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Sixth Sense 06-07-05 05:47 PM

Everything Average
 
EVERYTHING AVERAGE


This world is all the same it always has a ritual
To maintain our everyday life is all just typical
Our visions sees everything the same, nothing too spectacular
Everything forms into the same thing, life is nothing regular
Just the illuminations,
We stay in the position we go through and follow our footsteps
It’s wrong to turn back and turn bad we must follow the good steps
Everything just seems average nothing outstanding
All we look forward its what we want demanding
Just the stairs,
This is just an average life everything the same
Nothing in our powers can do to help it change
There’s always an average up and an average down
Everything that we live for is what happens now
Just the similar,
The average color is always dull no color to be seen
Stays that way just so it can look dreadful and mean
Usually there’s something that makes life un-normal
Everybody is uptight down right to the done formal;
Just the clothes,
We stay with a good capture of our everyday life
Like a picture in our mind we don’t forget the time
We close the brain and just unwind the rolls of negatives
Capture the portrait into a canvas and see nothing shifts
Just the enlargement,
Everything is mediocre we stay adequate but not good
Everything in life must stay the same I wish it just could
Change so we can live our own life and not be controlled like a puppet
We get thrown away like garbage in the dumpster all we do is dump it
Just the trash,
So we keep the changes to ourselves so it can’t be removed or altered
We live by the same failures but do we live by the faulted

Sixth Sense 06-07-05 05:48 PM

Links-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=154818
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193914

Sixth Sense 06-07-05 09:25 PM

uppin cmon pplz askin for more feed aight stop sleepin

Sixth Sense 06-08-05 07:00 AM

uppin this plz leave feed

Sixth Sense 06-08-05 05:53 PM

yo uppin this man plz leave feedback ok pplz cmon stop sleepin

Sixth Sense 06-09-05 01:39 PM

nobody leaves feed uppin this again for feedback

Kronos 06-09-05 02:32 PM

This piece was good, vocab was on point, started it off and ended it strong, and the imagery was decent, some lines was a little stretched out though

Ghost 06-09-05 03:19 PM

This Was nice Famz!Nice Structure VOCAB was good Was Really Feelin It Homie Honestly!keep it up n my overall ( 8/10 ) Holla ATcha Boy!
RTF PLEAZ IN MY NEW OM:( Many Wayz Too Die) LINK BELOW

Crazy Hades 06-09-05 04:10 PM

Check out my battle against him, then...

Sixth Sense 06-09-05 06:29 PM

^^yea thnx for the comments finally i got sum ppl to check them out
and kein thats a good way for pplz to get the votin on the battle lol yea

ill rtf in time ok thnx yall

Sixth Sense 06-10-05 08:10 AM

ok uppin this for more feed lets go pplz cmon feed aight

Sixth Sense 06-12-05 10:33 AM

upppin for more feed plz thnx in advance

Sixth Sense 06-12-05 07:34 PM

cmon pplz lets get some more feedback aight yall

Sixth Sense 06-13-05 11:07 AM

uppin this let gets sum more feedback on this aight

Sixth Sense 06-14-05 12:17 PM

cmon peeps check this out and leave feed o it aight


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