Come rookie, I'll rip you like a virgin's pussy, and watch you crumble like a cookie,/ Before you play hookey lemme school you, you made da common mistake fools do,/ Underestimate me and and I'll come-up greatly, your home is Stately/ and I'm about to make it mine, if your watch is chrome I'll take the time/ Here's my d**k give it a shine, so 'Can-I-Bus in ya eye till your blind?' is an irrelevant question?/I'm $ik of bitches and their sexual tension, all bouncin on my d**k like bicycle suspension,/ I'm about to throw up cuz I'm $ik, and I jus swallowed a whole lot o' dick,/ Nah your a One Minute man, bitch like a fish you have a minute attention span,/ but don't worry I'll fry you in a pan, before you realise,/ You can't see me cuz you're lookin at me through a bitches eyes,/

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Listen...ya style isnt complete ya come on this site butt naked
i Spit rhymes like a priest cus my shit be sooo sacred
Heard ya was in a Gangfight 'n' ya got Stabbed Nine Times
Ooh look its tha UK 50 cent but with sum Weakass Rhymes
I comply to apply an ass whoopin to tha guy Who Lies
Ya get that last line Kid? Ooh was it tooo complexed fo Ya eyes
And ya fuckin bite other sites, like insects in~a fuckin Warm Country
And if i was fuckin hit First by Tyson ya still couldnt land a Punch On Me
Plus his styles like a mans penis cus i aint Feelin It
Tha only human without salvia cuz he deffinetly Cant spit
Now I see why everybody you meet seems to Hate-Ya-Shit
Cuz when you accept the battle you constantly Wait-To-Spit
I Break-Ya-Clit that’s the only way your Not-Feelin-Me
And Im so Dope I gotta tell him in person Stop-Dealin-Me

UPPiN FOR VOTES........

yo i was feeling how myster shit started but si$ shit ended offical they both did them i cant vote its a tie in my eyes.

yo can you vote on my battles with daillest vs caliph and killa vs caliph vote honestly

uppin for votes...........................................

i think sik was gettin up towards the end, but i think myster.e was more consistent and made me laugh. . where as i felt kinda bored readin the beginning of siks verse.

well done to both of u but i got to give it to my man myster.e

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.......................Uppin for votes.................2

Break Down I
Myster E.- Yea You Started Out Good, But Towards The End You Fell Off, Flow Was On Point, Structure Was Eh.. You Needa Fix That.. Punches Were Here And There... They Ok.. Overal Ok Verse Not As Good As Ya Last One I Peeped..


$ik- Structure Was Good, Flow Was Decent, Wordplay Was Alright, The Multi Line Was Good, And Punches Hit... Overal Good Verse


Break Down II
Punches- Sik
Personals- Myster E.
Flow- Myster E.
Wordplay- Sik
Multis- Sik
Metaphors- Myster E.
Structure- Sik
Originality- Niether
Vocab- Tie

Final Vote- Sik

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mister e-structure/flow woz off.....u need to elevate that coz its important.
sum ok metas though.
punches were kinda basic..none really stood out,u did hve a few personals but they lacked.

sik.basically a solid verse.
gud use of multies,nice structure and flow....
punches were pretty decent,harder than misters...
nothin really to say apart from up ya personals..

vote-sik

PLZ RETURN THA FAV...IM 4-0 UP.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137536

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E's shit was a lil too ...sick.. nah mean. But sick had better punches and form. I like E's multis and all but sick came harder..

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my flows is picture perfect so no need for "cheezes"/

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i feel wut caliph said the verses were a bit equal 2 me n i also felt wut katastrofe said myster was a bit sick "I'm about to throw up cuz I'm $ik, and I jus swallowed a whole lot o' dick,/" i dunno wut 2 make of dat but da sick as in jus wrong but good rhymes 2 both vote:tie

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mrster e was winnin like a mothafucka the structure and da way his lyrics flowed

you both sucked that wasent very good it didnt make sense

mystery e cuz of his rhymes a punchlines i liked it

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