ad for contraceptives!
ha ha ha

You kneed me! u got down on 2 begging me to join ure crew
It’s true!………
You can’t beat me! everything I post starts with double you!
kinda good

Remember Warlords? Yeahp…crumbled like a roman pillar
U should be banned for spam.....cuz your verses are all filler
bleh

Kicked out Regime now he’s mouth’n off look’n for a plaque
Face the facts! 13th broke your front and Walter got ure back!
better then Taktiks



Overall
I think Walter Wall took this with a few descent personals, and they were humerous. Taktik didnt have as much hit as Walter, punches were equal to worse.
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Old 12-20-03, 03:11 PM   #7
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A rematch against Walt? I'm kinda bored, so I might as well....
Volve said 'Act like you belong'...n' Walt came dressed like an L....

ok.

Felt bad...started talking bout NBA, to make tha load lighter...
But I said Boston Sell-Tiks...he tried to buy me as ghostwriter!....

witty, not hard hittin tho .

Your in Wits End...well...all you've done is bicker n' make noise....
Brings up the question...how'd you get my permission to join?...

filler.

Was I drunk...whatever...now back to see which one is better...
Pulled a win out ya ass...Then put it back in for extra pleasure!...

not feelin it.

You must see how he's wack...please somebody tell him this...
He said he had the Total Package...then sent it to his relatives!...

lol^
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His shit's irrevelent, look at his sig, a newbie astonishment...
Sad...finalists n' pety votes are his only accomplisments...

alright, but filler.

Elevated FL? I can see why, but what's up with Aisle 5?...
Says you're the Most Underrated...and this is an example why!...

thats saying his verse is gonna be dope. .^


Lost the HW title and dis battle, things don't go as planned
cuz...........
This is a christopher Reeve horse back ride..…ure last stand

alright, not feelin it much.

No wonder you’re a seasoned vet, you win sum and then fall
Wit’s End led? I’m sever’n ure head…….
……………………………………..so you can take roll call!

nice try. .

Lost your title shot to vovle….ure still stuck with the shards
Cuz Tak only pushes the envelope………………
………………….………When he’s mailing christmas cards!

eh, kinda funny. .

Tak’s rhymes get like ure merk squad application…Rejected
More than an emcee…..tak’s a walking ad for contraceptives!

filler.

You kneed me! u got down on 2 begging me to join ure crew
It’s true!………
You can’t beat me! everything I post starts with double you!

LoL, i actually get it. pretty good.

Remember Warlords? Yeahp…crumbled like a roman pillar
U should be banned for spam.....cuz your verses are all filler!

alright. ^

Kicked out Regime now he’s mouth’n off look’n for a plaque
Face the facts! 13th broke your front and Walter got ure back!

better than his finisher ^



vote - walter. a few moderately funny lines, punches were a bit better. an arrite battle overall.
 
Old 12-20-03, 04:11 PM   #8
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I'm not taking the time to break these down. Not because I'm not interested, just because I have to go

Anyway, both of you came kinda like Evolve and myself...not as good as expected. Overall, Walter Wall came out with the better verse and the more consistent/harder hitting punches.

You kneed me! u got down on 2 begging me to join ure crew
It’s true!………
You can’t beat me! everything I post starts with double you!

^lol, nice

Vote ~ Walter Wall.
 
Old 12-21-03, 09:32 AM   #9
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I was expecting alot more from this battle but, fucckk itt. I can care-less either way. Walter Wall won this hands down....

Taktik's Better Punches:

Felt bad...started talking bout NBA, to make tha load lighter...
But I said Boston Sell-Tiks...he tried to buy me as ghostwriter!....

^It made me chuckle.

His shit's irrevelent, look at his sig, a newbie astonishment...
Sad...finalists n' pety votes are his only accomplisments...

^It was a ight personal..

And ur closer could of been flipped and hit harder...All-round a good verse but seen better from y-o-u.


Wall's Better Punches:

Lost the HW title and dis battle, things don't go as planned
cuz...........
This is a christopher Reeve horse back ride..…ure last stand

^ Eventhough Chris shit is played, it made me laugh...Whats funnier than handicapp people?

Lost your title shot to vovle….ure still stuck with the shards
Cuz Tak only pushes the envelope………………
………………….………When he’s mailing christmas cards!

^I liked it...


You kneed me! u got down on 2 begging me to join ure crew
It’s true!………
You can’t beat me! everything I post starts with double you!

^Tight..

Your closer was alot better than taktiks "why!" bullshit..

Walter Wall wins, better overall Verse.
 
Old 12-21-03, 01:40 PM   #10
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Originally posted by AMEND
[b]Taktik

You must see how he's wack...please somebody tell him this...
He said he had the Total Package...then sent it to his relatives!....
what did the 2nd one mean.?


Yet another punch that wasn't hard to understand...by any means. Your intillect is amazing...truly. Not in a good way though.



You see the pattern there? Not ONE of those punches were personals...and there were a LOT of punches you called "weird" which leads me to believe you didn't understand them either. However, if I had posted those too, this post would never end. I don't mind losing...everyone loses here and there. I especially don't mind losing to Evolve. However, I do mind no name wannabe dope fucks that can't understand a punch, voting when they don't even get the punches in the verses. Especially when they vote based on whether "The sentence before it built it up" or not. Fag. yes, Adapt didn't like you...but you did bite. I even talked to Epi after that to see why the fuck he unbanned you. He never answered me...I'm guessin he just liked you. I saw the fuckin links though. Unless you just magically happened to think of it word for word the same way the first guy did...you bit. Yes, I do have shit on you...Fuck your round 3. Koalatee didn't eat you alive cuz he doesn't know you. he didn't have any personals to put up against you. For 99% of the people here...facin you is like facin an alias...cuz you ain't shit to nobody.
 
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^Blah, disregard that plz...wrong thread.
 
Old 12-21-03, 01:53 PM   #12
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this was a fairly decent battle...
but i agree with everbody else....
i think WW got this also....
because he came wit more...
wittier punches...and a few...
dat made me laugh...lol...
and he came wit some good personals...
on taktik...taktik came ok...i've seen better...
from his previous verses...
but still nevertheless...
a decent battle...but my vote...
goes to WW for a overall....
better verse...

good battle...stay up...

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Old 12-21-03, 11:57 PM   #13
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Yet another punch that wasn't hard to understand...by any means. Your intillect is amazing...truly. Not in a good way though.



You see the pattern there? Not ONE of those punches were personals...and there were a LOT of punches you called "weird" which leads me to believe you didn't understand them either. However, if I had posted those too, this post would never end. I don't mind losing...everyone loses here and there. I especially don't mind losing to Evolve. However, I do mind no name wannabe dope fucks that can't understand a punch, voting when they don't even get the punches in the verses. Especially when they vote based on whether "The sentence before it built it up" or not. Fag. yes, Adapt didn't like you...but you did bite. I even talked to Epi after that to see why the fuck he unbanned you. He never answered me...I'm guessin he just liked you. I saw the fuckin links though. Unless you just magically happened to think of it word for word the same way the first guy did...you bit. Yes, I do have shit on you...Fuck your round 3. Koalatee didn't eat you alive cuz he doesn't know you. he didn't have any personals to put up against you. For 99% of the people here...facin you is like facin an alias...cuz you ain't shit to nobody.



Whats wrong with you? First off you sound like a stalker, why the fuck u care so much about a guy with a Ren avvy? You know more about him than he does himself, Wow ur a bad ass know, huh? Who gives a Fuck it he doesnt understand it, why u crying for?

What you say if I said I didnt understand that punch? Call me a dumbass? Shit before you act like a smartass learn how to spell Mr. "intillect" ..... Get off nigga's nuts, you look like a prisioned mexican, how you write, essays....
 
Old 12-22-03, 08:19 AM   #14
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Walter Wins
Tak Loses & Is Out
 
 


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