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Old 12-16-03, 03:17 PM   #1
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How Do you Know It Will End When I Press The Button Send
What To Expect From My Pen Or What The Fuck It Tends
I Know The Antichrist Nears When I Recognize The Faces of The Crucified
I Hear The Voices & The Messages That Dwell In their Crucial Eyes
Many Fail & the Truth Denied But My Tellectuals Proceed and Explore
Cause the Forsaken to Beleive Even More About Things That Intrege Perplexed Morgues
God Be Tested No More When My Breath Sweeps The Nations
I Seek Creation Of The Seventy Patients Focused on The Steep Rations
I must Keep Patience For I May Awaken With The Evil Inside My Veins
I'd Rather Reside In Pain Signed Insane and Hide In ShameTo Only Keep my Mind In Sane
By The Way, Better Check Underneath You Bed Before You Read This
Maybe a Demons Fetus Growing In hope To Beat Us So Just Heed This
Breath It, Let Your Mind Go And Search For The Dawn Of your Flow
The First Thing You Saw In Windows, Was It The Devil, Or merely Yourself
Or your Fearing the Hell that Awaits For You A Clearing Of Cells
Now Weary, Not Felt, Can't Find Mercy Anywhere Else Just Dying
Your touch Dying, Much Crying, Your the only One That knows These Cuts Winding There Way Into Much Dining Resulting In Plush Findings
Whats My Thing? Do I Only Protect My God And Observe Them Faulter
I Deserve An Alder And Have For You Reserved an Alter
Will You Wear The Mask And Swear To Grasp The Air that Passed
All Stares have Hatched You Know I'm Here At Last & To Turn The Bare hour Glass
The Beauty Intended In This Shall Not Be Sended In Fists
But Apprehended in Bliss & Shaking the Shadows That Are Blended in Mist
Dead In The Midst, Winter Approaches, Cold Chills Over the Sinner its Holdin, Now your Inner Is Frozen flooding In Mass Splinters of Chosen
My Dinner is Broken, Now I must Consume The Evil Around me
The Evil Surrounds Me, Screams Is what The Sounds Be
Now The Good Is Bounding, No Longer Shall We Hide In Fear
The Signs Are Here No More Lying Here So Cry Your Tears
Its Time To Clear, You thoughts Of Emotion and Take Up Arms
Break The Dark Before It Takes Your Heart, These Snakes Are Smart but Don't Stray to Far Or The Abyss Will Play its Part
Before time Now, In The Clouds, Devouring The Feeling To Run
Revealing The Son, Lilth Has come to take him I'm Hearing the Drums,
I Must Defend The Young, Now Arming the Back And Sealing The Front
you Will Never Overcome the Force Of Spirit
I Was Born To Hear It, The War crys Cuz I'm Not Sworn To Fear This
I'm Being Attacked By a Swarm Of Mirrors so I Must Beat The Double
See The Trouble And Meet in Suttle To defeat The Bundles
Breath and Wonder why Is It That God Needed Me To Witness this
I'm the Fittest Witt But I'm Still Just Shit To This
Don't Be Afraid To See The Day When We Will Defeat The Hate
Heed My Praise As I Lead the Strays Into a Dakness Where To Breathe you Faint
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Old 12-16-03, 03:18 PM   #2
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Old 12-16-03, 03:38 PM   #3
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NICE DROP DOG. THAT FLOW WAS A LITTLE CONFUSING AT FIRST BUT AT THE END, I GOT THE MESSAGE.
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Old 12-16-03, 04:18 PM   #4
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..Uppin..
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Old 12-16-03, 04:33 PM   #5
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yo man was some deep shit. flow was tight but I found your structure kinda hard to follow, lotsa nice multi's and vocab and excellent wordplay bro, rhyme scheme was down to. keep up. peace
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Old 12-16-03, 04:35 PM   #6
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i thought it was ok. the flow was better at the end and the structure was a little messed.other than that good........

vote on this battle...its been slept on............................

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Old 12-16-03, 04:51 PM   #7
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21 views and only 3 feed backs...sad...^^
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