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Decree Wun vs for$aken
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6 - 10 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 08-10-04 at 12:14 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
For$akeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 04:26 PM.
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Decree Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 04:31 PM.
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For$akens Bad Day
shhhh....keep His loss "for$aken"My Heaters "nick" This Kid, Raise your body temp to "98 Degrees" Dismantle your legs, have you performin' from a wheel chair like christopher reids Claims Rich, But The Truth Comes Out In His Name, He Only Makes Four $ (for$aken) Detective? you can't even find your own identity like an unkown caller You Can tell He Still Misses Hwcs Cause he won't get out of our forum For$aken's the kind of kid that'll drop the soap on purpose out of boredome fuckin Geek, only time you merk katz is when your playin GTA (grand theft auto) Like A trained dog, you dont elevate, when i speak, this "bitch just stays" Jagged Objects Peirce into your arm like falling shattered Glass spit heat u goin no where in de rap game, like a family in the desert wit no gas i did this right now..im in the rapping mood today |
he needs to make a alias to get more respect and a better name for the simple fact that his rhymes are more played then ACCLAIM third tactiks as his title ya it's true he now has 3 damn users his lyrics never in his fuckin' life hit because he's no abuser he dies over and over again but comes back just like the SPAWN his new username is the only way this fake could think he "WUN"(won) he's a fuckin' herb but I guess he's way too ashamed to admit like his disease thats the only thing he will ever now transmit this kid's gonna get knocked out faster than his metabolism he acts all "native" but can't take all the damn "Chrit-icism" nothing left he can't even hear his voice if he ever shouts he doesn't have his "drop" in him like he "spit" it all out his lines are washed up... like he was a new version of cascade only reason he has twenty wins is because he has a lyrical "aid" bar 1: ACCLAIM is a game company bar 2: he has three usernames: Killah Bwoy, State Capitol & Decree Wun bar 5: Native is Chrit.....vets should know this fact.... |
well...considering it was only 10 LINES LOL..oh well i dont care..ill give u the 2 bars.....and yo forsaken can u drop a vote on my battle against Trigga...thanx
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^of course I will need money anyways :D^ |
Voted For: For$akeN
best opener and closing ha ha funny too... he needs to make a alias to get more respect and a better name for the simple fact that his rhymes are more played then ACCLAIM third tactiks as his title ya it's true he now has 3 damn users his lyrics never in his fuckin' life hit because he's no abuser ^ that could not be said any better lmfao... nice drop u came calm with a harder drop keep it up, for$aken.. peep my poem in my sig.. lol ~Lady Fiya~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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really I never looked at the rules I said in "The Audition" today I'm doing 14................................................ ................we can have a rematch tomorrow if you want??????????????? if i'm not staying at my cousins.... IN????? |
what in the hell..forsaken that isnt even a vote LOL..thaz prolly gettin dq'd...... :S she talked about u haha
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^ no i didn't what u talkin' about... For$aken had the best closer and opener, the nigga pretty much took it hands down, how are u startin' shit in ya battle forum, if you really want it DQ-ed then go for it, cuz for$aken killed you even though you had sum decent wordplay.. that's why i was laughin' keep up with your own battle, Killah, State Capitol, Decree Wun whoever thou art.. ha ha lmfao
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get that vote removed then I don't care... |
Voted For: For$akeN
Straight up I thought that forsaken won His verse was better in structure wordplay and punches and personals it was good Decree dont get me wrong your verse was good to but not as good ya know \ so my honest vote goes to forsaken Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
stop with these fuckin DR votes..............................
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m,y fault..not DR....... UNEXPLAINED VOTES.........
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This was feedback posted for Decree Wun
Decree... Nice opener! good structure throughout...loads of disses but very few personals (3rd bar was only personal)
rhymes were better overall didn't really like ya closer. Forsaken... had more personals but they shoulda hit harder. rhyme was ok but not enough to topple decree... structure coulda been a little better... there were a few filler lines that i didn't like... the cascade one and the "he's no abuser" line... they were pretty weak... closer battle than what it seems but vote goes to Decree.... if i had the 200 posts |
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This was feedback posted for For$akeN
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Voted For: Decree Wun
im gonna give this to decree wun even tho his verse was shorter i think he came harder n more direct. his metas were better n structure was better than Forsaken Forsaken started out ight but some of his metas got stretched n sound forced holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136344 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140333 |
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uppin ill return da fav..................................
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This was feedback posted for Decree Wun
Nice battle
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This was feedback posted for For$akeN
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Voted For: For$akeN
For$aken gets my vote on this one. He had stronger structure and better wordplay, but Decree's drop was hot too. I gotta say this was actually a close battle. But nice drop to both of you. Vote - For$aken Yo, return the favor y'all, honest votes only. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138941 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141609 |
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