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J_Trooper 5 62.50%
A.M.O.K 3 37.50%
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Old 07-31-04, 01:33 AM   #1
A.M.O.K
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A.M.O.K vs J_Trooper

IP: 3043 2167

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10 Lines
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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-03-04 at 01:33 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.
 
Old 07-31-04, 01:34 AM   #2
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A.M.O.K has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 01:34 AM.
 
Old 07-31-04, 01:37 AM   #3
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J_Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 01:37 AM.
 
Old 07-31-04, 01:40 AM   #4
A.M.O.K
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A.M.O.K runs pass trash talking raps, moron flee fast
Cause I'll embrassess & drop 'J.T' like Cameron Diaz,
You've uploaded your Fams portrait onto you sig, kid
& it's so obvious your the bitch wearing the white singlet,
DO NOT ACT SMART NITWIT!!Follow what I say carefully
I'd belittle his words.... but he does it by himself perfectly,
Personals?You see, I'm full of them like matchmaker.com
Unlike him... like a J_Trooper bout in EFL... you'll see none,
'Born n the streets' huh?Only water squirts out of ya glocks
W/ blanks your fire... it's clear you were raised on Writers Block,

BOOM!!
 
Old 07-31-04, 01:46 AM   #5
~Luciano~
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I came in this with a Profound Image..... no time 4 this Gimmick
Im into "Battelin" ni99az that reflect spirit 2 me u is a Scrimmage

Look at ya Lyrical Maintenance you resemble no Preservation
Dismantle ya Tounsels so its impossible 2 hold a Conversation

sense the "Tension"when i enter ya buildin its full of Suspension
you wouldnt be safe if you had 50 cents entourage wit ya Men

my Amunition hits you with Percision, check ya rap Manual
this boy george,A.M.O.K Devour more meat than a Cannibal

ima make u feel me to the "T" this is nuthin but Simplicity
last time u seen Pussy.... u was watchin ya mother Pee
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Old 07-31-04, 01:51 AM   #6
A.M.O.K
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Old 07-31-04, 01:55 AM   #7
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Voted For: A.M.O.K

I don' t like all that gangsta talk first off all. but besides that AMOK came coo, he had better punches coz trooperkept talkin about guns.. AMOK had good stucture and better personals, so vote goes to him.. return favor with an honest vote in this battle will you?

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138556
 
Old 07-31-04, 01:58 AM   #8
schema
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From: SC
This was feedback posted for A.M.O.K

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A.M.O.K

A.M.O.K runs pass trash talking raps, moron flee fast
Cause I'll embrassess & drop 'J.T' like Cameron Diaz,
->>I really liked this line

You've uploaded your Fams portrait onto you sig, kid
& it's so obvious your the bitch wearing the white singlet,
->>so-so

DO NOT ACT SMART NITWIT!!Follow what I say carefully
I'd belittle his words.... but he does it by himself perfectly,
->>been done before

Personals?You see, I'm full of them like matchmaker.com
Unlike him... like a J_Trooper bout in EFL... you'll see none,
->>been done before

'Born n the streets' huh?Only water squirts out of ya glocks
W/ blanks your fire... it's clear you were raised on Writers Block,
->>pretty cool closer

It was close but I say you edged it out...yours made more sense and was more enjoyable to me
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Old 07-31-04, 01:59 AM   #9
schema
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Shit messed that up meant to vote for a.m.o.k but I was gonna leave feedback for both...my bad
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I got the lettuce and...
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Old 07-31-04, 02:03 AM   #10
killlah
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Voted For: J_Trooper

Yo dog why waste ya time wit cats who spit like this man its not even funny. Seriously that shit was Garbage on some real shit.
Vote goes to J

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Bdddddat lame cats get hit the fuck up so if you wanna talk get the fuck up and breathe easy.
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Old 07-31-04, 02:05 AM   #11
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Voted For: J_Trooper

This one was a close battle to call.

Both of the verses were hot as hell.

But I just felt more vibe comin from J Trooper.

J Trooper had better structure and couple more punches.

Overall my votes goin to J Trooper

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Old 07-31-04, 02:09 AM   #12
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This was feedback posted for A.M.O.K

IP: 59B3 099F

checking something,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Old 07-31-04, 02:10 AM   #13
Terumoto
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This was feedback posted for A.M.O.K

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A.M.O.K runs pass trash talking raps, moron flee fast
Cause I'll embrassess & drop 'J.T' like Cameron Diaz,

good flow, good punch, nice wordplay.

You've uploaded your Fams portrait onto you sig, kid
& it's so obvious your the bitch wearing the white singlet,

Decent punch.. this new battle system kinda fucked ya up.. cos it dont show sigs

DO NOT ACT SMART NITWIT!!Follow what I say carefully
I'd belittle his words.... but he does it by himself perfectly,

wierd rhyme... ok punch

Personals?You see, I'm full of them like matchmaker.com
Unlike him... like a J_Trooper bout in EFL... you'll see none,

first line was original... i liked it

'Born n the streets' huh?Only water squirts out of ya glocks
W/ blanks your fire... it's clear you were raised on Writers Block,

decent closer

over: pretty good verse... was feelin most of ya punches... aight flow
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Old 07-31-04, 02:13 AM   #14
KroNuz
 
From: New York
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TRooper Got A Dick Rider.... Protoge Posted 20 Freeposts In National Security Thread.. Than When He Had Enough Posts To Vote (20) Voted J Trooper In My Battle.. And Now He Come Here In Troops Other Battle And Votes Him Agian....
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Old 07-31-04, 02:25 AM   #15
raw killa
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Voted For: A.M.O.K

j trooper u definetly had good verse but im sry amok came harder wit nice punches n personals i give dis vote 2 amok

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