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6-10 Lines
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Check in by: 01-23-05 at 06:57 AM

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Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 06:30 AM.

Epic has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 06:31 AM.

Establishing my might, but epic cant handle da punches....
Like endurance tests wit fat bitches performing crunches...
Too hot for Epic, Den stay away from dis candle..........
Call me a toddler, w/e u bring will b like a toy 4 me 2 "Dismantle".
U got Fab in Ur avy, but i cud giv u "street dreams" by layin u out on da curb.
I mean shit,u MUST b dreaming of beatin me...its JUST absurd.
Ur alias is Hip Hop, well one swinga dis punch will make ur kidney pop.
An' yeah Epic can "pack heat" problem is hes lost da key 2 da lock!
Punches rock ur jaw, leave u wit fragile & lopsided expression..
Epics skillz descend & r not nessasary like business men @ da WSDepression!

Dun..

only explanation im doin is da last line da WSDepression is da wall street depression, and basically business men was not needed and his skillz desend like money u shud git it..<hiddan punch lol..

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Empire Vs Epic (3-3).
Empire Vs The Dex (1-1).
Empire Vs Tstorm (0-0).
Empire Vs Nemesis (3-1).
Empire Vs New Era (2-1).

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Empire Vs Epic (3-3).
Empire Vs The Dex (1-1).
Empire Vs Tstorm (0-0).
Empire Vs Nemesis (3-1).
Empire Vs New Era (2-1).

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Empire Vs Epic (3-3).
Empire Vs The Dex (1-1).
Empire Vs Tstorm (0-0).
Empire Vs Nemesis (3-1).
Empire Vs New Era (2-1).

checkin pollz.....................................

for some reason i get the feelin that this isnt the real Empire..... i mean, he hardly explained anything..... and its NOT in CAPSLOCK

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Voted For: Empire

Close battle!

Epic

His Imaginative Scheme Of Beating Me Is Like Walt Disney
Coz This Kid Get's Abused Daily How Bobby Hit's Whitney
^cool opener

Call Me An Emperor How I'm Owning This Kid Empire
I'll Whipe His Entire Career Coz C.A.L.I's Help Can't Amplify~Ya
^not feelin it

Kid's Skill Is A Retards Walking On A Tight Line At The Circus
I Burn His Fuel Out, So Like Gas Stations He's Out Of Service
^nice one

Kid Is So Whack.........That His Name Had To Be All Stolen
His Rhyme Scheme Is Shit, It Came Straight Out Of Is Collin
^decent decent

Like Fab He Has To Breath Coz I Left His Chest All Swollen
A Toy At The Store He Was Playable So Now I Own Em
^like the closer

Overall solid drop. Vocab n structure were tight and I was feeling your flow. Had some good punches and personals in there,sometimes bit played though. Wordplay was good,some creativity here and there.Keep at it...


Empire

Establishing my might, but epic cant handle da punches....
Like endurance tests wit fat bitches performing crunches...
^no punch but good wordplay

Too hot for Epic, Den stay away from dis candle..........
Call me a toddler, w/e u bring will b like a toy 4 me 2 "Dismantle".
^nice one

U got Fab in Ur avy, but i cud giv u "street dreams" by layin u out on da curb.
I mean shit,u MUST b dreaming of beatin me...its JUST absurd.
^hehe,like it

Ur alias is Hip Hop, well one swinga dis punch will make ur kidney pop.
An' yeah Epic can "pack heat" problem is hes lost da key 2 da lock!
^1st line bleh,2nd good

Punches rock ur jaw, leave u wit fragile & lopsided expression..
Epics skillz descend & r not nessasary like business men @ da WSDepression!
^hah,dope closer

Good job man! Had mad creative punches, some personals and flow was on lock. Vocab n structure were straight to the point, good wordplay, made me laugh here and there...

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Voted For: Empire

very close battle... imma have to give it to empire....

heres the reasons why...

empire you had some decent punches in there and some good multies that was what won you the battle.. your flow was on point but you need to work on your structure..

epic you had some good punches in there aswell but you fell off on the c.a.l.i line thats played already and the guy's only been here for 3 days i think... some of your lines i felt couldav been better...

overall i thought empire won this because of his harder punches and his multies... empire you need to work on your structure but apart from that this battle was good....

return the favour links in the sig... pz. no hate

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Voted For: Epic

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes

Voted For: Epic

Normal Punches-Epic, harder hitting and more of them. No self glorifying either. Empire, ok punches, but you self glorified which doesn't count, and brings down the verse.

Personal Punches-Tie, both had one, and both weren't that strong.

Metaphors-Epic, not that great metas, but more original than Empire's. Empire, ok metas, but not that original or hard hitting.

Multiple Rhymes-Neither

Structure-Epic, barely got this. Try to not use ......... and ~ to make it work. Empire, too many stretched lines, and too many ......

Flow- Epic, punches just kept flowing, did fall off much. Empire, fell of at the end, and a little in the verse.

Word Play- Neither

Epic- not your best verse, but you won it. Your punches kept coming and that's what won it. Use more wordplay and try more personals.

Empire- One of your best verses, but not good enough. Try better personals and try more wordplay.

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v/Epic

One Vote, One Battle, One Win.