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Aiight me to son now we jus wait for votes. AY son you aint that bad for 11 or 12 you pretty good.
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Yo man, let me take whitey next, I've been looking for another rookie to battle me for a while.
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thx man i was nervous at first, but man i jus wanna rhyme i dont care about winnig or losing right now... ill worry about that when the votes bein casted
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Aiight Kid-Dizzle vote on tha battle too son. DOnt unda estimate his ass though hes aiight for 11 years old.
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Whitey, I see you got some flow, you wanna go a round with me?
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man i might not be able to p-dizzle im goin to mu cuzins house for the day and they ban me from the house so... but ill do it tonight or tomorrow fo sho
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yo wolf start uppn votes cause we only got one
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Aight bro, just let me know when you wanna. But I voted on your guys' battle, so how bout y'all return the favor? Remember, vote honestly. Thankns, 'preciate it.
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139283 vs. Leroy Lyric http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138941 vs. Avanish http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138907 vs. Phatinum |
ayyo wolf or anybody? whats verse structure? cause someone said mine was horrible but i dunno what it is
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Your rhymes was in a paragraph nex tim make it like dis
for example aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa like mine was |
so im tryn ta make it messy sorta?
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