MYSTERIOSO IM'd me sayin he wanna battle again...
And i really aint got shit else to do... so here we go...


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MYSTERIOSO spit first
No Feeding
No Biteing
No Recycling
No Stretching
No Crew Votes
No Hate Votes
No D/R Votes...


Good Luck...You need it...

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LMAO If You Battle This Kid....Again...You Are A Herb...

1.) He Has No Record...He Could Be A Alias And Giving You Free Wins

2.) Battle Me If You're Not Scared

3.) I Bet After This Battle The Kid Will Never Post Again

4.) Your 14-2... Come On...

Just Giving My Opinions

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Shut The Hell Up Newbie.

I GOT THIS NIGGA SHELLSHOCKED
GOT MY SHELL COCKED/
ILL HIT THIS NIGGA LIKE LOCKS IN A SOCK
TIL U FIL U AINT ILL LIKE TYSON DID HOLYFIELD/
ITS REAL YOU KNOW WHAT THEY SAY
U THE PASS AROUND BITCH THAT GIVES EVERYONE AIDS/(YOU ILL)
I GUESS THATS HOW U GOT UR NAME
WHEN THE LUNATIC PART COMES WITH
6 KNIVES AND A NINE/
IM DONE LET THE VOTES COME CUZ IT DONT REALLY MATTER WHETHER OR NOT I WON

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IM UNSTOPPABLE
LIKE 50 IM UNPOPPABLE/
ILL PUT MORE WOOD IN YA GIRLS MOUTH THAN A POPSICKLE/

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Wanna do Round 2... ... Losing, kid your bound too
I'm spittin a pound through, ya hittin tha ground soon
Ya tried hoein Taktik... ... ... And quickly it got reversed
Get this kid a hurse, Cuz steppin ta me he gettin kursed
Better find a death bed, cuz he's been found by mortality
Fucka battle... ... i'll murder you in single line formality
Defeating this bitch... ... ... its no challange its to easy
Gettin ripped so breazy, i'd swear this bitch was Too Easy
I've beatin you 5-0 once... ... ... ...And I just did it again
Spittin lyrical sin, I done flipped this bitch apart and within

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LMFAO... i bet you are an alias...
So get off my nuts

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Dayuum. Mysterioso has to be a front, cause that flow simply and straight up blew. no one could rap that nasty and not want to lose. but i'll give ILLunitic the benefit of the doubt cause his rap was bangin'.

"Ill" You Know That I'm Correct...

Battle Someone Worth Battling Instead Of This Wack "Newbie"

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Shut The Hell Up Newbie.

... ...UPPIN for votes now... ...
And the underlined words
In my verse.. are links
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mysterioso fucking sucks........thats about it.... Too basic

ILL.....flow and structure was good....punches decent enuf to win... personals kilt him..... could work on ya vocab... but thats a minor thing

vote-ILLunatic

Hit this up with An honest vote....Thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103947

- MYSTERIOSO -

I GOT THIS NIGGA SHELLSHOCKED
GOT MY SHELL COCKED/
ILL HIT THIS NIGGA LIKE LOCKS IN A SOCK
Wack, simple rhyme scheme, no punch
TIL U FIL U AINT ILL LIKE TYSON DID HOLYFIELD/
Wack, and flow falls off after words
ITS REAL YOU KNOW WHAT THEY SAY
U THE PASS AROUND BITCH THAT GIVES EVERYONE AIDS/(YOU ILL)
I GUESS THATS HOW U GOT UR NAME
Pathetic, word play is simplistic, punch?
WHEN THE LUNATIC PART COMES WITH
6 KNIVES AND A NINE/
IM DONE LET THE VOTES COME CUZ IT DONT REALLY MATTER WHETHER OR NOT I WON
Really wack, bad closer, no punch either

Conclusion on MYSTERIOSO
There is a word that can describe this... hmm, what is it???
Ohh, I know wack... It was simplistic, horrible structure, the flow was easy like hores on a paycheck day. No punches that even caused contact from my point of view. You need to do more than elevate, Quite...



- ILLunatic -

Wanna do Round 2... ... Losing, kid your bound too
I'm spittin a pound through, ya hittin tha ground soon
its aight, but no punch, bad closer.
Ya tried hoein Taktik... ... ... And quickly it got reversed
Get this kid a hurse, Cuz steppin ta me he gettin kursed
aight personal, better the words though.
Better find a death bed, cuz he's been found by mortality
Fucka battle... ... i'll murder you in single line formality
pretty good line, It was straight
Defeating this bitch... ... ... its no challange its to easy
Gettin ripped so breazy, i'd swear this bitch was Too Easy
Bad wording, weak punch.
I've beatin you 5-0 once... ... ... ...And I just did it again
Spittin lyrical sin, I done flipped this bitch apart and within
pretty good finisher, had a little wit.

Conclusion on ILLunatic
It was a weak verse, But I know you didnt come your hardest. You had weak punches, and the word play was bad. YOu accually had punches and word play. Nice job trying to cover up the structure with the " ... ... ... " LOL. You did just enough to win this...

Vote - ILLunatic


Full Conclusion
ILL cam harder, and he did better than the other guy at everything. He did just enough, and I know that was just toying with him, LOL... Umm, thats all I really have to say. He just beat him at every subject of a battle...

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You damn... Sleepin sons of bitches
VOTE DAMN IT>...VOTE....<TI NMAD ETOV
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punches ill: Ya tried hoein Taktik... ... ... And quickly it got reversed
Get this kid a hurse, Cuz steppin ta me he gettin kursed
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personals ill: Wanna do Round 2... ... Losing, kid your bound too
I'm spittin a pound through, ya hittin tha ground soon
karo retire now please
overall illunatic

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peep mine in my sig

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