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11-13-05, 11:05 PM | #1 | ||||
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23. Macca vs. 24. Daubs
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11-14-05, 02:35 AM | #2 | ||||
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yes... checking in. g'luck.
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11-14-05, 01:58 PM | #3 | ||||
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All the mouth you been giving,
lets see what happens. G'luck.
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11-16-05, 12:39 PM | #4 | ||||
NO SURRENDER
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I kill the small frys off first, but then just tackle the bigger
even eating healthy wont help you...when apple the trigger meh. drop soon
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11-16-05, 09:00 PM | #5 | ||||
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Ur punches are as effective as DARE keeping kids of drugs
Like ALWAYS when you suck...... you highlight and cut there. and if you don't get the punches I feel sorry for you. start voting.
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11-16-05, 09:28 PM | #6 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Vote - Daubs
.....Macca's didn't even really rhyme
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11-16-05, 09:31 PM | #7 | ||||
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well good job daubs. you got the first vote.
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11-16-05, 09:35 PM | #8 | |||||
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IP: 0825 899A
v/daubs as well....cuz macca yours really didnt rhyme
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11-16-05, 09:41 PM | #9 | ||||||
Flyweight
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The two guys that posted above me explained very well
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11-16-05, 09:43 PM | #10 | ||||
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omg. it just didn't rhyme. why don;t you tell daubs what quality he had in his bar. jeez. doesn't rhyme is fucking stupid.
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11-16-05, 09:47 PM | #11 | |||||
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well we dont have to cuz someone coulda dropped this
your a pice of shit ill win with one hit cuz it rhymed this is text....and its a single punch....if it doesnt rhyme it defeats the purpose
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11-17-05, 03:30 AM | #12 | |||||
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Both were Garbage
But ima go wit Daubs on this 1
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11-17-05, 03:31 AM | #13 | |||
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V/ - Daubs
Daubs bar was pretty weak, he had a played concept he worked with and forced his wordplay in the second line with the "apple" part. Macca, also very weak bar, forced the wordplay, there is no need to capitalise parts of your bars, and also it did rhyme, but not that well, that was the main reason why your bar was so weak, the concept was also played to. |
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11-17-05, 06:10 AM | #14 | |||||
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Daubs Got this both was weak both shoulda came harder sall good though...
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11-17-05, 07:57 AM | #15 | ||||||
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 5D49 90CF
V/daubs.........
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