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new shit uppin 4 feedback
i submit subliminal messages through my cockyness,every time rounds shatter ur cartolidge's,lyrical punches collapse ur esophguase,gettin slapped wit 8 arms wit each 16 bars like i was half octopus,u niggaz dicks n nuts so small 2 see'em u need binoculars,my dick been i mo bitches mouths than canker sores
people say i self glorify myself actin like im better than dem,but i dont need 2 self glorify ya'll do it for me wit ya ignorance n arogance & then,niggaz get mad cuz my nigga rapes da paper when he fucks a pen,"oh he's white he cant say nigga he doesnt fit in",clouded by sin,countin my losses as blinded wins,cuz promise if i was 100% black u niggaz would b feelin me then representin breathless aressting mindscapes,haunted by hates,surrounded by fakes,lets b honest half u fuckas,nuttin but straight suckas who couldnt sell a album if weed came inside wit they tapes,n they lyrics scream when attacked n begin hollarin rape,cop ya cd's jus 2 use as paper weights im not sayin im da greatest,or fuckin rap godest,im jus bein honest,my bad 4 bein a lil 2 modest,lotta rappers here act like they da hottest,but in my lyrics u see da startin flames like i set fires wit my rhymes cuz im a lyrical arcinist,rap has changed its different now n every 1 wanna b artist i could give a shit if u respect my flow,u can love me our hate me but i gotta make dis doe,talkin like ya'll kno,but ya'll faggots will neva kno who da fuck i amso jus respect it hoes,b4 i make nets outta ya clothes,wit burn marks n blood stains clingin 2 da holes,niggaz like damn wut u gotta do dat 4 2 many screws in my head loose,dats why im crazy wit rhymes when up in da booth,speakin crazy but tellin da truth,,im sick of explain i got nuttin 2 prove, jus like if i shoot myself 2marrow so i aint got nuttin 2 lose,so is life or death decisions 2 difficult 2 choose,n i swallow,da sarrow wit a bottle of booze, hop in my car wit da empty bottle n go 4 a cruise,crash n kill 2 innocent people now im left wit tickets n lawsuits n a horrible bruise,so which do u think dat i choose? |
"people say i self glorify myself actin like im better than dem,but i dont need 2 self glorify ya'll do it for me wit ya ignorance n arogance & then,niggaz get mad cuz my nigga rapes da paper when he fucks a pen,"oh he's white he cant say nigga he doesnt fit in",clouded by sin,countin my losses as blinded wins,cuz promise if i was 100% black u niggaz would b feelin me then"
truer words are never spoken...nice drop dawg Im feelin it for real. check out my new open mic "Why Do I Do It" |
ayt nigga thanx 4 da love
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c'mon rv give me yo replies peep dis truth at work holla back uppin
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i like it. i like ur style too:
"my nigga rapes da paper when he fucks a pen." that was hot |
thanx janedoe 4 da feedback c'mon people uppin dis shit 4 feedback^^^^^^^^^^^
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all ya'll on rv need 2 seriously stop frontin n not jus read a thread but leave feed back 20 peeps viewed dis yet only 5 replies 2-3 from myself uppin u niggaz n niggets is lazy i swear i leave feedback in everything i look at n dats a lot of shit so return da favors
thanx uppin dis bitch^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ |
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139209
^^ feed back if u havent already.... but this was sick point blank the aggression was fire the lines was well put together, creative everyline was slick sorda a deep topic in a way but pure sick in my eyes... hella drop kid.... 9.8 outta 10 its fire..... |
I liked it alot,,and you made some good points,,,the structure was nice as well
I give you a 7 out of 10....But it doesn't matter what I think,,Its what you think,,,but I do like it,,,God bless all...1 I NEED SOME FEED BACK PEOPLE.....http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139368 |
rofl quit man i wasnt feelin it tha structure looked like u writen a fuckin book
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i thought it was pretty decent...u made some true points..keep it up
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Wasnt Feelin It Niether, And Why You Say Nigga So Much, I Dont Care, But It Just A Filler Word When Rapping And A Pointless One At That
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ty 4 da feedback people except virtue nigga u jus mad i got skillz betta than u da rest of ya'll ty 4 da love ill return da favor holla back peace out 1 luv ya'll uppin 4 feedback
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^^rofl ok lets battle then if u got so much skill fuckin homo u sad quit man
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your way honest in this dawg
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^^koo closer overall killa this was a good piece dawg i liked reading this..nice work..7.5/10 ya had some serious agenda n shit ta get off ya shoulders it seemed n i liked the way ya did it...don't sweat the haters dawg.... :thumbup: looking for feedback on this shit... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167 topical:200 posts http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138359 me vs gran..chi |
yeah i liked it as well.... all around good flow, nice imagery and creativity even though a few lines were a bit simple and played, like the whole "i couldn't give a shit if u respect my flow" section. i'd give it 7/10. good shit, keep doing ya thing!
peep my open mics if you get the chance. thanks |
ayt virtue u wanna battle set it up u so damn "betta than me i havent had replies from n e of des cats b4 n every 1 sayin da shit was tight good flow n structure n all dat so y else u hatin?cuz u a bitch ass hatin ass fake ass nigga virtue i told u i peeped u sayin in a thread u aitn a thug so y u keep continuly poppin shit?answer me rest of ya'll thanx for da love n keep givin me feedback dat go 4 u 2 manipulation i want ur word on dis 2 gurl n all my crew holla at me tell me wut u think peace out holla back 1 luv n im uppin dis bitch holla^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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uppin dis shit 4 feedback cmon niggaz n niggets no sleepin tru fire n pure truth holla back n kronuz i say nigga cuz i am a nigga peep my race in wuts yo race thread in lyricist lounge 2 cuz i can holla
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nice drop dawg, very well put together keep doing your thang
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thanx 4 da responses n love rv keep'em comin i wanna kno wut u think holla back
uppin dis joint^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ |
lol raw killa u rock
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thanx 4 da love kurse i kno i got skillz n real niggaz n niggets like u who help me continue fuck da hataz like virtue 2 name 1.....lol...nigga called me out 2 battle i answered n no replies ha ha pussy jus continue complainin behind ur screen u fake thug
thanx 4 da love niggaz n bitches(no disrespect 4 i love all my woman keep givin me yo feedback...peacce holla back 1 luv |
u should change ur name to raw skill lol
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fuckin hoes
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thanx kurse hey yo virtue shut up punk dont make me murder u in a lyrical n literal sense bitch u wanna battle quit bitchin n set it up otha than dat get da dick property of females only no niggaz u sill faggot dont u kno dick r 4 chicks....lmmao thanx 4 da love kurse
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rofl me battle you rofl u suck but i'll battle i'll set it up later
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only nigga i see suckin is u ridin my dick y u always gotta tlk shit 2 every1 who post u neva say nuttin positive ya fuckin head gased up nigga n aint a thug i saw ur confession bout dat so b smart keep ya mouth shut n quit poppin shit bitch got me
uppin dis shit people no ignorance or arogance aloud meanin u virtue n bitches like u honest n real opinion's niggaz not hatin peace out 1 luv holla back |
thug wtf u talkin bout i neva confessed to anything u fuckin retarded seriously
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yall need to stop hatin on shit, yo killa, dat shit was hot son, good structure and it did seem like u got some shit off yo chest and thats good dat u explained yoself wit dis, yo fuck da 7outa 10 imma giva u a 9, dat shit was raw keep postin dis shit, good piece
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virtue do i gotta quote ur post u made sayin in i kind da proof matta fact ima do it hold......thanx 4 da love nigga im gonna work on da verse now holla back
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yo check out my thing i jus put out on Open Mic its long as fuck but its tru feelins, iite 1 love
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^^wtf yall dont know shit it was wack i'll merk you to
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so im a fuckin liar u neva said shi thuh ha ha u fuckin white boy....yea i kno u white jus like me n mad cuz im betta than u i got a dirt now bitch say sumtin else b4 i son u faggot whinnin n shit cuz 2pacsgurl was wantin 2 join out crew n not urs punk ass pussy ayt emergin i will holla there's da proof virtue continues poppin shit like he tough n bout it yet Quote:
lmmao lmmao lol fuckin homo |
i aint a thug a thug is a petty criminal i'm a classy gangsta
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yo man virtue man jus shut da fuck up aint no1 tryin to hear shit from u, u aint a gangsta u aint a thug u a bitch, u aint shit, u talk big on da internet wen u behind a screen prolly a faggot ass punk who lives on dis shit so man get a fukin life, n ey raw killa, send me yo shit thru da private message thin dawg, man fuck dese hataz
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my words exactly fuck these hataz....lmmao ayt ima write it now
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iite dawg, holla at me
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lol u fuckin herbs make me laugh
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u make me laugh wit yo dumbness actin touch over da net
u said u set up lata da battle u so willin 2 do set it up n merk me nigga oh my bad wigga ill fuckin murder u dickless bitch uppin dis post 4 real feedback not haterism like da shit virtue droppin peace |
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