Rhyming Like EMINEM

Look cats rate my dome as stupid I’ll get the microphone
And loop it around your neck like Clint Eastwood gone
And hang em high so go ahead and make my day you fake
Anyway got plenty of Dre for you sucker NWA ready to make
Another hit brothers can spit like I do and when Ice Cube
Is not a nice dude I get my AK and walk away after I heist his food?
Or get on my Honda go borrow JLO's Anaconda he don’t like snakes
Hardcore program, doors go slammed in my face taking Kim out for steaks
So we can make up for Haley sake, so we at the golden Corral
And this dude walks up talks corrupt like he knows my wife Kim
Ready to knife him so what? You never seen ass before? Life’s dim
I started to freak or whatever so Kim yall sleep together? Oh no
Just friends, so yo dawg kim got a man and that’s me on the down low bro
Oh fuck now feeble and misled wanna stick needle in my head
Dude best get lost it’ll be a rude cost in my gun blast forgot no bullets
Then ready to pistol whip this ass brain starting to slip fast ready to pull it

maddrapper is backkk

29 peeps and only one response come on yall let the cat out the bag

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Rhyming Like EMINEM

Look cats rate my dome as stupid I’ll get the microphone
And loop it around your neck like Clint Eastwood gone
And hang em high so go ahead and make my day you fake
Anyway got plenty of Dre for you sucker NWA ready to make
Another hit brothers can spit like I do and when Ice Cube
Is not a nice dude I get my AK and walk away after I heist his food?
Or get on my Honda go borrow JLO Anaconda he don’t like snakes
Hardcore program, doors go slammed in my face taking Kim out for steaks
So we can make up for Haley sake, so we at the golden Corral
And this dude walks up talks corrupt like he knows my wife Kim
Ready to knife him so what? You never seen ass before? Life’s dim
I started to freak or whatever so Kim yall sleep together? Oh no
Just friends, so yo dawg kim got a man and that’s me on the down low bro
Oh fuck now feeble and misled wanna stick needle in my head
Dude best get lost it’ll be a rude cost if my gun blast forgot no bullets
Then ready to pistol whip this ass brain starting to slip fast ready to pull it

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10-25-2005, 06:01 PM #2
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This was not eminem, this was you, but you killed the shit. You the best, seriously. You need to quit doing RM and put on shows dog. I feel your flow homey. Word, for real. You the illest like Willis.
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Rhyming Like EMINEM

Look cats rate my dome as stupid I’ll get the microphone
And loop it around your neck like Clint Eastwood gone
And hang em high so go ahead and make my day you fake
Anyway got plenty of Dre for you sucker NWA ready to make



I thought your opener was whack.


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Hardcore program, doors go slammed in my face taking Kim out for steaks
So we can make up for Haley sake, so we at the golden Corral
And this dude walks up talks corrupt like he knows my wife Kim
Ready to knife him so what? You never seen ass before? Life’s dim
I started to freak or whatever so Kim yall sleep together? Oh no
Just friends, so yo dawg kim got a man and that’s me on the down low bro




I'm feelin that part, though. Props.

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10-25-2005, 07:40 PM #4
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hey thanks for the props for real yall

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shit was kool

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10-26-2005, 05:46 AM #6
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Hey Yall Thanks For The Props On This One For Real Yo

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that was nothing like eminem.... but i was still feeling it, keep it up dawg
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your opener coulda been a lil thighter but your all round flow is sick
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thanks for the propls yall got to keep droppin gfor real

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LMAO!! @ this piece, NO...not because it is funny, but because it is weak.

dude you need a hobby, the rhyimin was basic like fuck...
the overall feel of the piece made me think you were a herb....

...but hey, ure MADDRAPPER....so close enough....

flow was ok, prolly the best part of the piece, up ure shit......3/10

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Nick Fletcher ok fletch thanks for the critique but i dropped a little taste of this in your thread i can you don' tlike it but yo dawg that piece in your thread shows i have vocab if I choose to use so the elevation factor maybe revresed holla back dawg

there no way this flows to a beat the way its written..
'its mainly run on sentences', did you take english in school?
i mean everything ive read by you is crammed with nonsense
and i can tell you only have one thing in mind when writing
.......multiple syllable ryhmin...... which you try way to hard at
cuz you dont succeed....

this could flow to a beat dont listen to a gay ass text head^^^^^^^anyways it could flow depending on your flow with it you could pull it off.it does have a eminem type flow in parts.problem is theres no punchlines here.theres nothing to make me ohh or ahh or even think its jammed with nonsense like jack said.i think instead of trying to be eminem try making your own niche and maybe youll be nice one day.just honest feedback.

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like i said..."the way its written"..gay ass text head...stfu cali..
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This was OK...
A few parts at the beggining ain't make much sence.
but for the most part..it was ite..

Does seem like Eminem by the way you accented some of ur rhymes....

So...yea...it was ite...

thanks for the props and critique and natural killa most of all thanks for being real dawg

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