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Old 12-17-03, 01:43 PM   #1
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Angry ..Could it be???

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adored bliss of whored kids tortured by corsets
of advertisers dumb deaf and blind leadin horses
to water but i can't make em drink liquid knowledge
in the form of a solid iniquitous followers
swallow hollow tolerance of hatred i can't take it
when they horde all their money for some plastic face lifts
watch the space cadets embrace racial epithets
ignore evidence of injustice in the present tense
instead to assimilate infiltrate my inner space
discriminate can't eliminate the timid sinner's fate
hedonistic images breathin limitless demon's allegiance
to pledges and creeds of sedatives prozac embedded in heads' appeasement
eager to max the apathy attackin me with trappins
of placid platitudes plastered with plastic anatomies
politically correct americans with arrogance to marry
economics and equality democracy and foreign policies
homilies that solder monstrosities to fill more
billboards and sell dreams upheld schemes of a kill force...
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Old 12-17-03, 01:43 PM   #2
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Old 12-17-03, 02:02 PM   #3
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Old 12-17-03, 06:13 PM   #4
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yeah i thought this was pretty good,,,seemed qiute fast...extensive use of vocab, i thought it maybe overpowered it a bit...but looking past that...good i thought.....dunno bout the topic though..........pZ.
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Old 12-17-03, 06:17 PM   #5
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yo man dis joint was hot n pretty fast...so its a good flow

evrything was good ..the vocab, mulits, structure, n rhthym or beat... keep elevatin poet...... peace
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Old 12-17-03, 07:33 PM   #6
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nice man thats pretty much what i got to say but i think it could have a betta flow u kno what a meani think if u work on u would be really good but i aint great so ya if i post ne of mine help me out.. peace
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