The deffiniton of wack rapper, suits you
Usin my intuition of not layin this fag flat on his ass, but still abuse you
When im done, you gon' bruise too - dissin me fo no reason?
Kill u without no hesitation, no repent'-
Like KKK vs Black Panthers guess won this arguement?
Im suspected for bein G.O.A.T, but never even droped a LP
And my rap fans love me, I keep the gangsta' flow healthy
You call your self a mexican - wwww.FreeTranslation.com doesnt cut it
Gee, I got another suspision, of you being a biting-faggot
Saw some Open Mics' got excited, and posted
Toasted like toast, u've been roasted, but im not trying to boast
Its your choice, you got me shoutin like a wack movie
Im doubting u latin, i dun wnan drop sumfin cuz u gon bite it, thats why i got pat-end'
You must be sucidial, to drop sumfin against me
Crucified you up against a rap-note-book
Execuses, coudnt even save you, u lied - snap-choke-shook
3 words that describe you, you aint alive, are you?
Dunno why i posted this - we kno he's gone cop this
You've been smoked bitch~~him not stealin this, is~
like givin a fat kid cake,and tellin him not BITE//

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ill get my replies up in alil bit

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ok this was a Pretty Good Piece man...ya Structure seemed stretched Out But ya Flow was alright......the Imagery Ya Gave me was Good...The Topic was Good it made me Look at it, read it and Leave some feedback....and yea all ya need to Work On Is That Structure so try and keep ya lines similar length and not stretch them Out......P.€.a.c.€........

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thanks for the honest reply

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upp

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Yeah this was alright i thought....structure was ok, could use some work though, cause your lines were stretched out but you can work on that then...flow in this was ok, stretched lines kinda took away from it a little bit but it still was there...had some good multies/internals....but overall this was alright...keep at it.

that was ill dowg you got some hot shit here, keep it up
hit my shit up....RAP GAME....
*****ONE*****

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i thought the flow wuz off, but i dont really judge that two much becuz this is text, unless u r strictly text i kinda dont put 2 much into that, his wuz a pretty decent drop, some of the linez didnt seem to rhyme to me tho, keep spittin. thanx 4 the look