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Indeph | 3 | 37.50% | |
Showstopper | 5 | 62.50% | |
Voters: 8. You may not vote on this poll |
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02-20-05, 06:48 PM | #1 | |
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Showstopper vs Indeph
IP: D3C0 ADFE
Battle Rules:
8 lines drop in 30 mins, kid No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-20-05 at 07:18 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. DQ'ed - went over 8 line limit |
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02-20-05, 07:03 PM | #2 | |
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IP: D3C0 ADFE
Showstopper has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 07:03 PM.
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02-20-05, 07:12 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Indeph has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 07:12 PM.
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02-20-05, 07:14 PM | #4 |
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Let me explain,how you got your name to lead up...
Showstopper comes out.......and people leave the arena... That's hurtful I know,but at least they awoke though.. I fit your name better,Cause I make niggas no show.. I feel bad for your coast though,it once had tight minds but with you on the team,the west proves why it aint the right side want my thrown? I know that you aimed but you missed though.. Always comin up short...but with the name of the bigshow..* All peronals used,alot wrong with you,but you know its ture so Your rankings so fuckin low,I can kneel and roll over you _____________________________________ *Bigshows' nickname was showstopper on the WWE fuck changin font g'luck
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02-20-05, 07:15 PM | #5 | |
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IP: D3C0 ADFE
Did some searching, and his girls name is April
You're a homo thug... on a man, you go down south And jus like yo sig, you like the rods up near yo mouth IGA my ass, I'll fuck your girl, I got the power Cuz when "April" rains, I jus "may" go and fuck her in the shower You're 14 yrs old, you're a stupid lil cunt Why the "periods", "bitch", is it that time of the month? You "beef" instigator, I'll "cook" you "well done" Cuz you're jus like a "burger", you go inbetween the "buns" |
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02-20-05, 07:58 PM | #6 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
Voted For: Indeph
this was an interesting battle but here's my opinion: opener: indeph voacb: both structure: indeph multis: indeph closer: showstopper it was close but indeph had a few more punches in his verse then showstopper did; & no hate but showstopper in battles diss the otha person more then throw 1 or 2 disses bout they girl make sure 2 return the favor |
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02-20-05, 08:01 PM | #7 | |
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IP: CF4E 8780
Voted For: Showstopper
haha funny asss shit man i thought your punches were creative a tad bit played though... but you jus kept it com'n your structure was a lil off but he i thought you kept yourself together thats why your gett'n my vote your punches were creative so you had this one punches//ss meta//ss wordplay//ss struc//indep appeal//ss vote//showstopper no hate ~1~
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02-20-05, 08:13 PM | #8 |
I walk & walk over you
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IP: 2853 3C9B
Voted For: Indeph
Indeph- Punches was good very decent. Flowed nicly. Personasl was good you picked up some info. Wordplays was decent. NEED SOME FUCKING MULTI'Z. Showstopper- Aiiiight, The punches here was good, they was some insults. Flowed good. Personasl you picked up was good. Wordplay can't say you have some, but you dont. Overall=This battle was good, SHowstopper you had some good punches with flow and personals. Indeph nice punches, with some good flow, and decent wordplay. My vote goes to indeph. I had read show's verse over and over, manly you was talking about his girl, you need to direct punches to HIM manly and then his girl. Indeph came harder with punches DIRECTED AT YOU! wun
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02-21-05, 02:41 PM | #9 |
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IP: C7EE 5FCD
Voted For: Showstopper
ok this was a close battle. both showed potential to come way harder than they did. Indeph's verse was just a bunch of punches on the name. they were good but they also weren't what i expected to see from you. show stopper on the other hand had a lot of gay punches. the April line was probably the one that won it to me cause that was maybe the the best line out of the battle. the rest of his was also aight like indephs. some of indephs was also maybe a lil better. so basically show stopper gets my vote. he one in my book because of 1 line
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02-21-05, 02:48 PM | #10 |
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This was feedback posted for Showstopper
IP: B123 EAEB
Both verses were wak
Indeph didnt even rhyme when he started off Showstopper openor was pure trash Elivate with punches and personals or quit battling |
02-21-05, 04:01 PM | #11 | |
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This was feedback posted for Indeph
IP: D3C0 ADFE
fuclk yAW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!
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02-21-05, 04:18 PM | #12 | |
Evolution
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IP: 5FDA 294F
Voted For: Indeph
nice verse indepth... you kept it simple but it was very effective... Let me explain,how you got your name to lead up... Showstopper comes out.......and people leave the arena... ^^ nice opener and good name play 8/10 That's hurtful I know,but at least they awoke though.. I fit your name better,Cause I make niggas no show.. ^^ nice punch 7/10 I feel bad for your coast though,it once had tight minds but with you on the team,the west proves why it aint the right side ^^ nice goof flow and alryyt punch 7/10 want my thrown? I know that you aimed but you missed though.. Always comin up short...but with the name of the bigshow..* ^^ good punch lol 7.5/10 All peronals used,alot wrong with you,but you know its ture so Your rankings so fuckin low,I can kneel and roll over you ^^ haha nice closure decent punch 7.5/10 i liked your verse alot... you had some decent punches in ther and a couple of gd personals well done... your flow went a lil but off point in a couple parts but it wasnt all that bad... overall ill give you: 37/50 showstopper: hmmmi didnt really like your verse that much... what iswith all the quotes.. your vocab was a little too simple for my liking you had a good personal in there and thats bout it... You're a homo thug... on a man, you go down south And jus like yo sig, you like the rods up near yo mouth ^^ spsoeit was ight not good punc though 5/10 IGA my ass, I'll fuck your girl, I got the power Cuz when "April" rains, I jus "may" go and fuck her in the shower ^^ good.. couldav been worded better... 6/10 You're 14 yrs old, you're a stupid lil cunt Why the "periods", "bitch", is it that time of the month? ^^ alryyt first line fell off 5.5/10 You "beef" instigator, I'll "cook" you "well done" Cuz you're jus like a "burger", you go inbetween the "buns" ^^ good closure and dcent punch and wordplay 6.5/10 overall ill give you: 23/50... i gave this to indepth becuz he had better punches better vocab wordplay and all in all a better verse... no hate... return the favout links are in the sig pz. |
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