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Old 08-14-04, 11:59 PM   #1
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no safe sex

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Kissing is a habit and f*ckin is a game
boys get all the pleasure and girls get the pain
he says he love u and believe its true
but ur stomach starts to swell and he says the hell with u
16 min of pleasure, 9 mounths of pain, 3 days in the hospital,a baby with no name,
the baby is a basterd, the mother is a whore, it never would of happon if the rubber hadn't tore
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you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/

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Old 08-15-04, 02:39 AM   #2
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hmm...i dont know if you really have a baby or you were just writing...kinda fucked up outlook on guys youve got there but if it comes from the heart its good poetry
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"Frank White the menacin, chron chron's the medicine....
I got the lettuce and...
...you turn green like cucumber skin
Got the new hummer in the summer when I was a new comer then...
drugs and mac-10's...hugs from fake friends..."


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Originally Posted by Mad Dog
i'm not attracted to women...
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Old 08-15-04, 02:52 AM   #3
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that shit isnt from u i heard that shit before u mite of changed a few words tho but no hate shawty
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Old 08-15-04, 02:58 AM   #4
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nope i wrote it sry...and no i don't have a kid
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you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/

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Old 08-15-04, 03:00 AM   #5
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no hate but u aint rite that
sorry u may have reworded it
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Old 08-15-04, 03:12 AM   #6
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no f*ck off i wrote it....sry but u got somethin wrong with ur head...y u got to argu with a girl! mmmm sounds like u ain't got nuttin better to do...cause u can't get a girl! Do us all a favor and F*ck off
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you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/

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AKA (down, and keepin it real)
KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words)
The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol
Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping)
Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em')
phatom (he jus got skill)
LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life)
fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat)
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Old 08-15-04, 03:14 AM   #7
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sounds to me like u just need more post...so u decide to write 5 post to talk to me
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AKA (down, and keepin it real)
KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words)
The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol
Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping)
Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em')
phatom (he jus got skill)
LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life)
fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat)
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Old 08-15-04, 05:55 AM   #8
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tahts i a pretty good poem, but you aint puttin guyz in a good outlook.
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Old 08-15-04, 06:02 AM   #9
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u didnt write that shit i seen it before
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Old 08-15-04, 07:35 AM   #10
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nice poem and lol it makes us guys look bad also
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Old 08-15-04, 10:33 AM   #11
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so i guess u need post too right? Wharever I wrote it get over it ur just mad cause u know that a girl can bet ur a**! So on the whole out-look of guys thing, I don't hate guys.....I love them!
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So what chicks can rap too/
you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/

Respect List:
AKA (down, and keepin it real)
KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words)
The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol
Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping)
Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em')
phatom (he jus got skill)
LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life)
fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat)
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Old 08-15-04, 11:13 AM   #12
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Hi, I dont agree with ure view of guys, like them others pointed out ^^ but poetry is like that neway, it reflects the composers personality and how they see things, so as schema said, as long as it came from u, its good poetry.. Neways, it does sound familiar.. just to let u kno.
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Old 08-15-04, 03:01 PM   #13
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well not to be da broken record but i seen that shit before , and dont be goin all "blah blah " wit me cuz i wont listen , i liked it though some shit reworded , and you got anything else? and even if you did qoute& write & qoute right it, the outlook on us guys is messed up . but no hate all love





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Old 08-15-04, 04:27 PM   #14
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bitch shoulda been on birth control
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Old 08-15-04, 05:41 PM   #15
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Never seen it before and don't know if you bit off somebody else, but I like this piece nonetheless. Heartfelt, though biased as hell. Good drop, whoever wrote it.
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