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Khaos_daRenegade | 5 | 100.00% | |
BLACK | 0 | 0% | |
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02-24-05, 11:03 AM | #1 | |
Flyweight
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BLACK vs Khaos_daRenegade
IP: 964F D870
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02-24-05, 11:04 AM | #2 | |
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IP: 964F D870
BLACK has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 11:04 AM.
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02-24-05, 11:08 AM | #3 | |||
Flyweight
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IP: 964F D870
yo
i been hearin all dis yippity yap bout BLACK bein a newb but im battle niggaz back and forth like chinese do sushi so what makes dis nigga different? im bout to murk ya like no otha on twelve different pridicaments u wanted to battle didnt u? dont be like r-rated and duck i set it up, its up to u if u wanna drop or choke up but its cool doe cuz im gon close out wit dis line u cant beat me even if jackin me off was ya one way of not dyin *sissy
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"dark emcee" Quote:
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TONY GREEN=My RV Bitch SO DONE WIT RV |
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02-24-05, 11:09 AM | #4 | |
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IP: E226 DAB7
Khaos_daRenegade has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 11:09 AM.
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02-24-05, 11:38 AM | #5 | |
Light Weight
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IP: E226 DAB7
i cant believe im battlin u, dis niggas a joke...
say u got a lisence to kill but yo shit is revoked...* i know u like my stlye but kid just stop watchin... u made a song for dick ridahs so y dont u stop jockin... ill have u like yo avy,goin nowhere just boxed in... talkin sideways out yo dome'll get yo shit knocked in... talk shit and i kill all pussies outta amityville... cuz ya whole squad full of rats so yall randomly squeal... and up here in da chi all my niggas snipe heads... off fakers who think dey black cuz dey dirty white kids... and if u ask around da site the word is hes a newb... cuz he da only pussy askin "am i worthy of a crew"...** explanations:*in his bio he says he has a lisence to kill i just played off that. the fifth line is basically self explanatory and the last line is a diss on a thread he started heres the link http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177514 the rest u can figure out drop votes and a link ill return the fav
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02-24-05, 05:30 PM | #6 | |||
Flyweight
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IP: 497A 55A9
omg. dat shit was garbage nigga
u embarrasin yaself if u think u gone win ur nothin, my momz can rap betta than u lmfao at dat bullshit uppin yall. u know who won!
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"dark emcee" Quote:
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TONY GREEN=My RV Bitch SO DONE WIT RV |
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02-25-05, 03:26 PM | #7 | |
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IP: 0E25 3CDC
black u a pussy and u lost so shut up uppin this shit for votes
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02-26-05, 07:59 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 3D77 4FB8
damn niggas sleep came we get some votes ill return the fav ^^^^^^^^^^
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02-27-05, 11:43 AM | #9 | |
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IP: 0E25 3CDC
uppin dis shit we need some votes leave a link ill return the fav
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03-05-05, 09:35 PM | #10 | |||
Flyweight
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IP: 82A1 0A61
uppin............................................. ........
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"dark emcee" Quote:
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TONY GREEN=My RV Bitch SO DONE WIT RV |
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03-06-05, 09:16 PM | #11 | |
The Silent Killer
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IP: A5FF 6F6F
Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade
Khaos_daRenegade: "i cant believe im battlin u, dis niggas a joke... say u got a lisence to kill but yo shit is revoked..." That was awesome man, you kept a soild flow going. The part where it was gettin to: "ill have u like yo avy,goin nowhere just boxed in..." That was funny, and you thought it throught, although I read it fast at first and didn't know what you were talking about, but when I got it, it was good. you kept your shit together. BLACK: What can I say man... "yippity yap"...hahaha "u cant beat me even if jackin me off was ya one way of not dyin" Why would he be in the position to jack you off man??? I think you should put more thought into what you say man. It wasn't that well put together, you kept skipping around about things that don't make sense...Sushi? My vote goes to the obvious winner, Khaos_daRenegade.
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03-08-05, 09:01 AM | #12 | |
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IP: BC26 8DAC
yooo uppin dis shit for some more votes
if u vote drop a link i will return favors
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03-16-05, 03:14 PM | #13 | |
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IP: E2A9 E7B5
^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin dis shit for mo votes nigga^^^^^^^^^^^
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03-16-05, 08:58 PM | #14 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade
this was anotha 1 sided battle when i viewed both verses flow- khoas had it structured betta, & it sounded alot betta punches- k took this category wit sum his nice azz shit personals- k took this category 2 cuz he directed eva line towards black multi's- obviously, khoas win this wit his rhyme scheme & black u need 2 take a close look & u'll c vocab- khoas had this also while black was lacking in his & needs sum elevation no hating originality- khoas had the betta verse than black did in all aspects make sure 2 return the favor |
03-16-05, 10:55 PM | #15 | |
Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: 7F23 8EDF
Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade
yo this was a good battle.. some nice ideas.. heres how i saw it... Khaos - you had a good opener, and a good closer.. you had a good flow, that was easy to go along with, your vocab was good and ur structure was on point... your punches hit on target and u had a bit of humor in your verse i enjoyed it... fav line - "i cant believe im battlin u, dis niggas a joke... say u got a lisence to kill but yo shit is revoked..." Black - your verse was alite more simple, you didnt try and come hard, you didnt give it ur all, i didnt like your opener and ur closer was pretty soft... you had an O.k flow but i didnt enjoy ur verse as much, plus u need to expand on ur vocabulary and punches... fav line - didnt realli have one... opener - Khaos closer - Khaos flow - Khaos punches - Khaos vocabulary - Khaos structure - Khaos enjoyment - Khaos vote - Khaos no hate its just how i saw the battle...
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