Empire vs Spektikul
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No feeding
No Show is a lose :nono:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-20-04 at 10:40 AM

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Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 10:45 AM.

This subpar why come hard i wont take a loss to him
How you nice and spit tight you got more losses then wins(1)
This so absurb that a computer nerd think that he strong
You cant compute it stupid even spelled ya name wrong(2)
Ill manhandle you dismantle you first
Beat you blue and ''ONYX'' and proceed to 'SLAM'ya verse(3)
Now realize you can still die brains all over the pavement
Cuz ya flow so old unelvated like brokedown staircases
Learn ya places this faces of death for you lame crews
Cuz i dont see 'lethal instincks'(his crew)
more like 2 helpings of 'NYSYNCE'is what i see in you
3 on 2 or more like ya whole squad on one
Cuz it will take two sponsers and ya whole roosta
To get the job done
Lyrical you not real to me i consider you garbage
Ya whole crew after i run through you i consider you targets
Still waiting cant battle in elevated and you been here amonth
Not enuogh wins tough luck for him the nigga just sucks(fuck hes trash what more can i say lol)


1)hes2-3
2)he spelled spectikal wrong he spelled it spektikul
3)black is onyx and ill slam is verse metaphore line
4)his crew is lethal instinks

you know the line limits we had it up already my bad spit 10 -20 :thumbup:

Spektikul has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 12:26 AM.

I ain't fukkin around, I'll get right down to diss'in
I'll beat you in submission, while your punches thrown are miss'in
Now listen up dawg, you act like your the hottest, G
You might be called the Empire, but Im the dynasty
Callin my crew herbs, your the biggest herbs there are
Proud of it too, cause you rep it in your avatar
Can I see through the smoke? Only smoke I see is smokin you
Fuck you and the entire Pot Smokers Alliance too!
Our crew cut you when you tried out, the very first minute
The reason you don't like us, is causeyou ain't fucking in it
Admit it and tell me, you ain't gunna be bitter
Just follow Villagepimp, give up and be a quitter
Im talkin to you bitch, couldn't pimp a village if he tries
Only way its gettin pimped, if its a village full of guys
Co-leader spot is what he wanted, now im fukkin with his health
You couldn't lead a crew, if you were in one by yourself
Your spittin pre-writtin shit, can't hurt us like ours kid
From New York? Ill devour you harder than the Twin Towers did
In closing I'd like to say, that you fucked with the wrong people
You just got murdered, cause out Instinkz are Lethal...

Uppin this crew battle...GL Empire nice spit....lets get some votes ya'll

This was feedback posted for Spektikul
 

personally i think spek took this, not just cause im in his crew, because he came a lot harder, plus empires flow was off, spek had harder punches and empires sucked really...oh his record....when its actually 3-3...plus im pretty sure he meant to spell his name like that....spek wins in my opinion

just uppin this cause either of you are online and people are voting like mad it seems right now

Voted For: Spektikul

Punches=tie. Sceps was consistently average with a couple decent ones(Empire/dynasty one was nice) and Empire had a couple hard hitters, though he came weak in other parts of the verse(still the onyx/slam bar was off the heezy)

Wordplay=Empire. Once again that on with ONYX was cold.

Flow=Spek. Speaks for itself.

This is hard but I think I may have to go with Spec because he was more consistent and Empire fell off a certain parts of the freestyle.

Voted For: Empire

This subpar why come hard i wont take a loss to him
How you nice and spit tight you got more losses then wins(1)
/\...nice multies good opener

This so absurb that a computer nerd think that he strong
You cant compute it stupid even spelled ya name wrong(2)
/\...lol nice

Ill manhandle you dismantle you first
Beat you blue and ''ONYX'' and proceed to 'SLAM'ya verse(3)
/\...to me filler

Now realize you can still die brains all over the pavement
Cuz ya flow so old unelvated like brokedown staircases
/\...no rhyme but an ok punch would've worked better w/rhyme

Learn ya places this faces of death for you lame crews
Cuz i dont see 'lethal instincks'(his crew)
more like 2 helpings of 'NYSYNCE'is what i see in you
/\...need to make the bar clearer nearly missed the rhyme but an ok punch

3 on 2 or more like ya whole squad on one
Cuz it will take two sponsers and ya whole roosta
To get the job done
/\...nice pickin up again

Lyrical you not real to me i consider you garbage
Ya whole crew after i run through you i consider you targets
/\...not hott could be better

Still waiting cant battle in elevated and you been here amonth
Not enuogh wins tough luck for him the nigga just sucks(fuck hes trash what more can i say lol)
/\...ok closer again could've been better

Overall 6.5/10 Empire

I ain't fukkin around, I'll get right down to diss'in
I'll beat you in submission, while your punches thrown are miss'in
/\...weak punch multies but not feelin

Now listen up dawg, you act like your the hottest, G
You might be called the Empire, but Im the dynasty
/\...blah no punch and self glory

Callin my crew herbs, your the biggest herbs there are
Proud of it too, cause you rep it in your avatar
/\...better punch there

Can I see through the smoke? Only smoke I see is smokin you
Fuck you and the entire Pot Smokers Alliance too!
/\...1st line aight 2nd line could be better

Our crew cut you when you tried out, the very first minute
The reason you don't like us, is causeyou ain't fucking in it
/\...ok not bad

Admit it and tell me, you ain't gunna be bitter
Just follow Villagepimp, give up and be a quitter
/\...off point aimin @ vill but an average punch

Im talkin to you bitch, couldn't pimp a village if he tries
Only way its gettin pimped, if its a village full of guys
/\...used another guys name to diss him mo a diss to VP

Co-leader spot is what he wanted, now im fukkin with his health
You couldn't lead a crew, if you were in one by yourself
/\...ok punch

Your spittin pre-writtin shit, can't hurt us like ours kid
From New York? Ill devour you harder than the Twin Towers did
/\...NOT FEELIN NEVER TALK BOUT THE TOWERS STILL A SORE SUBJECT IN MANY HEARTS

In closing I'd like to say, that you fucked with the wrong people
You just got murdered, cause out Instinkz are Lethal...
/\...self glory blah closer

Overall 3.5/10 (The towers line hurt ur verse mainly)

RTF on ma sig.....................................

This was feedback posted for Spektikul
 

nice verse spek ! you merced the fuk outta that punk ! good luck, you;ll only lose if he gets his crew on his dick.

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uppin on this battle ya'll dont sleep.............

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppin

Voted For: Empire

Empire took it, he had batter flow, alot better punches......I like also the personals he used...Empire i seen you came along way since you battled me......i like it, good job!

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Voted For: Empire

Empire wins this battle by a little bit bcuz he had better punches. The structure was kind of stretched n the attempts at multies werent all that great but overall his punches hit harder
spektikul had the best personal in the battle>
(Callin my crew herbs, your the biggest herbs there are
Proud of it too, cause you rep it in your avatar)
but other than that he kind of fell off for the rest of the battle tho
holla at me
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142873
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136344

Yo...upping once again for some honest votes on this crew battle Ya'll...

Voted For: Empire

1st of all

to all the MC's: THREATS AREN'T PUNCHES!!!!!!!!!!

"I'll beat you in submission" was said by Spek
flow was off and so was structure was sad and made me cry

Empire's was pretty good with wordplay
and flow wsa good, wasn't feelin the struc,
but with the new RV i didnt worry about that

so vote goes to E

~1~

whatever man...you'd really know what a punch is with a record of 0-0, nm...thanks for the feed i guess...

Voted For: Empire

man this was very good on both sides.. but my man empire gets it... he had nice punches
so did spek but he concentrated more on persanols.
punch-empire he had better ones that were funnier and made more sense.
meta- neither i didnt get a good feel on either side
multis- empire had some they werent tha best but skep aint have none
structure- tie they both were redible
persanols- skep u had nothin but persanols man nice work
flow- bothe were kinda off


man that was good emp u get it majoritie of tha factors
skep u were going against empire u talked shit to sum one else at tha end come on
no hate return tha favors

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppin

Voted For: Empire

Skeptikal had a nice verse, good structure, nice wordplay, some punchlines that hit a little too, no real vocab but some good content, more entertaining to read, i give him a 7/10

empires verse was ok, nice rhymes ok structure, punches lacked a little, could of thought longer on those, no real personals, no real vocab, so based off punches you get 4/10

in all, skeptikal had a better verse, more conntent and punchlines that made me laugh..


Fixed

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this nigga spek had no punches and his strture is wrecked dr vote but who cares upppppppppppppppppppin so i can finish this nigga and his bitch ass can stop reopening it

Voted For: Spektikul

VOTE SPEK

HARDER PUNCHES AND HARDER PERSONALS

I just wanst feelin empires shit, he has done way better and should have tried instead of being like

This subpar why come hard i wont take a loss to him
How you nice and spit tight you got more losses then wins(1)
That was wack and you should have tried harder

SPEK
Our crew cut you when you tried out, the very first minute
The reason you don't like us, is causeyou ain't fucking in it

That was dope i seen some of that shit a lil bit back but it was funny and you had a better verse full of better dissing and wordplay


VOTE SPEK

uppin again on this battle, plz leave honest votes/feed.....

Voted For: Spektikul

spektikul:
i didnt like ur opener. but tha second line was hot.
ur flow was on track.

"Our crew cut you when you tried out, the very first minute
The reason you don't like us, is causeyou ain't fucking in it"
funny...

empire:
ur flow was off but i liked ur opener
personels:tie
flow:spektikul
punches:spektikul
wordplay:tied
content:tied

u guys both needed to b more original but it was aight
spektikul gets tha vote.

lookin 4 votes on these:
ice pick vs typical
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143470
typical vs sinister
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142217
intensify effect vs typical
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140295
thanx
no hate jus honest voting

honest vote here
no hate
flow/empire
punches/empire
strcuture/empie
wordplay/spek
closer/empire

winner/empire

THAT's my vote

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143096

^return the favor on that plz,, and plz plz plz no hate
cuz dey jus gon be removed
~1~

Voted For: Empire



I ain't fukkin around, I'll get right down to diss'in
I'll beat you in submission, while your punches thrown are miss'in
5/10
Now listen up dawg, you act like your the hottest, G
You might be called the Empire, but Im the dynasty
4/10
Callin my crew herbs, your the biggest herbs there are
Proud of it too, cause you rep it in your avatar
4/10
Can I see through the smoke? Only smoke I see is smokin you
Fuck you and the entire Pot Smokers Alliance too!
4/10
Our crew cut you when you tried out, the very first minute
The reason you don't like us, is causeyou ain't fucking in it
4/10
Admit it and tell me, you ain't gunna be bitter
Just follow Villagepimp, give up and be a quitter
5/10
Im talkin to you bitch, couldn't pimp a village if he tries
Only way its gettin pimped, if its a village full of guys
4/10
Co-leader spot is what he wanted, now im fukkin with his health
You couldn't lead a crew, if you were in one by yourself
4/10
Your spittin pre-writtin shit, can't hurt us like ours kid
From New York? Ill devour you harder than the Twin Towers did
4/10
In closing I'd like to say, that you fucked with the wrong people
You just got murdered, cause out Instinkz are Lethal...
4/10
Your punches were hella played and ya wordplay wasent really on point you could of dropped alot harder with the wordplay and punches would of hit harder

This subpar why come hard i wont take a loss to him
How you nice and spit tight you got more losses then wins
5/10(1)
This so absurb that a computer nerd think that he strong
You cant compute it stupid even spelled ya name wrong
6/10(2)
Ill manhandle you dismantle you first
Beat you blue and ''ONYX'' and proceed to 'SLAM'ya verse
7/10(3)
Now realize you can still die brains all over the pavement
Cuz ya flow so old unelvated like brokedown staircases
5/10
Learn ya places this faces of death for you lame crews
Cuz i dont see 'lethal instincks'(his crew)
more like 2 helpings of 'NYSYNCE'is what i see in you
6/10
3 on 2 or more like ya whole squad on one
Cuz it will take two sponsers and ya whole roosta
To get the job done
5/10
Lyrical you not real to me i consider you garbage
Ya whole crew after i run through you i consider you targets
6/10
Still waiting cant battle in elevated and you been here amonth
Not enuogh wins tough luck for him the nigga just sucks(fuck hes trash what more can i say lol)
5/10
Ya punches were played also and didnt come off hard but u got the win with an overall better drop than your opponent

Both can elevate


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