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Old 08-12-04, 04:39 AM   #1
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miastro, wit nice flo, chorus diminuendo//
sing in pianissamo, til forted wit crescendo//
my staff keeps tempo, strings play adagio//
soft and legatto, the melodic picasso//
voices make a glottal, rhythm syncapated//
spittin ova the ballad I recently innovated//
sounds elevated, virbrato wit a jazz swing//
classical twist, intervals drift, doing my rap thang//
fermatta held long as we near the vamp//
inticipate the rest, holdin my conductin stance//
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Old 08-12-04, 05:09 AM   #2
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this was excellent. nice word usage - obviously you got more knowledge of a piano than I do. i suppose programming keyes in a beat machine are a little different than trying to match real tempo. lol. melodic picasso line was my fav easy. That should be someones nic. good looks on this one
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Old 08-13-04, 03:05 AM   #3
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damn kidd feelin dat drop...had some crazy ass vocab...and good structure...flowed right...everything was there in dis....keep dat comin kidd...peace
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