Black Queen vs MaRVJay1009
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 Ko'ed

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-15-05 at 04:12 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

10 lines..mah aint no need 4 dat unlimited shit....

Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 04:18 PM.

He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage
cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts
This herb is useless..he isnt postin first he wants the worst abusements
Ya not original..the way ya been feedin off writtens like nervous students
Like atheists there’s no faith for ya.. prayers wont save you from this loss
Cuz you gotta ram ya fists through God to get ya punches 'a-cross'
U always admired me, ever since u came here u wack hoe
But since u dont go out, i never worried bout u always in my shadows
Sad...u da only one who can never have played name flips
& u knew u were gon’ be served, shit a plate is what you came with

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 05:12 AM.

look.....

ima exspose ya wait dis hoe's a fake just check da bar's!....
2 get "rid of black queen" i aint gota "throw away a deck of cards"
dis chick lyin rv she neva b...handlin drugs..start panacin cuzz
u scary hoe dat get "shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"
she 15 n luv da suck dick ya'll dis childs a freak.....
believe i'll damage ya u like a "d-block calender" ya "style(s) is week"
yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly.
look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me"
u oughta write flows..cuzz mj yeah i slaughter trife hoe's!....
nice? u even saught a..in rap u'll "neva c me" im saught of like "strobe"


4th bar look in her sig..it says there's no stopin me

nuff said

Voted For: Black Queen

i love you both:)this was a dope battle for real its down to line for line so here goes
MARV
ima exspose ya wait dis hoe's a fake just check da bar's!....
2 get "rid of black queen" i aint gota "throw away a deck of cards"
LIL STRECHED FLOW WORKED THOUGH DOPE NAME PLAY AND PUNCH HERE A 9/10
dis chick lyin rv she neva b...handlin drugs..start panacin cuzz
u scary hoe dat get "shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"
OK GOOD PUNCH AGAIN BUT MADDDDD STRECHED HERE 5/10
she 15 n luv da suck dick ya'll dis childs a freak.....
believe i'll damage ya u like a "d-block calender" ya "style(s) is week"
LOL GOOD META WORDPLAY REAL ORIGINAL 6/10
yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly.
look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me"
LMFAO IT DONT SAY THAT LOL STILL FUNNY PERSONAL 7/10
u oughta write flows..cuzz mj yeah i slaughter trife hoe's!....
nice? u even saught a..in rap u'll "neva c me" im saught of like "strobe
I SEE STROBE ALOT:)BUT ANYWAYS GOOD META KINDA OF PLAYED THATS BEEN SAID BEFORE JUST NOT EXACTLY THE SAME A 5/10
32/50
GOOD VERSE THE LAST BAR BEING PLAYED AND YOUR LINES ARE STRECHED HURT YOU A LITTLE BUT DOPE PUNCHES AND DISSES HERE AND NICE FLOW EXCEPT THAT HAND SHAKE LINE

BLACK QUEEN
He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage
cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts
OK DOPE PUNCH HERE ITS BEEN USED THE CONCEPT BEFORE BUT IT WAS WORDED NICELY HERE AND HIT PRETTY GOOD 8/10
This herb is useless..he isnt postin first he wants the worst abusements
Ya not original..the way ya been feedin off writtens like nervous students
HAHAHA DOPE PUNCH HERE ALSO NICE NICE 9/10
Like atheists there’s no faith for ya.. prayers wont save you from this loss
Cuz you gotta ram ya fists through God to get ya punches 'a-cross'
DAMN ANOTER HARD ASS DOPE PUNCH HERE ALSO NICE NICE 8/10
U always admired me, ever since u came here u wack hoe
But since u dont go out, i never worried bout u always in my shadows
OK NOT DOPE DECENT PUNCH A LIL STRECHED 5/10
Sad...u da only one who can never have played name flips
& u knew u were gon’ be served, shit a plate is what you came with
OK ENDER HERE NOT GREAT BUT OK 5/10
35/50

OK BLack QUEEN GETS MY VOTE EVEN THOUGH YALL TIED IN PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND VOCAB WAS EVEN QUEEN HAD A BETTER STRUTURE AND FLOW MARV YOU HAD WAY TOO MANY STRECHED LINES HERE AND THAT HURTYOUR SCORE BLACK QUEEN CAME MAD HARD TO START WHILE MARV WAS GOOD ALL THROUGHOUT BUT THIS WAS CLOSE AND CAME DOWN TO EVERYTHING AND QUEEN LED I THE OTHER AREAS AND THAT GOT HER MY VOTE MARV WORK ON NOT STRECHING YOUR LINES SO MUCH EVERYTHING ELSE IS PERFECT GOOD BATTLE TO YOU BOTH

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. D-Iced = Cali. Marvjay1009 had blacklisted Cali from voting in his battles. Vote removed

Voted For: Black Queen



Voted For: black queen

I see vote for black queen cuz she had a way better structure and not only that I think she came harder wit da punches
marv u had some good lines in their but I just couldn't flow wit it
so I vote: black queen

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

uppin fo votes.....................................

Voted For: Black Queen

damm gurl u get this vote no doubt she came harder had more personels in this battle her vocab was ok her multis she can work on a little but she had more then waht the other home boy had and her opener-her closure was better and most of all she was easier to understand so over all queen gets this.


He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage
cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts
This herb is useless..he isnt postin first he wants the worst abusements
Ya not original..the way ya been feedin off writtens like nervous students
Like atheists there’s no faith for ya.. prayers wont save you from this loss
Cuz you gotta ram ya fists through God to get ya punches 'a-cross'
U always admired me, ever since u came here u wack hoe
9/10

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

y'all people don't like a real verse man this was ill as shit marvjay took this 1 by far people his punches and personals do u notice he got personals like crazy he killed this black queen girl i think marvjay got this because of punches and personals black queen u need to elavate 6-0 don't mean u the greatest but u might be good i kno for a fact marvjay beat this gurl so marvjay gettin this 1 black ueen ur punches and personals are still playful i think u need to elavate on them two things other than that u straight 1

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^^^bitch it mean sumin ill merk u n a battle but uppin

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Thiss Battle Wass Good As Hell Marv Took Thiss Seriously..
Openor=Marv,Yo Shit Wass Hott Nice Punch
Strukture=Tie,Both Shit Wass Easy Ta Read
Punches=Marv,His Shit Wass Hittin Harder
Vokab=Bq,Good Vokab
Personals=Marv,Yo That And Ya Punches Took This
Closer=Good Ass Shit Both You But Marvs Shit Wass Better

Yo Marv Took Thiss Cus His Personals And Punches I Love That Shit His Wass Hittin Mad Hard And Thass All He Koed Her With Tha Punches And Personals.....................

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 

checkin polls............................................. ...

Voted For: Black Queen

wow wow and wow. great battle.
punches- lol.....tie as fuck...Black Queen had some tite punches but Marv countered dem shits
personals- Marv had dose, his mindset was to work on personals and i think BQ should work on dat
structure- BQ juss escaped wit dat one because if u noticed all her lines were like da same characters, so that was a plus (+).
multis- none of yall..... work on dat
closing- i think the closing went to BQ. her closing was RAW as FUCK, but Marv's closing was kinda whack
v/ BQ

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

Checking The Polls................................

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

i am not very fond of MarvJay-if he lost i wouldn't vote, it would be considered a hate vote, but anywayz. Marv took this battle because he had punches and personals throughout.. Black Queen you have good content however you can say any of your verse besides the first bar to someone.. you metas were str8 but Marv took this one.. you have to get personal and uses them with ya punches.. and make it creative.. with that said i..

v/ MarvJay1009

i fucked up with the second line of explanation... any part of your verse could be used against ANYONE.. which was almost considered filler lines.. <<that's what i meant... (sowwi if i confused)

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

pretty good battle but ima have to give it to MJ since he edged it out with better punches. both had ight structure and multies. but i just like MJ's punches a little better, there were more creative n flowed well.
holla at me
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171637
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171624

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: Black Queen

MaRVJay1009- ima exspose ya wait dis hoe's a fake just check da bar's!....
2 get "rid of black queen" i aint gota "throw away a deck of cards" 6/10

dis chick lyin rv she neva b...handlin drugs..start panacin cuzz
u scary hoe dat get "shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"
7/10

she 15 n luv da suck dick ya'll dis childs a freak.....
believe i'll damage ya u like a "d-block calender" ya "style(s) is week"
6.5/10

yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly.
look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me"
u oughta write flows..cuzz mj yeah i slaughter trife hoe's!....
nice? u even saught a..in rap u'll "neva c me" im saught of like "strobe"
7/10
overall- 7/10

Black Queen-

He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage
cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts
8/10

This herb is useless..he isnt postin first he wants the worst abusements
Ya not original..the way ya been feedin off writtens like nervous students
7.5/10

Cuz you gotta ram ya fists through God to get ya punches 'a-cross'
U always admired me, ever since u came here u wack hoe
8/10

But since u dont go out, i never worried bout u always in my shadows
Sad...u da only one who can never have played name flips
& u knew u were gon’ be served, shit a plate is what you came with
9/10
overall-8.5/10

Vote- Black Queen

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

dis is bullshit does vote was good vote fuck u strobe

uppin 4 some explained votes and no fukkin hatin

This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 

checkin pollz............................................. ....

I see some bias going on up in her on some of this battle my vote was self explainatory.

shut up why every fukkin where black queen ya stupid ass is there

dah dah dah dah do'nt be a sore bitch for ur anal blister may pop ho! iam threw with u peace

Voted For: Black Queen

this was a coo battle. stupid name marvjay got...lol...but i think she took this one,. she came more prepared and her punches were harder. she had better mettas in here verse too, thats why i had to give her tha vote. this was a decent battle tho...marv, dumb name...lol...but u came wit it, u had some nice punches and some good creativitie in tha most part of ur flow. but some of ur barz were stretched and played a lil. tha deck of cards line was nice, but yo follow up was kinda wack. i was enjoyin this battle, but BQ came out on top to me...i dunno, her verse was just more interesting....


1

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

LMFAO
@she 15 n luv da suck dick ya'll dis childs a freak.....
believe i'll damage ya u like a "d-block calender" ya "style(s) is week"

yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly.
look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me"

dis chick lyin rv she neva b...handlin drugs..start panacin cuzz
u scary hoe dat get "shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"

Nice lines..never seen marv's verses before..nice tho

Sad...u da only one who can never have played name flips
& u knew u were gon’ be served, shit a plate is what you came with
^best line she had......im not voting ..posting feedback cuz i know the chick would say im a hate vote ...

but she loss... easy to see

^^^^rofl everywhere i go u rite on my ass give my some fuckin breathin space

....silence smutt link..Go answer the call out .i know u see it

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

nice battle
winner-marvjay

flow-tie
punches-jay
multies-tie
finisher-jay
opener-tie

favorite lines

queen
IP:


He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage
cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts

that was hot

jay

yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly.
look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me"

this was a killer punch

u 2 are pretty even

return the favor please

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

uuuuuuupppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnn

uppin 4 more votes muthafukkaz

Voted For: Black Queen

I almost gave this too jay. In fact i was typing my response in his voting box and then i thought about it and changed my mind cause i wasn't really feeling his jokes. Not to say his punches weren't good but i'm looking for punches not jokes. His personals were good but that's all i was really feeling was his personal. His multis were good but i wasn't feeling what it led up too. Black queen had no personals or multis but i was feeling her punches required a little more thought than marv's. otherwise structure was a tie. This was close yall good battle.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

by the way return the favor

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174830
me vs. mafia

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173417
me vs. os1ris

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024
me vs. Intensify Effect

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171308
me vs. nightmare

Voted For: Black Queen

i think black queen took this one because she came wayy more original. marv, u had a nice verse, but i think some of tha lines and barz were a lil bit played. but it was still nice...Didnt i read this battle b4? what happened, but whatever. black queen came harder wit tha punches, and wordplay. i think she lacked vocab tho, but i seen a lotta nice mettas in there that gave her my vote. marv-u had good structure, but ur verse was uninteresting. and i feel u fell off near tha end of ur verse, when u started off sick...elevate on that fam. NO HATE tho...u got skillz, and u got some dope punches, but i dont think u came hard, punchline wise in this battle.
overall this was a close battle, but i feel BQ came more interesting and original to get tha win. yall should still elevate, and i think yall should work on multies, and then when u master that, combine that rhyming style into ur old rhyming style, and ur verse will be hot...just my opinion...and coem interesting. good battle

PLZ return tha favor on battle in sig...against CJ, cause i took my time out to vote on this. and plz make ur vote xplained


keep elevating

~1~

uppin............................................. .

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

This battle was straight....

Marvjay-

*ima exspose ya wait dis hoe's a fake just check da bar's!....
2 get "rid of black queen" i aint gota "throw away a deck of cards"*

^that was nice play on words and a smooth punch^
dis chick lyin rv she neva b...handlin drugs..start panacin cuzz
u scary hoe dat get "shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"*

^this line was forced but still landin a quick jab ta gut!!..
-"shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"*-that was
NICE!!!!!

*she 15 n luv da suck dick ya'll dis childs a freak.....
believe i'll damage ya u like a "d-block calender" ya "style(s) is week"*

^that was BLAGGHHHHH!!!!no good at all what so evah!!^^

*yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly.
look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me"*

^BLAGGHHHHHHHH^

*u oughta write flows..cuzz mj yeah i slaughter trife hoe's!....
nice? u even saught a..in rap u'll "neva c me" im saught of like "strobe"*

^^^Didnt connect..???????^^^

BlackQueen-

*He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage
cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts*

^^if its true...still wouldnt had hit hard,an it didnt really make sense^^^

*This herb is useless..he isnt postin first he wants the worst abusements
Ya not original..the way ya been feedin off writtens like nervous students*

^^^that was nice wit good multi's but really no punch..but still nice enough ta get tha point^^

*Like atheists there’s no faith for ya.. prayers wont save you from this loss
Cuz you gotta ram ya fists through God to get ya punches 'a-cross'*

^^That was killah..I like tha -God to get ya punches 'a-cross'*-that line was ill^^

*U always admired me, ever since u came here u wack hoe
But since u dont go out, i never worried bout u always in my shadows*

^^^BLAGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!3rd grade foolishness!!^^^

*Sad...u da only one who can never have played name flips
& u knew u were gon’ be served, shit a plate is what you came with*

^^^plate is what u came with....HAH!!!CONNECTED!!^^


overall-MarvJay got this because I felt his punchez out weighed blackqueens!!!

this battle couldve been stronger...but still..it is what it is!!!






*

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

checkin polls............................................. ....

uuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn