aight...

rules
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10 lines
no hate n all that shit
must checkin
drop 10 mins afta checkin

good luck

jus 10 lines
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im too tired at the moment for any more lines to be honest............................................ ...................

checkin in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............................

ive got till 10:36.......im jus keyin it now.....wont be long, ima fast typer :P................................................ .................................................. .................................................. ..

actually, im gona wait till u check in, so a know that u will spit summin...............................

we both got 10 mins to drop afta we have both checked in......im already checked, so as soon as you check in.....10mins from then till we both gota spit!

sounds fair to me

this nigga's crazy he just signed his own death wish
he's only good at throwin out lines when he fish
he wanna diss but he's in capable
sorriest rapper in da world is his label
watchin him on cable on da Animal planet
he sucks so bad if he came out wit a c.d the F.B.I would ban it
and hand it back to him in flame Just to be ran over by a train
gay porno viewers are the only ones that know his name
he insane an done bit of more than he can chew
Freeman get ripped that ain't somethin new

10 lines really ain't enough for me man
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ok, i'll spit now aswell................................... shud of really checked in, but no mata.............................................. .................................................. ............................................

who care about checkin in just spit
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stop it man, you've only been on this site for eight fukin days --
and already you think your rhymes are worthy of these people's praise --
my job aint that hard on this one, ur called Another Level --
u suck up more shit than a fukin 'Dust Devil' --
there aint no need for me to carry on uve already done it all --
ruined ur rep like u shot urself in the foot wiv a cannonball --
ur a loser, and you think you got the right to call me a chump --
ima spit these lyrics straight down ur fukin throat, so u'll need a stomach pump --
at the end of the day, ur annoyin, wearin thin and gettin old --
everyone knows that im 'iller' than you, even when your sweatin cold --

lets get sum votes on this shit people............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ..

need some votes
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ite

opener=free
closer=free
punches=free
personals=tie
structure=free
creativty=free

overall =free gd spit man(try and use harder punches)

another=(use harder punches and work on ur structure)..

...................................pz