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Voted For: e-dubz
20- umm ya shit was decent but not NICE. but i think you can defninatly elevate some more . punches and perosnals werent that nice, just didnt like it very much....5/10 dubz- ehh ive seen better. you fucked up and put self-glorification but overall ou had better punches not really any personals but i dont think u needed them....7/10 return the favor....links in da sig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: 20 GraND
flow-e-duba,20 grand was good too but that ez line is only thing that messed it up wouldve gotten this punches/personals-20 grand, nice punches hit lot harder and were more creative then e-dubas, both did good on this but 20 grand killed it, good punches creativity-20 grand, punches sounded more creative and were better but both did good here also no hate on noone both did good peace |
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uppin this fuckin battle again..
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uppin this shit..
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yo lets get this popN, UPPN MAYNE
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Voted For: 20 GraND
Yo aaight............ . Opener-20 Closer-20 Wordplay-20 Punches-20 Multies-Dubs Personals-Neither Overall Best Verse-20 . This was a weak battle....but i got to go wit 20 for obious reasons.....dubs-i wasnt feelin your shit and even if i was you would still lose..........but keep elevatin i see real potential in you.......20-nice word play but you can still elevate alot.....the only thing i saw that you were missin was personals yall should go to the tutorials it helps alot.....V/20 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
UppN.. quit being a bitch and reseting that battle... this will be the 3rd time ive murked u now...
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Uppn, come on this cat keeps disqualifying all votes so explain ight 1
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Voted For: 20 GraND
Lyrics:20 Opening:20 ending:20 Metas:neither Multies:neither Personals:20 Originality:20 Wordplay:20 Punchs:20 as you can see it is 20-grand wit the win return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=151021 insane16 (up 2-0) http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149715 Lil-Youngstah (up 2-0) Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: 20 GraND
yo 20grand killed him with this one i liked it a hell of a lot better it was such a good verse you win this one boy Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo why was my vote dqed
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Voted For: e-dubz
edubz won.. better flow, better punches, i gotta give it to him.. his punches seemed more thought out to me and they were more clever.. some of the shit 20grand said was coo too, but in the long run, edubz had better set ups and punches that landed pretty good, punches win battles, so i gotta give it to edubz.. the flow, structure and all that other shit was a tie, so close battle ya'll, but e wins.. return honest vote right here plz, thanx.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152255 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: 20 GraND
20grand got this won i like the flow and the battle was something i had 2 think about but 20 grand flow wass better but not by much so i think 20 grand just pulled this one off... but it;s my opinion Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: e-dubz
ok e dubz good opener aint devoloped yet good diss there nice punches throughout ender was dope and true as fuck lol good structure nice multis good vocab a around decnt verse here a 8.5/10 20 grand ok opener madd played there was a thread about gun lines and sic lines being the most played on r.v and they are 2nd bar corny and not good at all the coupon punch was dope as fuck ender aint play out right weak there ok structure little streched in places but ok vocab good no multis a 7/10 you both had pretty good verse but e dubz had harder punches and better even though 20 had the hardest punch with that coupon shit that was really his only hard one there plus e had better flow and multis so he gets my vote here |
Voted For: e-dubz
E-dubs... ima rape this bitch........ and he wont hesitate to recieve it cuz when im done grand on his knees like hes prayin for jesus decent... i suggest throwin in the white flag before you get wrecked 20grand like pictures just takin, he aint even developed yet ha nice punch.... dubz could ruin the average rap..... from the averge cat im strapped wit tight sixteens like church shoes on shaq set up was decent follow up was preety good.... picked apart yo lines, still cant find a punch.. u not perfection ur flow grimey but inconsistant like tryin to piss wit erections eeewww... preety good ending not a bad verse all around good... 8.0 next... Im gonna have to ask you to leave, i know its darastic// But ur a disease, you make the mother fuckn "class sick"// ha nice opener/personal... Battle'N 20 GraND so you can abosrb some of the wealth// Might as well stick ur dick in ur ass,cuz ur so "full of yourself"// set up was eeeh even thou i get it, follow up was decent but played concept...... Dub ur shit is "eZ" and you intent is soft// Your rhymes are like coupons, a high "percentage is off"// oo.. why i aint think of that one??? good punch... You couldnt beat me man, if u were the father rhyme// "watch" kid ur broken, battled me at the wrong "time"/ ending was weak..... u could of end it better then that... after i read e-dubs verse i thought it was preety good then i read 20 grand verse and i thought half way down that he might have te win then i read the weak ending and was like WHA!!..... u cant be serious.... 1 played concept to go along with it..... but had one good punch plus 1 good personal *opener* all u need it was one more..... preety tight battle N was well worth my read but im a go with e-dubs on this one cue to less-weakness showing in the verse........ |
Voted For: 20 GraND
iight this was a pretty close battles....here da breakdown Punches - 20 GRAND...simple because his shyt came alot harder n more direct...he was tryin to get up in u E !...but 20's 1st bar was garbage...where im from SICK means ILL...but if u mean sick like sick wit the flu...WACKKKKK...anyway DUBZ had some punches but they wasnt as hard as 20s !!! simple as that Personals - 20 GRAND...his first personals was GARBAGE...but Dub ur shit is "eZ" and you intent is soft// Your rhymes are like coupons, a high "percentage is off"// whoa !...some1 got ripped...E didnt put no real personal shyt up in his verse...so 20 grand jus called u a softy son !!!!! cuz ur verse was pretty soft (no beef) but it was Meta4s - Easily 20 GRAND... Battle'N 20 GraND so you can abosrb some of the wealth// Might as well stick ur dick in ur ass,cuz ur so "full of yourself"// Dub ur shit is "eZ" and you intent is soft// Your rhymes are like coupons, a high "percentage is off"//... smashmobb on the metas in this battle...yes E did have metas in his verse like da jesus n pictures barz but they just were not hard AT ALL...u gotta come more direct n vicious Wordplay - tie...both verses were pretty simple n easily read...so nuttin was 2 major wit da wordplay...mostly punches Enjoyment - once again 20 Grand takes da cake...punches were harder n direct...had some ill metas that also came hard n got alil personal wit it as well...E's verse was aiight but 20 grand just overwhelmed u ! Vote - 20 GRAND ! ~1~ |
Uppn, this is the 4th time this kid reset the scores.. sad
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nah its sad that ur boys cant explain votes for u..cuz they jus d/r's, tell them to learn how to vote
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Voted For: e-dubz
best opener: e-dubz ima rape this bitch........ and he wont hesitate to recieve it cuz when im done grand on his knees like hes prayin for jesus ^lol lmao, nice best closer: e-dubz picked apart yo lines, still cant find a punch.. u not perfection ur flow grimey but inconsistant like tryin to piss wit erections ^u coulda stated it betta but u did a good job overall..... your vocab was above average, u had sum nice punches delivered smoothly.... the best line in ur verse was the part with "church shoes on ShaQ" lmfao , rofl....... ha ha your verse was 7.9/10 some faults but completed te tasks of deliverin' punches and metas....... nice lol 20 Grand Class is now in session... so shut the fuck up! Hey kids.. ya im talking to u... ^that introduction was un-necessary takes away from ur flow.... Battle'N 20 GraND so you can abosrb some of the wealth// Might as well stick ur dick in ur ass,cuz ur so "full of yourself"// ^your best lines, you had sum nice punches pretty accurate, and you had wordplay which is nice.. however, our closer wasn't good at all, i believe i heard that sumwhere before or saw it in someone's verse, but i ain't tryna start trouble... you didn't co,me very hard at all, you have to work on the way you word your lines also...... 6.9/10 not bad, but u can do better...... Return the favor.......... pz |
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