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Old 05-27-05, 04:43 PM   #1
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(6)SPuL aka Reckless Vs. (31)Kesse

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Please drop the same verse that you had written before the previous battles were deleted.

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Old 05-27-05, 10:44 PM   #2
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^his pic, also Wet-willy was d/rin' him in a thread. so that's why shit in closer. Anyways let's do this:

*picks up mic*

Lookin' at your pic, I see you suffer from the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in your cheeks, to feed 7 thirdworld countries
Facin' an "alien" like you? Nope, not what I demanded
Shit, look at the light behind you, man, your mothership jus landed!!
Damn, kid, you're a mistake, wit skater shirt. Dude, you're wack to me
Your birth certificate?...................................... ........
.................................................. .. A sorry letter from condom factories
You could race against turtles and slugs, but couldn't beat 'em
Man, you couldn't come in first, if you replaced Adam in Eden
And you kno Canadian's gay, and always doggy style fuck
Y'all only do it that way, so y'all can BOTH watch the puck
Kid, sittin' wit all that "hair"..... he looks like a "Survivor" nut
If this shit was the show, Drake's not the only thing that should be cut

*beat stops*

Wet Willy shoves his dick up Drake's behind, cuz that shit makes him cushy
Then he shoves it down Drakel's mouth, cuz it's the closest he gets to pussy

*throws mic to the ground and does moon-walk and a handstand*

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Old 05-28-05, 03:28 AM   #3
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officially back now, RV's better off, so this bitch should know
the only time you'll have a hit single, is inpersonating ichiro
while RV has had its fill of whack lately, spul is over-eating
you got re-named 'rec-less' after you were banned for cheating
look into comedy man, you got some talent there, thats a fact
you could really make it big, just make your text is the act
ya hit bottom, so after a year you think the only place to go is higher
shit, you're known by two names but yet i still havn't heard of either
aint mushroom for losers, especially when its you whos molding a career
cause only time you pounding anybody, is when youre holding their beers
spul aint nobody to fear, just a wannabe tryna hold a mic
i pitch my verse to him, blows by like its his third strike
aint no competition, spul needs a boost to come out with the greater grade
so he goes sucks off some crocs, cause he saw a commercial for gator-ade
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Old 05-28-05, 06:50 PM   #4
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this is a close one...... ill vote later but Drakels whole verse was a dissaplointment after those first two real hot bars
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Old 05-28-05, 06:53 PM   #5
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damn ain't nobody wanna vote on our battle
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Old 05-28-05, 07:03 PM   #6
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SPuL aka Reckless
Lookin' at your pic, I see you suffer from the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in your cheeks, to feed 7 thirdworld countries
—5, decent punch, didn’t like the fat-cheeks part.. but the 7 3rd world was decent
Facin' an "alien" like you? Nope, not what I demanded
Shit, look at the light behind you, man, your mothership jus landed!!
—6, pretty decent, could’ve made this punch harder than this
Damn, kid, you're a mistake, wit skater shirt. Dude, you're wack to me
Your birth certificate?...................................... ........
.................................................. .. A sorry letter from condom factories
—4, could’ve worded it better + an okay punch
You could race against turtles and slugs, but couldn't beat 'em
Man, you couldn't come in first, if you replaced Adam in Eden
—3, lol who the fuck is Adam in Eden??.. who cares though, punch is weak
And you kno Canadian's gay, and always doggy style fuck
Y'all only do it that way, so y'all can BOTH watch the puck
—4, ..nah, punch needs work
Kid, sittin' wit all that "hair"..... he looks like a "Survivor" nut
If this shit was the show, Drake's not the only thing that should be cut
—6, an aight punch
Wet Willy shoves his dick up Drake's behind, cuz that shit makes him cushy
Then he shoves it down Drakel's mouth, cuz it's the closest he gets to pussy
5, decent closer

Overall – SPuL aka Reckless had 33/70

Drakel
officially back now, RV's better off, so this bitch should know
the only time you'll have a hit single, is impersonating ichiro
—6, haha, 1st line was wack, 2nd good opener
while RV has had its fill of whack lately, spul is over-eating
you got re-named 'rec-less' after you were banned for cheating
—6, good
look into comedy man, you got some talent there, thats a fact
you could really make it big, just make your text is the act
—5, decent punch
ya hit bottom, so after a year you think the only place to go is higher
shit, you're known by two names but yet i still havn't heard of either
—2, no
aint mushroom for losers, especially when its you whos molding a career
cause only time you pounding anybody, is when youre holding their beers
—3, nah, u going downhill now
spul aint nobody to fear, just a wannabe tryna hold a mic
i pitch my verse to him, blows by like its his third strike
—5, an okay punch here
aint no competition, spul needs a boost to come out with the greater grade
so he goes sucks off some crocs, cause he saw a commercial for gator-ade
—4, an okay punch

Overall – Drakel had a 31/70

Winner = SPuL aka Reckless
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Old 05-28-05, 07:06 PM   #7
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^damn, man, Adam and Eve lmao. You don't kno them? Garden of Eden? but props for vote. up.....
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Lol....u said Eden...not eve hoecakes
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Old 05-28-05, 07:12 PM   #9
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Lol....u said Eden...not eve hoecakes

^lmao I kno!!!! Adam and Eve from the Garden of EDEN!!! lol it's coo tho. You aren't Christian I assume? lol up
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Old 05-28-05, 07:32 PM   #10
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Lookin' at your pic, I see you suffer from the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in your cheeks, to feed 7 thirdworld countries
^^decent opener, but i didnt quite see the fat part..its ok thou..lol..7/10
Facin' an "alien" like you? Nope, not what I demanded
Shit, look at the light behind you, man, your mothership jus landed!!
^^setup was eh, but punch was funny as hell in my opinion..8.5/10
Damn, kid, you're a mistake, wit skater shirt. Dude, you're wack to me
Your birth certificate?...................................... ........
.................................................. .. A sorry letter from condom factories
^^setup was choppy, punch was short n not very effective...5.5/10
You could race against turtles and slugs, but couldn't beat 'em
Man, you couldn't come in first, if you replaced Adam in Eden
^^wouldve been better if this was the final match#1, get me..?
but it was still a decent punch.....7/10

And you kno Canadian's gay, and always doggy style fuck
Y'all only do it that way, so y'all can BOTH watch the puck
^^lol,.ya this was decent... ya'll x 2 just didnt sound right
but it was an ok bar/punch.............................7/10
Kid, sittin' wit all that "hair"..... he looks like a "Survivor" nut
If this shit was the show, Drake's not the only thing that should be cut
^^ok bar n meta........................................7.5/10

*beat stops*

Wet Willy shoves his dick up Drake's behind, cuz that shit makes him cushy
Then he shoves it down Drakel's mouth, cuz it's the closest he gets to pussy
^^??...lol, nah i want feein this at all
seemed pushed n rushed like you wrote it right before you dropped
ya verse n didnt even bother to read it twice............3/10

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good drop, commedial punches which were funny, alien line was great
complexity was minimal, personal were there, verse was good overall..45.5/70

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officially back now, RV's better off, so this bitch should know
the only time you'll have a hit single, is inpersonating ichiro
^^nice, punch was clean.........................8.5/10
while RV has had its fill of whack lately, spul is over-eating
you got re-named 'rec-less' after you were banned for cheating
^^decent, but false.........^^wasnt after.....but decent..7/10
look into comedy man, you got some talent there, thats a fact
you could really make it big, just make your text is the act
^^punch seemed to be worded all wrong..??..what happened...4/10
ya hit bottom, so after a year you think the only place to go is higher
shit, you're known by two names but yet i still havn't heard of either
^^decent, but not hard hitting....................................6/10
aint mushroom for losers, especially when its you whos molding a career
cause only time you pounding anybody, is when youre holding their beers
^^i almost didnt get this,....setup was worded a bit off..
but punch was original as hell, n the lay-text/spul threads support it
but these were dropped before the whole deleting korv incident......8.5/10

spul aint nobody to fear, just a wannabe tryna hold a mic
i pitch my verse to him, blows by like its his third strike
^^concept was blah, punch wasnt really any good......5/10
aint no competition, spul needs a boost to come out with the greater grade
so he goes sucks off some crocs, cause he saw a commercial for gator-ade
^^setup was koo, punch lacked...........................4/10
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verse had some strong points, but some bad wording issues
rendered alot of your punches useless n didnt let them connect
all in all, ok verse thou kesse.....................44/70

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speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 05-28-05, 07:35 PM   #11
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aiight appreciate vote. 2-0. uppin'........ good battle drake
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Old 05-29-05, 03:07 AM   #12
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Damn, kid, you're a mistake, wit skater shirt. Dude, you're wack to me
Your birth certificate?...................................... ........
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^^^^^^^^omg that was dope no lie lol
Facin' an "alien" like you? Nope, not what I demanded
Shit, look at the light behind you, man, your mothership jus landed!!
^^^^^^^^^omg *dies*
lmfao spul got this them 2 lines is 10/10
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Old 05-29-05, 04:12 AM   #13
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wordness......props to spul, at least it was kinda close, lol
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Old 05-29-05, 07:19 AM   #14
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sPuL:

Lookin' at your pic, I see you suffer from the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in your cheeks, to feed 7 thirdworld countries
^^ lol nice opener decent punch 7/10
Facin' an "alien" like you? Nope, not what I demanded
Shit, look at the light behind you, man, your mothership jus landed!!
^^ ROFL this was dope 8/10
Damn, kid, you're a mistake, wit skater shirt. Dude, you're wack to me
Your birth certificate?...................................... ........
.................................................. .. A sorry letter from condom factories
^^ another killer bar 8/10
You could race against turtles and slugs, but couldn't beat 'em
Man, you couldn't come in first, if you replaced Adam in Eden
^^ good wordplay decent punche here 7/10
And you kno Canadian's gay, and always doggy style fuck
Y'all only do it that way, so y'all can BOTH watch the puck
^^ lol nice play in the canadians 8/10
Kid, sittin' wit all that "hair"..... he looks like a "Survivor" nut
If this shit was the show, Drake's not the only thing that should be cut
^^ ok i aint really feelin it though 6/10

*beat stops*

Wet Willy shoves his dick up Drake's behind, cuz that shit makes him cushy
Then he shoves it down Drakel's mouth, cuz it's the closest he gets to pussy
^^ lol kinda played but its ok i guess 6/10

50/70

you had a good solid verse some dope personals and some funny punches in there... nice drop


Drakel:

officially back now, RV's better off, so this bitch should know
the only time you'll have a hit single, is inpersonating ichiro
^^ lol nice opener dope punch 8/10
while RV has had its fill of whack lately, spul is over-eating
you got re-named 'rec-less' after you were banned for cheating
^^ nice nameplay dope punch 8/10
look into comedy man, you got some talent there, thats a fact
you could really make it big, just make your text is the act
^^ ok i spose couldav been worded better 7/10
ya hit bottom, so after a year you think the only place to go is higher
shit, you're known by two names but yet i still havn't heard of either
^^ not as good as the other 3 bars 6/10
aint mushroom for losers, especially when its you whos molding a career
cause only time you pounding anybody, is when youre holding their beers
^^ i dont get it 5/10
spul aint nobody to fear, just a wannabe tryna hold a mic
i pitch my verse to him, blows by like its his third strike
^^ not bad but not good either 6/10
aint no competition, spul needs a boost to come out with the greater grade
so he goes sucks off some crocs, cause he saw a commercial for gator-ade
^^ lol decent closure 7/10

47/70

you had a decent verse but i felt that you didn't have as harder punches as sPuL did... you should stay consistant through the verse then the outcome wouldav been different...


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