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Khaos_daRenegade 5 100.00%
BLACK 0 0%
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Old 02-24-05, 11:03 AM   #1
BLACK
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From: amittyville, MI
BLACK vs Khaos_daRenegade

IP: 964F D870

Battle Rules:

8-unlimited lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
u know da rest

ready bitch?

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-24-05 at 02:03 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.
 
Old 02-24-05, 11:04 AM   #2
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Old 02-24-05, 11:08 AM   #3
BLACK
Flyweight
 
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From: amittyville, MI
IP: 964F D870

yo
i been hearin all dis yippity yap bout BLACK bein a newb
but im battle niggaz back and forth like chinese do sushi
so what makes dis nigga different?
im bout to murk ya like no otha on twelve different pridicaments
u wanted to battle didnt u? dont be like r-rated and duck
i set it up, its up to u if u wanna drop or choke up
but its cool doe cuz im gon close out wit dis line
u cant beat me even if jackin me off was ya one way of not dyin

*sissy
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..........BLACK..........
"dark emcee"


Quote:
Originally Posted by Kesse
i wish i was BLACK.......
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tony Green
yeah, i love BLACK

TONY GREEN=My RV Bitch

SO DONE WIT RV
 
Old 02-24-05, 11:09 AM   #4
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Old 02-24-05, 11:38 AM   #5
Khaos_daRenegade
Light Weight
 
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From: Chi-town
IP: E226 DAB7

i cant believe im battlin u, dis niggas a joke...
say u got a lisence to kill but yo shit is revoked...*
i know u like my stlye but kid just stop watchin...
u made a song for dick ridahs so y dont u stop jockin...
ill have u like yo avy,goin nowhere just boxed in...
talkin sideways out yo dome'll get yo shit knocked in...
talk shit and i kill all pussies outta amityville...
cuz ya whole squad full of rats so yall randomly squeal...
and up here in da chi all my niggas snipe heads...
off fakers who think dey black cuz dey dirty white kids...
and if u ask around da site the word is hes a newb...
cuz he da only pussy askin "am i worthy of a crew"...**

explanations:*in his bio he says he has a lisence to kill i just played off that. the fifth line is basically self explanatory
and the last line is a diss on a thread he started heres the link http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177514
the rest u can figure out
drop votes and a link ill return the fav
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Old 02-24-05, 05:30 PM   #6
BLACK
Flyweight
 
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From: amittyville, MI
IP: 497A 55A9

omg. dat shit was garbage nigga
u embarrasin yaself if u think u gone win
ur nothin, my momz can rap betta than u
lmfao at dat bullshit

uppin yall. u know who won!
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..........BLACK..........
"dark emcee"


Quote:
Originally Posted by Kesse
i wish i was BLACK.......
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tony Green
yeah, i love BLACK

TONY GREEN=My RV Bitch

SO DONE WIT RV
 
Old 02-25-05, 03:26 PM   #7
Khaos_daRenegade
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From: Chi-town
IP: 0E25 3CDC

black u a pussy and u lost so shut up uppin this shit for votes
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Old 02-26-05, 07:59 PM   #8
Khaos_daRenegade
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From: Chi-town
IP: 3D77 4FB8

damn niggas sleep came we get some votes ill return the fav ^^^^^^^^^^
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Old 02-27-05, 11:43 AM   #9
Khaos_daRenegade
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From: Chi-town
IP: 0E25 3CDC

uppin dis shit we need some votes leave a link ill return the fav
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Old 03-05-05, 09:35 PM   #10
BLACK
Flyweight
 
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From: amittyville, MI
IP: 82A1 0A61

uppin............................................. ........
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..........BLACK..........
"dark emcee"


Quote:
Originally Posted by Kesse
i wish i was BLACK.......
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tony Green
yeah, i love BLACK

TONY GREEN=My RV Bitch

SO DONE WIT RV
 
Old 03-06-05, 09:16 PM   #11
Ministry
The Silent Killer
 
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From: USA
IP: A5FF 6F6F

Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade

Khaos_daRenegade:

"i cant believe im battlin u, dis niggas a joke...
say u got a lisence to kill but yo shit is revoked..."

That was awesome man, you kept a soild flow going. The part where it was gettin to:

"ill have u like yo avy,goin nowhere just boxed in..."

That was funny, and you thought it throught, although I read it fast at first and didn't know what you were talking about, but when I got it, it was good.

you kept your shit together.


BLACK:

What can I say man...

"yippity yap"...hahaha


"u cant beat me even if jackin me off was ya one way of not dyin"

Why would he be in the position to jack you off man???


I think you should put more thought into what you say man.

It wasn't that well put together, you kept skipping around about things that don't make sense...Sushi?


My vote goes to the obvious winner, Khaos_daRenegade.
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Old 03-08-05, 09:01 AM   #12
Khaos_daRenegade
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From: Chi-town
IP: BC26 8DAC

yooo uppin dis shit for some more votes
if u vote drop a link i will return favors
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Old 03-16-05, 03:14 PM   #13
Khaos_daRenegade
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From: Chi-town
IP: E2A9 E7B5

^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin dis shit for mo votes nigga^^^^^^^^^^^
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Old 03-16-05, 08:58 PM   #14
A_M_H
Banned: Cheating
 
IP: A3EA 639E

Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade

this was anotha 1 sided battle when i viewed both verses

flow- khoas had it structured betta, & it sounded alot
betta
punches- k took this category wit sum his nice azz shit
personals- k took this category 2 cuz he directed eva
line towards black
multi's- obviously, khoas win this wit his rhyme scheme
& black u need 2 take a close look & u'll c
vocab- khoas had this also while black was lacking in his
& needs sum elevation no hating
originality- khoas had the betta verse than black did in
all aspects

make sure 2 return the favor
 
Old 03-16-05, 10:55 PM   #15
BiZzO
Ka.Nek.ShuN
 
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From: .::Aus::.
IP: 7F23 8EDF

Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade

yo this was a good battle.. some nice ideas.. heres how i saw it...
Khaos - you had a good opener, and a good closer.. you had a good flow, that was easy to go along with, your vocab was good and ur structure was on point... your punches hit on target and u had a bit of humor in your verse i enjoyed it...
fav line - "i cant believe im battlin u, dis niggas a joke...
say u got a lisence to kill but yo shit is revoked..."

Black - your verse was alite more simple, you didnt try and come hard, you didnt give it ur all, i didnt like your opener and ur closer was pretty soft... you had an O.k flow but i didnt enjoy ur verse as much, plus u need to expand on ur vocabulary and punches...
fav line - didnt realli have one...

opener - Khaos
closer - Khaos
flow - Khaos
punches - Khaos
vocabulary - Khaos
structure - Khaos
enjoyment - Khaos
vote - Khaos
no hate its just how i saw the battle...
 
 


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