schema vs. 4Blood2Hound0
 

10 to 20 lines blind spit
no crew hate or d/r votes
verse due an hour after you check in

this is my check-in

im checkin in............ damn character thing, i hate it

I won't even try hard to punk this clown/
Cuz you garbage! Im bout ready to dump these rounds/
You and them should escape dude/
You an actor, so if you mess up, i'll shoot again and you'll "take two"/
This kid been back for a while/
16 hollows tips'll make you do the cha-cha slide and bring it back into style/
I know you talkin like "SCHEMA LETHAL!"/
You horse shit though, so thats what ya ryhme SCHEME'LL EQUAL/
You suspicously queer/
So the kid that'll rip ya ass lyrically is officially here/ haha
Its officially clear, you might as well not even ryhme/
Im happy though, cuz the shoe and sock i broke off in ya ass is not even mine/ haha
So let me finish this, this whole place agreed/
That you'll be trippin off my ryhmes like I laced ya weed/
And all the felonies have been traced to me, a heated minute/
So I just tell them I was at home and that Schema did it/

i already told you you was gonna go and make this fun
the cat im helpin elevate done merked you five ta one

no ones tryin to hear some killa shit or sorry flows
so i can win tellin a story...this how the story goes

once upon a time i was just chillin on the forum
friendly battles goin on just dealin with some bordem

when all of a sudden i felt shit all get real tense
*tingle tingle*...damn there goes my bullshit sense

so i jet to the bat cave...oh shit who woulda knew
theres this bitch tryin to call out my whole damn crew

i dont know why youd wanna get merked eight more times
when you 0 and 3 its not hate votes...its ya rhymes

youve never won and you wanna try and get at lethal
looks like this bloodhound cant sniff out a bad idea

i try to give him a whole hour he takes 20 minutes to go
someone call guiness...world-record breaking quickest KO

you should get used to the feelin of knowin you got dissed
cause you got seven more to go and thats after this

and i dont think that you should prolly go try this again
cause you just got merked...and thats how this story ends

vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote

OOOOOOO good stuff schema nice one nice one


lol

schemas shit was the corniest thing i ever read
he usually comes alot hardre than that idk what he was thinkin
his personals werent hittin that hard
hound usually does more too but ima have to give this to hound bcuz his shit wasnt corny
v=bloodhound
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136408
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136648

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*checks*...damn i coulda swore this dude was about to lose to me in a battle wonder what he could be pissed at me about?...lets get some more votes

hahahah i dont need to hate on u schema but c'mon wtf is what u spittin i even said u usually come harder than that

schema u'r verse was the weakest link on-here i had ever seen on R.B ever...
there is no hate i can relate to what hes trying to say ya story was weak and corney no hits noting was funny or even remotly even fun to read noting stood out but how weak it was what the hell was u thinking.....

4blood u'r verse was preety good alaround u had some decent punch actully preety good and u was creative which made it alot more funner to read then a story ya flow was also good all through ya verse which was also good

flow: 4blood
punches: 4blood
creative: 4blood

no comp: schema
the winner: 4blood wins this easy.....

4Blood2Hound0
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure isnt very good...ur lines were goin all over the place...flow fell off due to the lack of consistency in the structure...no multis...wordplay isnt good...a few, at best, of ur punches connected...no good personals...

schema
dont space out ur lines...its mad annoying...structure is good...flow is on target...u had no multis...wordplay isnt good at all...some of ur punches connected...personals were decent...

Overall
neither had multis...neither had good wordplay...schema had the better structure...the more stable flow...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...schema gets my vote...

VOTE - SCHEMA

Do you not listen to Fabolous, Joe Budden, or Lloyd Banks? And not understand the concept of a short first bar and a longer second bar?

uppin for votes, i really wanna get this one closed on the real

uppin for votes, get them in here, im REALLY tryna get this one closed

^^uppin for honest votes^^

uppin for votes, get this one closed ladies and gentlemen

aight, im uppin for votes, so vote before i start breakin knee caps

so sick and tired of this battle....ill return votes just hit it up

yo blood hond your style tight i like it this isnt cuss you battled me schem you good your punches was tight but blood got you this isnt cusss we battle this cuss his shit was just tight

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gansta ,gats n hollow tips???nah it aint gonna get you a win dawg..schema takes this by flow n structure along with straight punches,there was no question who took this even tellin a story schema still came out on top...
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uppin for votes... so hit up this bittle so it will be closed

sry blood but i hafe to vote on shrema he had more rhymes and shit like that overall he was better realy lol peace honest vote

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ok, uppin for votes, so vote on this battle right now

uppin for votes, im gettin tired of this battle bein open

vote on this and leave a link...ask people who vote on my shit I return votes with cat-like quickness

schema fuck you im gettin mad at you i dont wanna right more but i will cuz yer a little bitch i voted for you and ixplained anofe cuz this was a shity ass battle so you won just cuz of rhymes thats it ok bitch peace right out fucka!

yo dawg this shit was a "unique" battle,

uh its like dis

structure-4blood
flo-4 blood
Vocab-Schem
wordplay-Schem
punches-4blood

dawg sheme y u make a story if u guna do that then make it funny or get some punches in there if u wuda done that then u wuda had my votes n u wud b up in dis poll but nooo u dint so my bad dawg but my vot goes to 4blood

v/4blood

uppin for votes, come on ladies and gentlemen.....

yo i give the vote to blood cuz he had more captivatin punches hotter structure and i liked his flow

v/blood

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My Cali nigga Schema won this.. i like the whole idea of telling a story.. you broke down why he was whack withy personals and you dissed him quite a few times..
bloodhound kept talking about gun which wasn't really coo, and schema you even pointed it out in your verse.. so because of personals, content, and better stucture, i vote for my Sac Town nigga Schema..

yo, keep it gangsta and return the favor with a drop in my thread will u? thanx cuz, wun.. here's the link..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352

40- that would sound hella good on audio, but in text, drop the guns hit.. gunplay in text = nono.. thats mainly why u lost.. you wasted time on guns when you should have been dissin him.. not that good of a text battle verse, but would make a decent audio one..


scheme - seemed liek schema came more direct... that one [art of his verse where he fed wasnt cool tho.. but other than that... it was strait... aight battle verse

my vote goes to scheme

yo wtf is with 3 votes for me dqed, thats bullshit but whatever, uppin for votes

umm i still think schema lost becuz of his corny storytellin thing
he usually comes alot better than that
he had some ight punches but the rest were weak personals
hound had the best punches overalll n a good structure
v=hound
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I think Schema Won this battle....................

^^uppin this shit^^

uppin for votes.. this shit should be closed already though...

^^uppin for votes^^...you wouldve won if your votes were explained but its not like its unfair i still have more total votes even with the dqed ones...you just got 5 first

^^uppin^^...are you gellin?

I'm going with schema ont his one.

Schema: I liked the whole "story-telling" concept he got going,the punches and personals were nice, flow was straight, structure was kool, vocab was ok...

4Blood: ya flow was ok, vocab good, punches and personals were kool, structure could've been better tho