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Lekchur 08-03-04 05:40 PM

Lekchur vs Ruffridah187
 
Rules:
5 Bars - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Due In 25 Minutes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-03-04 at 06:40 PM

Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in.

Detrimental 08-03-04 05:47 PM

no recycling?????????????????????????????????????? :huh:

sorry i'm slow

Lekchur 08-03-04 05:48 PM

As In Retrieving Old Lines You've Used On Someone Else...

Detrimental 08-03-04 05:50 PM

ooooo ok....my bad....i should've thought about that a little longer :laugh:

Detrimental 08-03-04 05:51 PM

accepting the battle...would that be checking in?

System 08-03-04 06:12 PM

Lekchur has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 06:12 PM.

Lekchur 08-03-04 06:34 PM

Your Not A Soldier In Combat, But Your One I Send Bombs At
So Watch Me 'End Ruff Ryder' Like 'Cancelin Jins Contract'!
Yup, It Is Wrong That, I Slam Haters, Your A Damn Faker
Plus Ya Names 'Rough'?? Well Then I'll 'Grind' You Like 'Sand Paper'!
Your A Hand Raper, But Besides That I'll Give You Hell Action
Beat Lek? I'll 'Cut 187 Short' Like 'Watchin Half' Of 'Samuel L Jackson'!
Damn I Nail Facts In, And I Don't Need To Finish The Rest
Cuz Ima 'Drop Ruff Rider' Like 'Aggressive Bitches In Sex'!


**Bar 3: 187 Was A Movie Wit Samuel L**

System 08-03-04 06:38 PM

Ruffridah187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 06:38 PM.

Detrimental 08-03-04 06:41 PM

My rhymes picture perfect, spittin rhymes at you like it was urgent to throw your ass back up to the surface
You like a circus clown to me... i spit curses, my rhymes hit you harder than you could hit me with a million verses
Battlin you is worthless, you worse than people talkin about me ridin in the back of herses
You couldn't see me even if my name was in cursive letters underlined in 9 word searches
From what your names says i think you might "lekchur" me like a Reverund would about Satin in most churches
It's supposed to be me versus who, you...mayne i never even heard ya name, you come all hard like you got game
I'll fuckin blow out that "BLAZIN" flame you think you've had, but you don't cuz over you i have reign
Make you go crazy and give you stomach pains and have you shoot yourself like you was Kurt Cobain
I bet you sniff shit like salt thinkin it stimulates you like it was cocaine
I simulate myself to Suddam and question Husane with reign i have over you, use your name in vein and flush it all down the drains

Detrimental 08-03-04 06:48 PM

nice battle man :thumbup: ....Uppin

Myster.E 08-03-04 07:00 PM

Voted For: Lekchur

I give it to Lek I liked your punches and flow and creativity. Ruff was good also nice structure. return da fav. help me close this http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982

Lekchur 08-03-04 07:38 PM

1-0 Me........Uppin...............................

~Luciano~ 08-03-04 09:09 PM

Voted For: Ruffridah187



Your Not A Soldier In Combat, But Your One I Send Bombs At
So Watch Me 'End Ruff Ryder' Like 'Cancelin Jins Contract'!
7/10
Yup, It Is Wrong That, I Slam Haters, Your A Damn Faker
Plus Ya Names 'Rough'?? Well Then I'll 'Grind' You Like 'Sand Paper'!
5/10
Your A Hand Raper, But Besides That I'll Give You Hell Action
Beat Lek? I'll 'Cut 187 Short' Like 'Watchin Half' Of 'Samuel L Jackson'!
6/10
Damn I Nail Facts In, And I Don't Need To Finish The Rest
Cuz Ima 'Drop Ruff Rider' Like 'Aggressive Bitches In Sex'!
7/10


My rhymes picture perfect, spittin rhymes at you like it was urgent to throw your ass back up to the surface
You like a circus clown to me... i spit curses, my rhymes hit you harder than you could hit me with a million verses
Battlin you is worthless, you worse than people talkin about me ridin in the back of herses
You couldn't see me even if my name was in cursive letters underlined in 9 word searches
From what your names says i think you might "lekchur" me like a Reverund would about Satin in most churches
It's supposed to be me versus who, you...mayne i never even heard ya name, you come all hard like you got game
I'll fuckin blow out that "BLAZIN" flame you think you've had, but you don't cuz over you i have reign
Make you go crazy and give you stomach pains and have you shoot yourself like you was Kurt Cobain
I bet you sniff shit like salt thinkin it stimulates you like it was cocaine
I simulate myself to Suddam and question Husane with reign i have over you, use your name in vein and flush it all down the drains
^^^^^8/10

I gave this one 2 187 Due 2 better punches and wordplay

Detrimental 08-03-04 09:16 PM

1-1 Uppin

DeHotBwoy 08-03-04 10:26 PM

Voted For: Lekchur

gotta go wit ma Man Lekchur nice ass verse like the first line sikk you got good flow punches Personals ruffriday fix up ya structure u lacked good punchs Personals allright

Lekchur

Flow 6/10
Punches 7/10
Structure 5/10
Rhymez 6/10
24/40

Ruffridah187

Flow 4/10
Punches 5/10
Structur 3/10
Rhymez 4/10
16/40

V/Lek

Lekchur 08-04-04 04:25 AM

2-1............Uppin..............................

Lekchur 08-04-04 04:35 PM

2-1 Moi.....Uppity Up.............................

Ratbag 08-04-04 04:47 PM

This was feedback posted for Ruffridah187
 
Man dat wasnt a great battle but my heres my opinion anyway...

Lekchur-
Dat was Ok but ya need to make your rhymes clearer by gettin your structure improved. But the actual punchlines were good

Ratbag 08-04-04 04:51 PM

Sorry I wasnt finished. Anyway Lekchur I didnt get sum of thosepunchlines but it wasnt to bad.Oh, and lectures tend to be boring.

Rough-
Sum great punchlines and a tight structue made dat shit pretty dope. Gud peersonals as well and you did go by sum shit he said which was nice. One tiny flaw was only dat sum of the lines were a mouthful bybut dat wasnt much. Tight verse overall though homie.

Typical 08-04-04 05:24 PM

Voted For: Lekchur

didnt like ruffs punches plus lek got some ill personals in.
good multis ruff.

check my batlles n decide if ya wanit

Nynth Degree 08-04-04 05:35 PM

Voted For: Ruffridah187

This is one of those rare battles where punches didn't bring a victory. Lekchur had punches through his whole drop but Ruff had a much better style and awesome multis that stayed consistent. If any of you wanna battle sometime let me know.
Vote-Ruffridah187

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Lekchur 08-04-04 11:02 PM

Lmao...Aight 3-2 Me Uppin...Multies Beatin Punches?? That's Ludacris... :) ..Props Though Ruff...

TeamOne 08-04-04 11:16 PM

Voted For: Lekchur

damn, my vote explanation juss got deleted so i aint gonna spend as much time......... but Lekchur got this for his flow and punches......... and Lekchur should even be dg'd for writin too much....... no hate.......... but spread the love to my battles, especially the one fuxjustaword vs. nate

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ht=fuxjustaword

TeamOne 08-04-04 11:17 PM

i mean ruff should be dqd............................

DV8 08-04-04 11:54 PM

Voted For: Lekchur

clean..not a bad battle im giving this to leckur cause his structure was nice punches connected n flow was on point..no streted lines n he had original punches..overall your verse was a nicerread than"roughs"..rough try n cut your lines down so that there not as stretched as they are ..not bad punches but your flow n structure killed your verse...

return the vote asap..
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...979#post1465979


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