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j_da_monsta vs MR. ZACHY DOOM
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j_da_monsta has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 08:46 PM.
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Imma "beat this kid" and it should be abuse//
Cause he hide behind "white sheets" like David Duke// But it's O.K. if you sleep on that nigga named James// When you awake, my gun is bound to have you dead in it's aim// You just wanna die slow.....try to push me bloke// I'll put the "metal to your chest" like a stethiscope// Your no killa......just punk kid without a backbone// Cause your raps "suck more ass" than a vacuum near a butthole// Bullets riddle your mans.....and the pumps sure to smash ya shit// I'll "crush this craka" and leave nothing but crumbs of ritz bitz// Racist piece of trailer trash. |
MR. ZACHY DOOM has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 03:49 AM.
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So listen up, i've got some shit to say
You niggas fucking diss on me, saying that im gay Well i'm here, to put an end to this mess Confess, that you lied or i'll put you to rest They say the end is near, but i dont believe it's true I really hope i'm right, 'cause if i'm wrong, then i'm screwed but not because i've messed up, i've kept up pretty good but my relationship with God is nonexistant unlike it should so if the end is near, and the world comes to a hault i'll probably burn hell, and it'll all be my fault so i pray, some day, my eyes will be opened, and i will say, "im sorry jesus, for ever doubting you, but you know i'm only human, and that's what humans do, And sure it's no excuse, but i didn't want to lose, i'm sorry for ever trading you in for my muse" Wow, well, i must've got off track, but fuck "battle raps" I'm through with verbal "caps" So i guess, this is goodbye to defaming, the "game" is always and forever tainted by my name, and even if, it's in the smallest way, at least some of you recognize the battle that's been played. yeah.. |
the commas are where the pauses are.
and this DOES flow, i know because i had a beat in the background and rapped to it. |
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hahah that was pretty good. you actually kept up a rhyme scheme, nice job. NIGGER! :thumbup: |
Voted For: j_da_monsta
Um, Zachy Doom just did a damn topical, so this is no contest. |
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Get some votes in this mutha fucka!!! |
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Let's get some votes already!!!! |
Voted For: j_da_monsta
hers your vote........................................ |
Voted For: MR. ZACHY DOOM
Vote: Mr Zachy Doom Lyrics: Mr Zavhy doom jus took it wit a few extra mo complex licks. but it was close Multies: Zachy Doom had bloads of multies and made his flow sick Structure: j-da-monster had better structure and it was mo formal makin it weasier to follo and spit! Overall: hectic battle but i fel zachy doom took it Check my battles: Elusiv G vs. Mc Merc elusiv G vs. Invader_ZIM |
Voted For: j_da_monsta
hey zachy...wat tha fuk r u talkin about monsta had betta flow funny punches thas not for battles zachy u should know better flow...j punches...j personels...j metas...j multi...doom zachy went way off track. but i guess racist never know was goin on |
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Come on let's get some votes so I can close this damn battle aiight!!!
Get some votes people. |
Voted For: j_da_monsta
iight i didnt even have ta read "i da monstas" cuz listen kid this is a battle not a curch seminar(hah)mr zachy doom talked about jesus and god and thas coo but they dont call it a battle for nuthin u gotta come at ya opponent hard and buss on em not say ya religeous and shit sry no hate but i da monsta gets da vote not jus cuz he wasnt rappin on topic but cuz ya lines was iight and ya flo was nice jus a wrd of advice dont use da wrd bloke this aint england iight but u still nice dawg im out peace vote= i da monsta |
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Please help close this battle!! |
Voted For: j_da_monsta
da monsta gets mah vote....more complex..and hit harder..../mr urs was not as hard just elevate a lil and u ll be good.... plz return favor \/\/ |
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