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Tha End vs Untraceable
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-07-04 at 02:49 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Untraceable has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-04-04 03:49 PM.
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they call me untraceable but your name is eraseable and replaceable placeable acts of Tha End from back in august but he's uncapeable* unescapable moves cuz your a pawn on the board bout to be defeated greeted to a suprise causin ya demise cuz ya aint winin if ya pleaded treated with no respect but what, do you expect me to not hit directly especially when im textually better and youngin's not gettin it in sexually your crusin for a bruisin and im causin contusions now thats my Final Solution* juicein for the last drop and usin it for energy so i can destroy like pollution *play on his name and he signed up in aug *play on his Rapper name |
Tha End has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-04-04 08:15 PM.
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how bout 6-20 man not no 6-10 .........................
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alright heres my drop u better drop ur shit and not flake out
forensic science cant break my raps neither can ur crap hes an untraceable queer cuz i just worked magic and made him disappear he gets a pair of timberlands and starts rappin remember man before this what happened rode up beside him put this nine through is ride and he cant catch me hes ridin in a ford chevy thats an 83' try in find me wit ur tweezers and ur microscope hide them 12 year old hoes r.kelly and hide that k.y jelly here comes the Po to get ur ass and its not a felony synthesize my verbz to create mad chemicalz use em gainst this bitch cuz hes too cynical bastard hes hagard and withered from raps i splurred from my aggressive voice dude your gayness isnt hereditary its a choice a frenzy of rap hardness bout to begin see u cant stop me cuz im on fire and ur expiration date is 2 years expired heat came tha day u dropped by wearin wires u damn snitch bitch turned to snitchin cuz he gots a clit and cant rip gotta be a hoe if his first name is Jane and last is Doe rolled over u in this battle so take ur shitty ass back to herdin cattle |
uppin for some votes cmon peepz dont sleep on this
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damn dude u didnt even wait till i said yes or no to the 6-20 lines...........idk if ill be a bitch about it or not.......we'll see i leave it go for now :thumbup:
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This was feedback posted for Untraceable
iight this was a differn't battle..i'mma admitt....ya text is really small....but yea i'm just gonna post feeeback.....i think that you got it tho..
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Voted For: Untraceable
ok my vote goes to Untraceable.... an ok verse here...... most of it was basic..... just plain rhymes schemes... nothing special..... tha end...... your shits way to simple man.... elevate..... and you guys both need to get some wordplay going..... read through the tutorials.... the do help vote..... untracable Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
return the favour aight and drop a vote on the battle in my sig ok.. :thumbup:
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uppin for some votes..............................
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Voted For: Untraceable
man u took dis battle away da otha dudes verse had no structa and he had no punches and half da time it aint even rhyme...damn!!!!!!u took dis one..holla Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin lets see some more votes on this battle...... :thumbup:
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Voted For: Tha End
Wow that first guy, never explain your punches again. It's herbish. Also wtf @ second guy doing twice as many lines? 6-10 lines... So I vote first guy. .................................................. .................................................. ............... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
hmm im the first guy so why did you vote for tha end?? :huh: ....and plus i explained them cuz they were personals......so that way you understand it...... :thumbup:
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Voted For: Untraceable
I Vote for Untaceable Bcuz First of all he folowed the rules It was 12 lines not 12 bars And His stucture and vocab and multi's basically everything was a lil more betta than The End's Verse and His Personals were Good Next Time Tha end You Have to read The rules U Betta Hope Strobe dont See that you broke battle rules or you will have an automatic lost Stay Up N Safe ************************************************** ****************************************** Please return the favor......I prefer My battle Against Yung~Deedz ( Please vote in that one first ) Bcuz I Need that easy ass Win ***But Vote honestly*** And check out my battle against warrior it was to easy Thanx ************************************************** ****************************************** |
Voted For: Untraceable
this was close but weak.both of u can rhyme.untracable had mad nice multis and tha end has a good flow.but what u two lacked was dissing your opponent with humor and being direct with it.u have to connect punches as well if u want it to be really good.untracable gets my vote cuz he just came harder and he was consistent with his vers eand had slightly better punches RETURN THE FAVOR IN MY SIG THX |
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Voted For: Untraceable
A'ight...this was no contest. Untraceable actually had some punches and a rhyme scheme...Tha End had attempted punches but they all failed. No hate, dawg, just elevate. Is there really any more reason to break that down? Return the favor honestly please. Battle: 9th Degree Topical: Metaskriptz Wack Battle aka Waste of Time: stg |
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Voted For: Untraceable
Untraceable: decent battle here from you...punches were kinda hard hitting structure was decent plus the flow of it was nice.. you had a pretty decent persona's there..but overall you had a nice drop..keep doing ya thing here Tha End: you had a decent drop too..but u went way over the line limit...punchess werent really there & ur flow needs improving...didnt see no wp's or persona's...but overall elevate a little more here tho... RTF Untraceable http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=168429 ^Leave An Explained Vote Please... |
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Voted For: Untraceable
aight this was a good battle overall...Un took da structure in dis battle.It was hard to read Ends shit...Punches go both wayz.They were decent but i felt both need to elavate on those so i didnt give it to no one.Flow goes to Tha End it was alright so dont get cocky.Vocab was aight from Unand End had bad vocab.Personals go to UN he had betta ones and Ends where pretty good but not enuff. ^^...nuff siad... v/Untraceable http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=168722 ^^Return da favor |
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