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Old 12-19-03, 03:05 PM   #1
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3 man window
~Hello im rolanda sanchez reporting live from 34 the Saratoga avenue where an apparent drive by has left 6 injured and one dead.the deceased known as DARABIEL RIVERA was gunned down and pronounced dead at 1115. police are currently looking for his brother CIELLO RIVERA for a body I dentification but up to this point have not located him.
Im here right now with a witness to the incident sir tell me what you saw…….

it was a fresh day-as I awoke to the smell of tangerae and Bombay-
the decay-of a white owl with half the wrapper in an ashtray.
I was hung over- no waite I mean I wasn’t yet sober.
Herd some sounds from the window-was like fuck it it’s the indo-
Or an inyuwendo-maybe even the sounds from my Nintendo.
How was I to know? all I herd was kids freestyling-
Neighborhood punks wilden-with shorty’s profilen.
Besides you know how it is when your twisted…. I just I didnt care
So I thought my hearing was impaired-when I herd the cry for dispair.
Screeching tires-gun fire-I think it was 9 aiming from an expire-
From a distance all I saw was kid taking his last breath inhail death-
before he was retired.
Wish I could go more in depth-but the essence-of the sess insence-
Got my memory messed up but I fess up it’s a shame to take such inoscence.

~ MEAN WHILE LETS TAKE TO THE EVENT AS IT UNFLODED~

im just a young kid infatuated with death-
a take what I need and have no remoarse left.
Got a little brother he aboute to go to college-
and we need money we cant afford the knowledge.
There’s kid around the way that doesn’t play-
Always getting laid and got hell of pay-
Says if I join his gang I can get coin to trade-
Hell ueah ill go that way-tired of life being waisted away-
Work my whole past for a future..
but that just working another day.
All I got to is prove im loyal-get bent off some crown royal-
Taked a loaded one-pop some – it don’t matter if I hit anyone.
Lump in my lungs don’t want to but it has to be done-
Other wise my lil brother ending up a VIC~TOM.
In the car swetty palms-trying to remain calm.
Change my mind-to late im already holding a nine-
Feel chills down my spine-its only one crime-
So if I end an exisistance on earth then the world is mine.
Point the barrel out the back thinking god please-forgive me-
But I know im going to hell as see –
the eclipse from closing my eyes as I squeezed.
Filling guilty…. ran home packed up..
found a pay phone surrounded by strangers-
Trying to flee its 11 15
why the fuck my brother aint answering his pager?

~as this happens a life flashes in seconds, a soul is trying to decend and lies dying fighting for life trying to rationalize his death~


it was late morning 11(am)I was to graduate sunday-
I make straight A’s- with a high GPA.
Plus my girl just found out she is pregnanent im proposing today.
Was running late- so I ran straight- took a short cut making the plans-
How to tell my brother I want him to be my best man?
plus we’re about to expand-we getting a new member to our fam.
Plus everything is working out no longer life need slant-
Tell cielo I don’t need money I was just excepted for a grant.
HERD TIRES SCREECHING- GIRLS SCREAMIN…..
Ricochet sounds something streaming-
I just stood froze in pose wondering what im seeing-
Next thing you know im laying bleeding with my skin receiding-
In needing of emergency attention heaven feeding.
Im not ready for this there’s to much but I wish-
Better life for my my family and to be wife.
My lady my baby and things took a wonderful turn lately-
What did I I do god? for you to want to assassinate me?
Feeling cold-as my soul folds I try to hold-
but this is destiney atleast how mine molds.
Started feeling cold-cant feel my legs-
Ends this lord I beg-my bodies numb and im feeling light in my head.
But I see my life flash instead.
The pain is gone I feel my tears but they feel soft-
I can feel my last breath cant hold on so I exhaust-
Its 11 15 Right before death all I herd was my pager going off.
And its over………………………………………⠀¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦.

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Old 12-19-03, 03:27 PM   #2
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That shit was hard......emotions...........real life happenins, Word keep on cuz you doin it well
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Old 12-19-03, 03:33 PM   #3
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WOW.this shit was real..I really liked how you finished it off..I'm new to the site and I'll be postin soonso hopefully you can give me some feedback,thanks
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Old 12-19-03, 03:59 PM   #4
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madd ill set up... I liked the reporter theme...
the verse were flowin, no doubt... you made this kick
ass between the verses with the reporter talking again...
your second verse was illy as fuck dawg...
overall, the content, set up and all, was very very nice...
~AshY~
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Old 12-19-03, 04:00 PM   #5
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tell me when you post so i can look for it no doubt
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Old 12-19-03, 05:33 PM   #6
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Old 12-19-03, 06:02 PM   #7
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yeah man this seemed different to ya usual..but i liked it..seemed morethe way i write....so obviuosly ima gonna say...ill fucking drop.....lol...but yeah it was nice, concept n all...pZ twin..jus keep comin with em.....laterz........this collab is gonna be sick
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Old 12-19-03, 07:18 PM   #8
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is this good or am i better at my usual material-
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Old 12-19-03, 07:24 PM   #9
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i dunno....im my opinion variety shows deversity which shows skillz.so...ya wining man...lol....pZ twin
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Old 12-19-03, 07:30 PM   #10
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damn bro, this is deeper then im used to seein, ill as fuck if i might add. talent seeps out of every word here. this was a badass drop, only thing i can think of downing was you spelt some word all wierd and it fucked my flow up in my head lol, but other then that, ill

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Old 12-19-03, 07:31 PM   #11
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Old 12-21-03, 01:02 PM   #12
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