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BlackDeathDB | 2 | 28.57% | |
kelsick39 | 5 | 71.43% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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02-05-05, 10:10 PM | #1 | |
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BlackDeathDB vs kelsick39
IP: 3240 794D
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8-10 lines No Gay Votes (Sorry Q) Recycling all u want No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-05-05 at 10:40 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
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02-05-05, 10:11 PM | #2 | |
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BlackDeathDB has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-05-05 10:11 PM.
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02-05-05, 10:15 PM | #3 |
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This boys a joke, bad lyrics you know its him
his blimp is broke*, like a bad show on Nickelodeon Matter fact, hes missing his best friend a bad act, atleast we know where keenan and kel went** Hes from the illstate and his name is kelsick at this rate, people are dead cause he sucked dick I gotta kill him quick, just one more dead prick i'm burning him out like wicks, doing this shit for kicks We know i'm putting him to rest, with just one click Cuz he messed wit the BlackDeath, and his ass got sick *Nickelodeon's icon is a blimp ** show on Nickelodeon |
02-05-05, 10:17 PM | #4 | |
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kelsick39 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-05-05 10:17 PM.
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02-05-05, 10:23 PM | #5 | |
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yo, Death aint sure, he's just curious george
but its a furious gorge, about to leave serious warts* i know in ur dreams at night, the kel haunts you i guess BlackDeath is fitting, since nobody wants u** Wen i punch, all u see is bleedin, a red head Cuz i'll leave the DB to rest on his Death Bed*** a Peasant a farmer, wat ur spittin is pitiful,wageless its like a life crisis the way ur stuck in the middle ages**** * - the Black Death covers u in these black and purple warts/bruises ** - Black Death is a disease... and nobody wants to get a disease that kills u *** - DB= Death Bed....... a play on his name and how kelSICK will leave u **** - the Black Death was only around during the Middle Ages with peasants and it went away during than.... |
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02-05-05, 11:47 PM | #6 | |
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IP: A4E7 A821
Voted For: kelsick39
Kelsick took this one slightly i think. His personals were better and more thought out it seems. Black's punches were weak in places like the line "at this rate, people are dead cause he sucked dick". He was doin decent until it looks like he lost focus and his punches fell short. one didn't even have a punch "i'm burning him out like wicks, doing this shit for kick". kelsick stayed on point and used his personals well. otherwise the structure was good for both. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174830 me vs. mafia http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024 me vs. Intensify Effect http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173417 me vs. os1ris http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171308 me vs. nightmare http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175459 me vs. illmatic
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02-05-05, 11:53 PM | #7 | |
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i sed to explain every bar black so that it would be fair...... u lil bitch
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02-06-05, 06:45 AM | #8 | |
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IP: A4E7 A821
my bad here
This boys a joke, bad lyrics you know its him his blimp is broke*, like a bad show on Nickelodeon OPENER WAS WEAK, OKAY SET UP BUT PUNCH COULD'VE BEEN BETTER Matter fact, hes missing his best friend a bad act, atleast we know where keenan and kel went** BAD SETUP, PUNCH WAS DECENT Hes from the illstate and his name is kelsick at this rate, people are dead cause he sucked dick SET UP WAS GOOD BUT THE PUNCH WAS BAD I gotta kill him quick, just one more dead prick i'm burning him out like wicks, doing this shit for kicks BAD SET UP, PUNCH WAS BAD (burning em out like wicks was pretty good) We know i'm putting him to rest, with just one click Cuz he messed wit the BlackDeath, and his ass got sick BAD SET UP BUT THE PUNCH LANDED yo, Death aint sure, he's just curious george but its a furious gorge, about to leave serious warts* DECENT SET UP, DECENT PUNCH (with explanation) i know in ur dreams at night, the kel haunts you i guess BlackDeath is fitting, since nobody wants u** WEAK SET UP BUT DECENT PUNCH Wen i punch, all u see is bleedin, a red head Cuz i'll leave the DB to rest on his Death Bed*** BAD SETUP BUT PUNCH WAS GOOD DECENT WORDPLAY a Peasant a farmer, wat ur spittin is pitiful,wageless its like a life crisis the way ur stuck in the middle ages**** DECENT SET UP WITH A GOOD PUNCH (overall good closer) that's how i felt you took this one overall. And by the way, since i'm a little bitch i'd just like to point out the fact that you spelled said wrong. Peace
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GET DOPER Knowledge is Power, Stop being Weak The Legend of Blackmage Featuring such heads as...Tha Q, 9th degree, Enygma,The green team, Big J and probably you! SO DON'T SLEEP!Coming soon to a soundclick near you...
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02-06-05, 07:36 AM | #9 |
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IP: A1EC 8B20
Voted For: kelsick39
yo, Death aint sure, he's just curious george but its a furious gorge, about to leave serious warts* wasnt feeling this... i know in ur dreams at night, the kel haunts you i guess BlackDeath is fitting, since nobody wants u** ok.. Wen i punch, all u see is bleedin, a red head Cuz i'll leave the DB to rest on his Death Bed*** decent.. a Peasant a farmer, wat ur spittin is pitiful,wageless its like a life crisis the way ur stuck in the middle ages**** could of been a better ending, flow ok, no hard punches, no multis, but all around decent no played punches at-less just wasnt good hard hitting ones.. ----------------------------------------------------------- This boys a joke, bad lyrics you know its him his blimp is broke*, like a bad show on Nickelodeon decent... Matter fact, hes missing his best friend a bad act, atleast we know where keenan and kel went** ok.. Hes from the illstate and his name is kelsick at this rate, people are dead cause he sucked dick no no and no.... I gotta kill him quick, just one more dead prick i'm burning him out like wicks, doing this shit for kicks ok.. We know i'm putting him to rest, with just one click Cuz he messed wit the BlackDeath, and his ass got sick WTF?? weak ending... flow ok, no punches, no multis no personal no noting really just flowing and no direct hits that had effect just work on those and u will be better.... ya preety even thou but good battle.... RETURN THE FAVOR OF A HONEST VOTE... |
02-06-05, 07:48 AM | #10 | ||
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Voted For: BlackDeathDB
punches-BD metals-none persnals-BD flow-BD struck-BD multis-none kelsick39 came weak as ur did to much explaining BlackDeathDB came weak but came harder than kelsick v/BD
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02-06-05, 01:38 PM | #11 | |
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^^^^^ see this is wat i was talkin about........ i sed to BlackDeath that we were suppose to explain EVERY bar so that it would be fair........ so i wouldnt lose votes for makin it seem like i had to explain every bar for u to get it...
ohhhh and sorry mage, wat i sed wasnt aimed at u, lol. |
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02-06-05, 01:41 PM | #12 |
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fine we'll just rematch a 3rd time, having every damn line explained....
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02-06-05, 01:42 PM | #13 |
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IP: A0C8 44A9
Voted For: kelsick39
kelsick39 - good drop man. good flow, good good structure, some solid punches and personals. lots of crazy personals acctually. you had a solid closer, probably my favourite line. good wordplay in there. overal nice drop. 7.5/10 BlackDeathDB - good verse aswell. punches weren't as hard though, and you didn't have as many personals. your vocabulary was pretty bland too. good structure and flow, but work on personals and punches and you'll get better. not bad....6/10 v/kelsick39 return the favour....links in the sig |
02-06-05, 01:53 PM | #14 | |
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IP: 34D2 D886
Voted For: BlackDeathDB
kelsick- i was feeling the nameplay.. you had some creative lines, the opener was decent.. Wen i punch, all u see is bleedin, a red head Cuz i'll leave the DB to rest on his Death Bed*** a Peasant a farmer, wat ur spittin is pitiful,wageless its like a life crisis the way ur stuck in the middle ages**** ^^Nice bars, aight punches... you had nice flow in these lines. You didn't have many personals but overall your verse was decent.. stop explaining ya punches, it's understood. BlackDeathDB- Matter fact, hes missing his best friend a bad act, atleast we know where keenan and kel went** nice personal... good job i was feeling ya personals in your verse.. Hes from the illstate and his name is kelsick at this rate, people are dead cause he sucked dick ^^nice personal, play on his location wit his name i wasn't feeling your closer.. but you had some personals good enuff to take this one, in my opinion.. good luck.. 1
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02-06-05, 02:00 PM | #15 |
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Voted For: kelsick39
V/kelsick........good battle kel gets my vote cause his verse was to the point it was consistently dissin BD he had creative punchs wit good personals an vocab......Blackdeath u had sum good lines in ur verse but it was as hard hittin as kel....ur diss's werent as consistent....no hate jus elavate...... punchs=kel vocab=kel structure=tie opener=kel closer=kel overall=Kelsick39 *RETURN THE FAVOR* |
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