okay post your verse in here

You think you a super-hero by havin an avi of Worlverine but in reality your lines blow//
gunna take your "metal inside" and melt it through ya skin, you'll say "man-neat-o"// (magneto)
Got ya spread all over like "peanut butter" all over this lyrical peice of bread//
beat down ya head, make you come too close to bein dead, so all your hopes i shread//
Comin in here all hard and thinkin you had somethin that i didnt, what would that be?//
let your lines hit the "blue crush" and let them smash, you might as well be "lost at sea"//
what word could i use to describe you, nothing considering you dont know wher to put a call out// (check frontlines right now)
Make you look like a teapot cuz they only "spit steam", go on i wont tell anyone that you pout//
every keystroke i make has you cowering behind ya name, but it dont got respect or power//
c'mon man you know that you got the respect, skill, even the anatomy of a flower//
if ya "run away" now i wont get a team, i'll say that "got lost" trying to find our thread//
dont need twenty lines to beat you, all you need to do is stay alive and use your head//

im done this is a grade a merking

You think you all tight cause u rappin on dis site well u aint, so dont even pick up tha pen and write// when i first met u, u never thought of rappin, all u thought about was runnin and bit*h slappin// You said u representin tha 920, but u come down to tha 414 i'll show u yo rymes just dont flo// me i think ur rymes are a little so so, but sometimes there as weak as austin powers mojo// So what u maybe i am a newbie but when im done writin ur moms is gunna want to sue me// You always be talkin about u gonna merk me,// well guess what yo rymes dont even put a smerk on me// and u say that ur tight, well when u started rappin ur mom was my first wife// look at ur icon its dragon ball z and ur makin fun of me cause i got wolverine// ur stupid im tired of dealin wit u man so why dont u throw ur weak rymes in tha fan//
U say this is a grade of merkin, but wait ur sister told me that she caught u jerkin// Im done with amp i'v made him known well guess what i think his speakers blown!

~mic~

uppin for votes in here.........this is good but wouldnt it be cool to be......off tha hizzle fo shizzle dizzle

yes we all want to vote on this :: waves hand in hopes of using never before used unawakened jedi powers ::

ok i cant poll vote but i will give you m feed back

amp: this is easily the best verse ive ever seen from you, some real nice punches laced in with some newbish punches but hey r still prety new to this

Mic: chnage your format...dont do this//anymore in//paragraph form cuz its// much harder// then reading it like this//

this is how you should//
do it from now on cuz its//
much much easier to read//
and it makes you look sless gay//

plus you had no solid punches in there so

vote: Amp

amp everytime i c one of ur verses it is so much more elevated then the last u had nice punches, the newb u need to elevate thas all i got to say n don do it paragraph form ne more is a bitch to read (makes it seem as if ther is less flow

^^ aight thats cool but this is uppin for some votes up in here alrighty........................thats cool now VOTE!!!!

Amp got this no doubt. punches wordplay everything. vote on my battle vs slim JD......................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

up up upping for some votes in this bieyaotch (<~~my special word) anyways poll vote or at least up this for me :: puppy dog face ::

AMP got this with better flow dissing and wordplay

Good battle mic but not hard enough


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=70711

up up uppin this fo sho' now hit this up with a poll vote so i can rip someone else.....haha naw just hit this up

my vote is amp better flow and punches good battle by both and please go vote on the d-mecca and shadow enigma battle holla front 1

yeah okay we all want this to close so i can go do something merry okay then so vote .

Niceee verse... but i ain't gonna say anything and sway the vote, just uppin this for both emcees
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