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.Flows. | 5 | 100.00% | |
Maku JaiiLiin | 0 | 0% | |
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05-17-04, 07:35 PM | #1 | |
atlas the vagabond
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Maku JaiiLiin vs. .Flows.
IP: 3E7F 0790
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no crew vote no d/r vote no h8r vote no biting no recycling must post within a day(24hrs) of mine or you're dq'd check in nigga |
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05-17-04, 07:36 PM | #2 | |
atlas the vagabond
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IP: 3E7F 0790
i'll spit first.....................................
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05-17-04, 07:51 PM | #3 | |
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IP: A28C 24B9
aight........go ahead lets make it 10 lines...Ill spit when I get back home....Have to go somewhere emergency....But make it 10 lines or no drop this is not a check in
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05-17-04, 07:55 PM | #4 | |
atlas the vagabond
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IP: 3E7F 0790
lmao, aight chump,(laughs at your fake emergency, g'head and get ya shit ready) but you still gotta post within a day of my verse
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05-17-04, 07:58 PM | #5 | |
:..you aint rockin shit..:
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IP: 8493 40D6
You know thats how we do makujaiilin. Serve em dawg.
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05-17-04, 08:09 PM | #6 | |
atlas the vagabond
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IP: 3E7F 0790
I’ll use a tek to hollow ya mind//
you proud bout dick size, with heat I’ll take ribs, then make you swallow ya pride// flames spit to you, disfigures ya face// Who am i? I am what you can’t be, like my signature states,// A cat who murked you, and is ditching the trace// Itching to say, to ya fam at ya wake, bout how piss dripped from ya waist// When this animal-man, mauled you to death// Crushed ya body wit palms, like eve, you see imprinted paws on ya chest*// I crippled you with a glance, you’re scared? I’ll run for you// If you kill me, I’ll escape from death, return and come for you//** *-the eve pic under his name **-Speaking of The Crow under my sig. let's go |
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05-17-04, 08:11 PM | #7 | |
atlas the vagabond
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IP: 3E7F 0790
oh yeah and for those of you who haven't seen .flows. text format, i just used his format against him, that's his font and he keeps a constant color...lol. is study my enemies, go bitch.
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05-17-04, 08:22 PM | #8 | |
huh~!
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IP: 4289 77F4
Ooooooooooooooooooooo Study Yo Enimies/ Den Elimidate Dem Ha Ha Ha Ha
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05-17-04, 09:06 PM | #9 | |
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aight check it....
Nigga pay attention my flows seem like they leave ya with stitches.... Ground ya in ditches,He has no friends so he hang with goth bitches... You simease fuck ya keep on fucking takin and bitin lines..... Flows leave ya with fines He so into with me he even studies my rhymes All around RB..Ya flows is seen...He cryin becuz im being mean.. Murk ya ass so much leave ya rainbows on ya computer screen... stay poppin with cap guns not with nines..Level Down to ya fuckin size Sayin "Dude" everywhere and giving high fives..Keep doing them untill ya paralized....... Wack People like you fuckin join german Cathlic families..Work on similies But if ya ever up to a challenge and ready for anotha murkin dont fuckin study ya enemies
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05-17-04, 09:36 PM | #10 | |
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IP: 4289 77F4
comeone lets get some votes.....i beat him....he came weak if ya think about it
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05-17-04, 09:49 PM | #11 | |
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IP: B60F 9354
I wanna battle dis MAku jaiiliin
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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness... ...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness... ...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts... ...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts... |
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05-17-04, 09:50 PM | #12 | |
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IP: B60F 9354
he got his nickname from a video game didnt he?...
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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness... ...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness... ...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts... ...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts... |
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05-17-04, 09:51 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 4289 77F4
lol I guess so.....Can ya vote in this battle....Who ya think won
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05-18-04, 02:51 PM | #14 | |
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IP: A28C 24B9
uppin
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05-18-04, 04:20 PM | #15 | |
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 4289 77F4
breakdown:
maku: before i do your breakdown im gonna let you know that your gettin points tooken off for stretched lines I’ll use a tek to hollow ya mind// you proud bout dick size, with heat I’ll take ribs, then make you swallow ya pride// ^^bad opener and 2nd line is double the lenght of 1st 3/10 flames spit to you, disfigures ya face// Who am i? I am what you can’t be, like my signature states,// ^^good punch 6/10 A cat who murked you, and is ditching the trace// Itching to say, to ya fam at ya wake, bout how piss dripped from ya waist// ^^how piss dripped from your waist...??? but good multies and punch 7/10 When this animal-man, mauled you to death// Crushed ya body wit palms, like eve, you see imprinted paws on ya chest*// ^^good personal stretched line 7/10 I crippled you with a glance, you’re scared? I’ll run for you// If you kill me, I’ll escape from death, return and come for you//** ^^decent finisher not that hott tho 5/10 overall: 29/50...woulda got like 38 if lines werent stretched .flows. Nigga pay attention my flows seem like they leave ya with stitches.... Ground ya in ditches,He has no friends so he hang with goth bitches... ^^hott opener good punch creative 8/10 You simease fuck ya keep on fucking takin and bitin lines..... Flows leave ya with fines He so into with me he even studies my rhymes ^^ok punch not hott 5/10 All around RB..Ya flows is seen...He cryin becuz im being mean.. Murk ya ass so much leave ya rainbows on ya computer screen... ^^list line gay 2nd line decent 4/10 stay poppin with cap guns not with nines..Level Down to ya fuckin size Sayin "Dude" everywhere and giving high fives..Keep doing them untill ya paralized... ^^good 2nd line first line kinda weak 6/10 Wack People like you fuckin join german Cathlic families..Work on similies But if ya ever up to a challenge and ready for anotha murkin dont fuckin study ya enemies ^^good personal about studyin enemies deent finisher 7/10 overall: 30/50 vote:.flows. maku work on your structure its a lil off...punches were decent work on those too...you got some good wordplay..widen your vocabulary..flows. you need to widen your vocab too use harder punches and better wordplay/multies ~!1!~
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