str8_hood vs. MARVOLoUsJ1009
 

ok this gonna be a tough one
umm 10 lines
none of that biting, recyclin
no d/r votes or crew votes

if u wanna change somethin let me know

nope..lets get it goin dunny.......check in i'll drop first but u gota drop after me

alright

dis lil fag pops a whole of shit da "badd" thing about is he aint "good"-
u "gay" and live in da "suburbs" so y da fukk u call ya self "str8-hood"-

should only come online da talk 2 ya friends,my key's a tourture ya pens-
rap 4 u its saught of a sin,ur badd & its sad u got more losses than wins-

but if u got beef with dis vet i'll creep 2 ya rest,while u eatin and stressed-
fukk takin u 2 a school 4 "kidds dat cant hear" but u'll be "meetin ya death"-
dont play a gorilla beatin ya chest,cuzz i told u our beef im keepin it text-
but still he's scared so he like "rasheed's wife" cuzz he "sleepin with techs"-
put ya "brains in ya buildin" no "dance school" but u'll be "teachin da steps"-
u'll be weak in da flesh,str8 hood is done now he's deaceased with da rest-
^^^all dat go 2gether so dont say my flow was off..6 lines rite there

ur go dunn

12 lines? ok

this aint my best i was jus in a rush but here it is


They say a record Is jus a number marvelous is a fukin fairy
He still wouldn’t get ‘cat’ from a ‘woman’ if his name was Halle Berry
Ur flow was alrite ur lyrics shitty when u write
Im killin u how u gonna be the sickest on tha site(he claims he is)
The only reason u sick is cause my lyrics got to u
U so colorful like a couple boxes of fruit loops
should stick to bitin' 'usher' so yall can 'sell tickets'
if rhymin' was a sport you'd be in the 'special olympics'
With those wack lines you problly call yourself a vet
Couldn't put a "CD" together if you were recitin' the alphabet
He’s reppin a place called Queens and thinks he’s hard I’ll throw a shot at ya
U got more rainbows than a fukin box of lucky charms

i spit 10 u spit 12??? okay its nothin uppin 4 some votes pleez explain ya shit

str8_hood had the punches and the flow

str8_hood u got my vote

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uppin 4 votes

ok yo uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dat was da worst vote i eva fukkin saw on here yo lmaooooooooo only real votes!!

im not tryin da sway votes or nothin but do dis make sense ya'll

They say a record Is jus a number marvelous is a fukin fairy
He still wouldn’t get ‘cat’ from a ‘woman’ if his name was Halle Berry
^^^SO U TRYIN DA SAY HALLE BERRY IS A LESBIAN RITE??? JUST WANNA MAKE SURE LOL

ok let tha voters decide what makes sense and what dont

lol true i was just askin a question dunny but uppin 4 more votes and pleez explain da shit

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Uppin Whut Da Fukk Is Wrong With U Niggaz And Da Votin Shit Damm

ayo uppin 4 votes. come on. dont sleep on this shit

aight... that line bout halle berry was sayin u couldnt get any pussy marv... you know cos shes got that movie comin out???

but yeah...

ya both came hard on this... str8 had nice wordplay n punches.. flow was kinda wierd though.. marv ya had decent wordplay n punches, n nice personals.. good flow too...

i reckon my vote goes to marv... not d/r or hate or anythin i was just feelin his verse more... str8 ya verse was nice.. n some of ya lines made me laugh.. but get way more personal.

v/ marv

okay goodlookin now uppin 4 some more votes....and dat halle berry line still didn't make any sense

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str your ending aint rhyme and your only good punch was the halle berry shit 4/10 your struture was bad very bad and hard to follow
marv you aint do much better but you had a good struture and the only personal in the battle which was ok4/10 your vocab was good but you need to elevate still you get the vote here





vote on my shits honest and it comes back dr voters are banned

^^^wow dude i still need da elevate??? i mean thank u 4 ya vote but just dont be talkin crazee uppin 4 more votes tho

uppin 4 votes

str8 hood gets this even no both of yall was ight 6 out of 10 and marvouls had no punch lines not that maatter they was botty

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MARVOLoUsJ1009
structure is pretty good...some of ur lines were a lil stretched though...flow was on target...u had tight multis...wordplay was also tight...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

str8_hood
strucutre is pretty nice as well...flow is on target as well...no multis...wordplay was tight...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a pretty good structure...both had a stable flow...both had tight wordplay...neither had good personals...MARVOLoUsJ1009 had more multis...as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...MARVOLoUsJ1009 gets my vote..

VOTE - MARVOLOUSJ1009

Please return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig.

Thanx.

is dis dude fukkin serious???? yo str8 u gon accept dat vote dunny??/

Uhh.

I dont see whats wrong with my vote.

As it shows the breakdown of the battle.

yo str8 hood u got it dawg yo rym style was yo own n i felt yo punches more,
Marv- yo shit was koo but towards da end u los tme dawg,

but Str8 hod u got my vote

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Marvelous had better structure, but str8_hood had better metas. That special olympics line? Forget about it.
Vote - str8_hood

Upppin 4 More Fukkin Votes Stop Sleepin Ppl........................

My vote here is goin' to str8_hood. Marv, you had good structure and good consitency, but as far as puches go, str8-hood got you. That "special olympics" line? forget about it. But yo, I'm uppin' for votes on this battle. Throw me a link and I'll return the favor. Keep Bangin'
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Marv wins harder better more accurate personal punches than Str8 I kno wat you were doin separatin da first four bars but bring em together you had a good structure. return da fav vonte honaestly. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982

u aint poll ya vote dogg^^^^......but aneway uppin 4 more votes

Fukkin Uppin Again Yo Y Niggaz Cant Just Vote And Get Dis Shit Ova With

vote marv..
punches with strong personals won you this battle it was pretty close but overall marv you took it,,hood you had a good verse but you lacked with personals n thats what wins battle,,no hate ju my opinion...
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iight...yo marv...i thought u were good??well if u are then y u battlin ppl like hood??dats like a easy win wit ur skill rite there???neways

hood:
ur shyt was iigght...but ur punches weren't as strong as marvs....
ur doin iight but her structure was better....also her whole flow

spit:4/10
punch:5/10
flow:5/10

marv:
iight wut couold i say...lets see...ur whole verses was good..jst promise not to punk on easy wins like him iight??

punch: 7/10
flow:7/10
spit:7/10

vote marv