a when yawl going to tell me if im in or what iv droped like 4 diffrent cyfers dam get back to me this ill bing going for the cyfer spot

...fuck this and fuck you all...
you dont fucking know me so how u gon tlk to me like u do/
i aint got a winnin record and theres not much i can do/
i jus write wat comes to my head and what ive been threw/
from wat i see here there aint many mc's that are stayin true/
wen i read this fake ass shit it make my face turn blue/
the battles are all so weak the couldnt hit even if there was super glue/
check my battles and ule c that i sta true to what i know/
tha difference between me and u is i stay sober when i write i dont need no dro/
i dont know the reason y i am tryin out for this clique/
ive rolled solo my whole life that it make a difference, not one bit/
i stayed outa trouble and kept to myself check my crudentials/
u couldnt trace my life if u had a set of stencils/

i am new...been doin this for a few months...i have potential...i earned tha name lyrikal...believe that...let me know...and let me know what i need to do to get better

aa when is any one going to tell me if im in my shits posted 4 times witch is 4 diffrent

Both Of You Get Some Wins And Try Agian After You Elevated

Thats What Trigga Would Say

yo im up for TRY OUTS kiddo put me up in there

im ghetto pushing hondas no need for a lexus my records create a bigger buzz then beez in texas/ jus free ya necklace/ im spendin bigger checks find me in every hood like newprt ciggerates /not to figure yet u be a sore lover i got bitches in bikinis like ashantas source cover/ im a raw brother wit a sceamin team when ya only jump off is a trampaline/ hands is clean but i got grams of weed when im smokin wit my boys we got family trees...... ok thats enough holla at me PM me or IM me at LDUABGREP71 if im in ~UNO~

ok my thoughts first the style is simple and the name is wack your a raper? second the whole paragraph thing i didn't like. thrid you got a wack ass record of 0-1.

i say no but it ain't up to me

as for other catz on here um like drag-on you simple too and your name is taken but the record is ok so i say elevated and you might be in

ill bing aka U.G i personally liked it and i didn't read all the post so u might be in already.

Golden shellz i didn't like it and the guy in you sig is ugly.

golden shellz: elevate more i wouldnt alow you to come but trigga the masta so welcome...
lil bing : elevate
lyrikal: elevate too you ok though juss come bak
betarap or w/e the fuk you are: structer ya shit and no you fuking suck elevate more

all yall elevate and learn to structure ya lines
stop with the shitty selfglory usernames

lol
juss elevate

here im gonna spit this shit is hot plus my name is the lryicial virus brotherpara well her this is a true story well its not a story realy but its all true i am gettin better and better heres my verse i want in this shit!!!

People tellin me im not good anofe/
to make it in the game but ill just stand up tall and buff/
and tell em straight off wit my hardcore rhyme/
i will be gettin better from time to time/
i spit into the mic on top of my comp/
and say yer done i stomped you out/
and how about i say it with a (shout)/ (loud)

i wanna take my rap to the pro's/
so i can get some hoe's/
so im gonna be gettin better ill be pushin my self/
to do my best ill take my rap to the top/
and be number one on all the charts and never stop/
ill be one of the best not sayin im am the best yet/
but i bet im gonna be set/
so ill be putin down all the people who said i couldent do it with a threat/

im gonna be in audio soon so yea

holla back at me peace

check my shit out

^no...and the last 5 people that tryed out NO.....elevate and come back....and when my crew says NO...then go elevate and get some wins...this is not a newbie crew....uppin for more tryoutz

word we will acpet dope n00bs but you guys...fucking elevate then come back

yo i want in this shit

heres my verse

People tellin me im not good anofe/
to make it in the game but ill just stand up tall and buff/.
and tell em straight off wit my hardcore rhyme/
i will be gettin better from time to time/.
i spit into the mic on top of my comp/
and say yer done i stomped you out/.
and how about i say it with a (shout)/. (loud)

i wanna take my rap to the pro's/
so i can get some pretty nice hoe's/.
so im gonna be gettin better ill be pushin my self/
to do my best ill take my rap to the top/
and be number one on all the charts and never stop/.
ill be one of the best not sayin, i am the best yet/
but i bet im gonna be set/
so ill be putin down all the people that said i couldent do it with a threat/

you neeed a lil elevation try joining out side crew

werd....no more nooobs....

yo i want in
 

yo i want in im new and i dont no how things work u guys can teach me

am i in?im new and u guys can teach me

get at least 1 post and at leat win 2 battles

before you let me in im gonna tell you im still learning and im young to 14 so yea im getin better every fuckin day no jokes but i still havent got high forlike a week got steal some more dope off my dad so when i get high come home stonded and go on rapbattles and ill make somthin good haha there now you kno i steal a pounds and pounds off my dad cuz he hides 40 pounds under my bed no lie im cereal if you want you could check out my nixon watch and the 100 dollers i spent on more pot and got high haha but ya its no lie

ok then ill win some battle and come back with 7 wins then will you let me in???

i said that you juss need a lil elevation

you close

come back in a weeek

wat da fuck about me

your NOT in.......... so stop asking

ayo,trigga i was accepted in II,low ryders,nut i dropped off there roster cause those cats arent active i wanna stay with a crew thats active....

heres some links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139794
vs flex
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167
topical:200 posts
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137724
me vs 650
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138106
me vs sten.cell
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138359
me vs gran..chi


i've had 1 loss ta j-troop but it was like my first battle...im battlin 1-man-band now
if ya wanna see my verse against him i'll p/m ya with it....im new but elevatin quick i think....

you goood i say in..
what yall others think

Dv8 is kinda nice he can use some work but we can work on that
we can train em
i say in


Trigga?

aye thiz crew seemz str8 so check out thiz link and see if u let me in. i threw thiz in like 30, seconds so dont tell me i need to elevate cuz i already know but u can check my uther posts too: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140322

lol if u allready knew dont post the shit then
get some winz and come back kid

aight im close ta passin out n drunk n ya,i jus dropped this against a mother fuckin no-show..im gettin better...his name is logic.......



what you “spauk” nah jus another d/r riding some bitches “lame”cock,
if “logic” is the key than winning this battle is now a combination lock,
kid your jus another “self richous plant”, another self glorified wacked herb
ok MR ”flower power” go a”head”talk street when you living in the suburbs,
Your winning?~your wrong~smoked 2 many bongs~holding hits 2 long,
You’re a fable like kong~im exposing this pussy like a~backwards thong,
Getting left behind ~ like a ~ ghost town sign ~ die’n without a prime,
This cats more ~ inclined ta wine ~ than ta hold down a battle rhyme,
Da shit I spit is straight true foo,your the only ”skeleton in my closet”
I admit this now, I shoulda never given ya “moms that sperm deposit”,
it’s a fact this kids wack claiming a “faulty wire” attachted to his entire spine,
in denial from all the bad “feedback” dropped on his pathetic “hired” rhymes,
Strike ya with trike spokes, no hope 4 your life in “wrap” im about to seal,
You’re a tight joke 4 real like a third wheel,honestly that’s how we all feel,

Yo, y'all only lookin' for elevated MC's? Only reason my record don't show no wins is 'cuz I still got 3 battles that need votes. So go ahead and check those out, tell me if I got what you're lookin' for, I got some open mics also, and if not then I got no problem droppin' a quick 16 to get in. Thanks, 'preciate it.

Pending Battles:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139283
vs. Leroy Lyric

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138941
vs. Avanish

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138907
vs. Phatinum

dv8................IN.........welcome to the dopest crew on the set lol.......stay active...and oh....stay active

Yo, peep this and let me know if it's good enough. I can drop something new for you, but I'm confident this will help your decision.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138884

your NOT in go elevate.........

Lol damn trigg dont be so harsh on the kid

Get some wins Kid

ay yo, im a hot rookie on the set, ask J_Trooper http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140419

lol, that shit was a sick battle ay yo, i think that by itself gets me in the rookie division, J_Trooper himself gave me props and asked me come down here, if i need mo wins ill go get some, if you wanna see mo of my rhymes, just holla back